Ok here is a movie i am doing i plan on puttin it in flash when i get done with it to add music but newayz ive choosen a name for my stick which is Viral.
Newayz i know that the text is to fast and right now i dont have time to fix it but if neone can help me with the tv effect it'd be great as its supposed to be the flipping of a channel. And im sure most of u have seen my work like Rusender and kitsune kid and death wish and it's pretty crappy right now so if any of you guys have any more tips on smoothness, or recoil from gunshots please tell me know so i can practice it before i put it in my lil film cause i really wanna start practicing some nore advanced stuff like blood, and beams, Explosions. etc...
Edit: oh and credits to droidz for the stuff im utilizing for this lil project
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Quote from molestargazer

Thanks :D

I'll spend a bit more time on the punches - although it was meant to be a push. It would look better with a punch though.

Aah.. the cliff.. I didn't notice that! It must have been from when I was fiddling about - I was trying to move the stickman around and I must've clicked the cliff by mistake. Version 3 coming up sometime soon! Although I might have to go.

Thank you :cool:

EDIT: Here's Version 3. To be honest, I really don't like thie version. I think the punch was OK, but the rest of it seems far too choppy and he flips too much.

I think the fall in your last version was better, is that the same animation? Next try to get your punching stickman crouch with his feet a little. And if you wanted the blood, put some on the cliff at the same place where the falling stickman hits the wall. You should know that, but I said it.

And to the animations on top of the page, they are choppy, and the second one is way too slow.

XQZ, I reccomend you make it faster in terms of the flicking off. Text needs to go slower.

Well.. here we go.. Version 4!!

I've tried to:
- Make the puncher fade in and fade out after watching the '1337' tutorial recently posted :p
- Improve the punch by making it a bit quicker
- Put gravity in
- Make the fall more realistic.

I think it may still be a bit too jerky on the fall, though :(

I've not put blood in, as I'm not sure how. Would it be just as I did it before, with more blood coming out and with a smear being left on the cliff?

Comments please.



Thanks!
Mole

so you kno i made the bird myself

lol, thats taken my breath away, i love it man
for the idea

is that sarcasm or am i getting better

So I was just playing around, and I came up with this. Yes, the blood's awful. Yes, it's jerky. Yes, the 'owned' text doesn't come up for long enough.

But, meh, I don't care :P

Looks bad, really. And the blood is jerky. The version 4 of falling animation is better than this.
And for the falling, the fall looks better, but its too slow. Try getting it faster. And the punch was very quick. There is something odd in the landing of the punching stickman... I think slowing it down, and getting him crouch more would help it.

Bah!
To be honest, I don't think I have the heart to make Version 5. I'm going to have to come up with a new idea that will test my skills in another way..

Thanks tons for the comments though - they really help.

Quote from Gongiar

is that sarcasm or am i getting better

getting a little better

dang i suck at piv me newb :)

A new piv i made from a tut and yes i know its a loop,

good good good way better then i could do