Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Zed
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Aug 31, 2009 5:42 PM #481446
You can still do a step forward. It was just the second step that I felt was unnecessary. Also, you can start the reaction hand higher (that's the one not punching).
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Aug 31, 2009 6:27 PM #481463
ok ill do that thanx again Zed
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Aug 31, 2009 7:16 PM #481494
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I think that i should have bended the back more at the ending. Ill fix that later

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and am I ready to leave beginners ?
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Aug 31, 2009 7:42 PM #481511
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I think that i should have bended the back more at the ending. Ill fix that later

CnC

and am I ready to leave beginners ?


Lol no. Running was stiff. Animations need more easing. When the stick bend down his limb shaked alot.
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Aug 31, 2009 7:48 PM #481515
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I think that i should have bended the back more at the ending. Ill fix that later

CnC

and am I ready to leave beginners ?


I think it's pretty nice, but the run is completely uneased.

And I'm not good enough to tell if you're ready.
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Aug 31, 2009 9:13 PM #481582
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I think that i should have bended the back more at the ending. Ill fix that later

CnC

and am I ready to leave beginners ?


It's up to you really. On that animation, the run could possibly use one extra frame at full extension just for easing and stuff and the base stick could have extended his arms towards where he was hit from after he was kicked to reduce stiffness, but it really wasn't bad. If you create an animation which you think is pretty good then post it outside the beginners section and I think you'll be fine. If you make one which isn't as good as you think you're capable of then either don't post it at all or just stick it in here incase someone picks up on something you hadn't noticed.
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Aug 31, 2009 10:05 PM #481646
I was told to do easeing tests and other stuff before i get into effects and fights
so here they r...
tell me where i went wrong so i can fix it =\
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Aug 31, 2009 10:10 PM #481652
That easing is perfect. There is nowhere you can improve on that. At the absolute most if I had to pick something I'd say take out the frame on the spinning one where it's directly down, but just to see how it looks.

Now let's see if you can apply it. Try making a bounce animation.
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Aug 31, 2009 10:10 PM #481653
Image ok guys correct this till is crap and i used pivot version 2.2.5 i think i do better wit this version so plz correct oh and i need help with saving with version 2.2.5 also guys
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Aug 31, 2009 10:13 PM #481656
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That easing is perfect. There is nowhere you can improve on that. At the absolute most if I had to pick something I'd say take out the frame on the spinning one where it's directly down, but just to see how it looks.

Now let's see if you can apply it. Try making a bounce animation.

alrite thnx xD
im gunna try the bounce right now
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Aug 31, 2009 10:27 PM #481674
Hey Zed, hows this ;o
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Aug 31, 2009 11:09 PM #481687
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Hey Zed, hows this ;o
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That is, i'd have to say perfect. That is one of the best i've seen for a while.
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Aug 31, 2009 11:54 PM #481707
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That is, i'd have to say perfect. That is one of the best i've seen for a while.


yay :Smile: thnx
gunna practice a little bit more, then edit my first animation to see if i can fix it up
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Sep 1, 2009 12:11 AM #481719
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Hey Zed, hows this ;o
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Its pretty good, but not perfect, try using a higher framerate and putting in more frames, it will look smoother.

If you have trouble making a .gif at say 33 fps ,then save the animation as seperate bitmap images, and ill turn it into an .swf which will play at 33 fps.
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Sep 1, 2009 2:29 AM #481798
heres another run test ^_^(9th one :3)
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