Quote from Setto

I think you should have eased the fall and made him stand and stuff, but that looks good lol
Just keep practicing you'll be a great animator maybe =3

im not sure 'maybe' will encourage him to improve.


oh yeah, 100019200211 , (or what ur name is :D) Those legs are just in the wrong position, i never seen a pivot animator have done something (thats bad) like this.

fix it. :)

And the legs when the wolf was running it looked weird.
maybe try practicing with a simple stick figure. {with feet}

I dont know what you mean about the legs, it's supposed to look like a wolf :P
But still, his RHG is a human/wolf, thats his special mode, so he still has practice with the reg stick

Quote from Setto

I dont know what you mean about the legs, it's supposed to look like a wolf :P
But still, his RHG is a human/wolf, thats his special mode, so he still has practice with the reg stick

oh, i didint know a wolf's leg is supposed to be like tht. D:

The basic movement is there. You just need to add more frames and slow it down a bit. I would accentuate the arm movement too. Even if it wouldn't be much more than that in real life, in animation you want to make everything clear for the viewer.

Quote from Zed

The basic movement is there. You just need to add more frames and slow it down a bit. I would accentuate the arm movement too. Even if it wouldn't be much more than that in real life, in animation you want to make everything clear for the viewer.

You mean how he does the arms sanik style?

Sorry, I was a little drunk and I ended up on the wrong page of the thread. I was talking about the walk, and the newer stuff is better. But the arms on the runs (I assume that's what you mean by "sanik style"?) are definitely wrong. Arms that go straight back on a run always look awful and should never be attempted.

This is my second animation! http://imgur.com/YvTkbA6
it is a fighter taking on a bunch of guys at once!

Lol, cant exactly give CnC on that, but It's cool :)
You should have made a crack in the wall wherever it hit though >_>
@Zed
Yeah, like when you put your arms back when running, like sonic does :P

Foot placement man.
Plus don't randomly change The bg

I'd say the background change was ok, it added the needed emphasis.

well i guess it was ok there, but dont do it randomly lol