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Jul 21, 2007 4:12 AM #46758
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I punch Tested. Don't bother C&Cing after the punch. I know I f*ed it up.
Erm..The black guy is really really hard to move? ^^;
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Jul 21, 2007 4:52 AM #46760
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why will no one comment on this plz comment
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Cuz it sucks and no one wants to except for me. courtesy?
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Jul 21, 2007 5:02 AM #46761
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Well, its quite choppy and easing must be applied. Don't make random people fly in. It looks nooby.
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Jul 21, 2007 5:45 AM #46763
uh its pretty choppy... and real stiff. looks like stick figures (not wut ur goin 4)
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Jul 21, 2007 6:01 AM #46764
here's my latest piv animation. i still lack many things but i like it.

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/6660/swordtq0.gif

and yes i know the whole thing with the sword flipping in the air the first time is bad and the other guy standing still. but i dont care.

rate and comment.
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Jul 21, 2007 6:01 AM #46766
that animation bob190 sucks!
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Jul 21, 2007 6:01 AM #46765
here's my latest piv animation. i still lack many things but i like it.

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/6660/swordtq0.gif

and yes i know the whole thing with the sword flipping in the air the first time is bad and the other guy standing still. but i dont care.

rate and comment.
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Jul 21, 2007 6:14 AM #46767
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here's my latest piv animation. i still lack many things but i like it.

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/6660/swordtq0.gif

and yes i know the whole thing with the sword flipping in the air the first time is bad and the other guy standing still. but i dont care.

rate and comment.

Why the hell did you post the exact same thing 2 post up......Noobert. Work on basics like walking and running and jumping and punching and kicking. No more swords until your better.
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Jul 21, 2007 6:17 AM #46768
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Why the hell did you post the exact same thing 2 post up......Noobert. Work on basics like walking and running and jumping and punching and kicking. No more swords until your better.


You sure are one to talk. Shit. You must've been desperate for insults too.

And you obviously think you know everything there is to know.

I USED SWORDS WHEN I WAS A NUB. DON'T TELL PEOPLE ABOUT THE WEAPONS THEY CAN AND CAN'T USE.

kthx

And the animation was not very smooth, and needs a bit more easing in places. There was some major stiffness too. Be sure to use sticks with backbone segments.
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Jul 21, 2007 6:23 AM #46769
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You sure are one to talk. Shit. You must've been desperate for insults too.

And you obviously think you know everything there is to know.

I USED SWORDS WHEN I WAS A NUB. DON'T TELL PEOPLE ABOUT THE WEAPONS THEY CAN AND CAN'T USE.

kthx

And the animation was not very smooth, and needs a bit more easing in places. There was some major stiffness too. Be sure to use sticks with backbone segments.

Wow, sorry. I'm just trying to help, I made an animation with a sword when I was pretty bad at animating and someone told me not to use weapons and I got better allot faster so thats why I told him.
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Completely failed animation. Continue or end? What could be fixed?
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Jul 21, 2007 6:59 AM #46772
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Wow, sorry. I'm just trying to help, I made an animation with a sword when I was pretty bad at animating and someone told me not to use weapons and I got better allot faster so thats why I told him.
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Completely failed animation. Continue or end? What could be fixed?

Erm. Realistic note: the red guy wasn't mad really. He was just "goin w/ the flow" or sumthin. Don't ask me how to fix that cuz I have no idea.

When a guy isn't fighting, don't just make them scenery or something. Still make then m ove a little. i.e. tapping their foot, looking at watch etc.

Put more force into those actions! Don't be afraid to bend the back!

Note: Although you can still work on them, your movements are much better ^^

Edit: Something I just noticed. A guy didn't fall all the way down. Was that on purpose?
Edit2: maybe just a style thing, but I don't like how it's all straight back, or bent back (mainly), or SLIGHTLY forward. Might wanna mix that around.
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Jul 21, 2007 7:01 AM #46773
fine w/e wut rank am i

http://img329.imageshack.us/my.php?image=silowithshotgunhl7.gif

kinda just whipped it together...
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Jul 21, 2007 7:03 AM #46774
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fine w/e wut rank am i

http://img329.imageshack.us/my.php?image=silowithshotgunhl7.gif

kinda just whipped it together...

Did you save it right? It looks REALLY slow to me. Other than that it looks okay. I'd say borderline med beginner/med med beginner.
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Jul 21, 2007 7:05 AM #46775
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Wow, sorry. I'm just trying to help, I made an animation with a sword when I was pretty bad at animating and someone told me not to use weapons and I got better allot faster so thats why I told him.
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Completely failed animation. Continue or end? What could be fixed?


lol its funny. but the red guy shouldnt bend his back like that without steppin back and the green guy should move his legs more when he picks up the guy and feeds him to the red guy
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Jul 21, 2007 7:12 AM #46777
Yea I know its not great but Its just something that I tried to look good and it failed miserably. I'm going to try again but something not as hard to do.
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