Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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michaelio

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Jul 1, 2008 5:56 PM #173671
this is me, me like naruto. get used to it or GTFO. thank you and here is my anim.
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Jul 1, 2008 8:11 PM #173784
http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm250/austynbeatu07/animation1.gif


this is my first real piv please tell me how you like it :)
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Jul 1, 2008 9:57 PM #173895
All right, the first animation is good, but its not realistic. Like how the gian got cut in half by a hat, that cannot happen in real life. Even if it is supposed to be Naruto, people don't get cut in half by a hat. Work on walking and moving more then 1 stick at a time.

The 2nd animatation is choppey, its also poorly done. Pivot animations need time to work on. Remember that. Work on easing, moving, realistics, phyics, effects, all that.

How is my animation.

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I know the kick sucks. I might re-upload it without the kick.
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Jul 1, 2008 10:27 PM #173935
The kick doesn't suck. Although, the legs aren't supposed to spread apart though, don't slide them, keep at least one foot in the same place always.

Btw, do you like this? I think I am good enough to post in the forum,but I didn't think making a new thread would be a good idea.

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Jul 1, 2008 10:32 PM #173942
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The kick doesn't suck. Although, the legs aren't supposed to spread apart though, don't slide them, keep at least one foot in the same place always.

Btw, do you like this? I think I am good enough to post in the forum,but I didn't think making a new thread would be a good idea.

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Very good, very smooth. Speaking about the kick I am going to edit it to make it more of a heeldrop insted of a kick. I think the same thing but, people tell you that you suck until your vets. I am staying with eztoons now. Just like Lone Wolf.
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Jul 1, 2008 10:37 PM #173953
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Please rate,a punch of mine made in 5 minutes,not my best,but I think it's ok.
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Jul 1, 2008 10:41 PM #173962
Don't make the legs slide, one foot will always be in the same place, then your leg pivots around it. In real life people don't slide their foot backward to move forward.

Btw, how are you posting here if your banned... :]
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Jul 1, 2008 10:48 PM #173966
Its a good punch if its your first, and as Dax said don't make the leg slide. You might want to try this

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And you might want to try the tutorial (NOT MINE) Here

Btw, how are you posting here if your banned... :]


It's his user title, like how mine is "Don't underestimate luck" but you proboley know that already

Also we would know if he was banned if he had no sig.
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Jul 1, 2008 11:09 PM #173986
It's his user title, like how mine is "Don't underestimate luck" but you proboley know that already

Also we would know if he was banned if he had no sig.


I know, I was being sarcastic, hence the ":)"
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Jul 1, 2008 11:30 PM #174005
Quote from luckyjoe
Its a good punch if its your first, and as Dax said don't make the leg slide. You might want to try this

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And you might want to try the tutorial (NOT MINE) Here



It's his user title, like how mine is "Don't underestimate luck" but you proboley know that already

Also we would know if he was banned if he had no sig.


He rather not. People please don't teach other people if you haven't gotten a grasp of the thing your teaching yourself. P

Gunned Stick. The punch was ok it seemed to have enough force so thats a good thing , but the legs froze after the punch , and you should make him bend his legs next time , Also when the punching arm went back down you should have made it bend when going down , would look much better , and waaaaaaay more realistic.
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Jul 1, 2008 11:50 PM #174022
Thanks,I'm editing that Pivot right now.
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Jul 3, 2008 1:17 AM #175052
Kame-Hame-HA!!!!!!!




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Jul 3, 2008 2:46 AM #175110
.... to choopy effects suck
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Jul 3, 2008 3:17 AM #175137
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please comment
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Jul 3, 2008 1:57 PM #175572
Hi I'm new, and this is my animation ^^ I made it just for fun :heh:
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