There's so much going on it's hard to cc it all without missing something. The guy wiggling his leg around at the start is uneased. So are the people doing the crazy shaky stuff with their hands. I think they'd be better with smoother and better defined movements so people can see what's going on. The foot placement's off on the running guy upstairs. It's sometimes hard to tell how people are moving like the guy on the stairs for instance. The person who drops down from above to below needs to follow through that movement more. I think you've managed well considering how many things are moving at once, now just try watching each man individually and editing him to make him perfect.

thanks for the help, I know it wasn't good but its hard to know whats wrong with what :/
it sucks because I forgot to ease for like, 50frames after this so im pretty much screwed. it is so hard. crap.
ill try, but i just made the little guys in the corner shake their hands so i wouldn't have to spend so much time on them :/
now my whole anim just looks n00bish. no joke.its sooooo stiff, choppy, unsmooth everything bad. take a look


and its not even near finished. ****...

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thanks for the help, I know it wasn't good but its hard to know whats wrong with what :/
it sucks because I forgot to ease for like, 50frames after this so im pretty much screwed. it is so hard. crap.
ill try, but i just made the little guys in the corner shake their hands so i wouldn't have to spend so much time on them :/
now my whole anim just looks n00bish. no joke.its sooooo stiff, choppy, unsmooth everything bad. take a look


and its not even near finished. ****...

I thought you said you were gonna work on running O.o....
The fade effect isn't gonna get you anywhere lol...
I started out using that effect to lol

Also, those two guys who opened the door, the one on the right made me laugh so hard...
It's like he ran to the pillar, stopped, and ran back for a stick I guess....

;596002']nubs, thats what i call them...

How Do you make projectiles? I must know! Are you on pivot 2? I must know!


How Do you make projectiles? I must know! Are you on pivot 2? I must know![quote]

How do you remove it from .gif?

haha thanks teriya!
but it really really just looks terrible. look at my signature! its pretty good, its a bit stiff but not bad for a beginner. annnnnd then the animation i posted has like, no easing. and whats worse is its near impossible to change it because then I have to redo EVERYONE elses moves as well. And that is just really really tough. I think i better start over or do a more epic one-on-one fight :/

@Mikester, you don't. not as far as I know of. You have to get the guy to post a download link, and unless you can get hold of him, your not going to get them. and those spike thingys? dude seriously?
get Actual Transparency Window, then USE it, get a picture on the net of a "projectile" you want in Pivot, then TRACE IT.

if you do not know how to make sticks, I don't know how to help :/

Please help I cannot still post urls even in the beginner's section. what should I DO!

Before I said im not so good with jumps, So I decided to do a test.
It kind of looks like a flying knee of some sort but whatever
Even though im pretty satisfied with it, I still want CC.
Here it is :


Lol he barely jumps...

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Please help I cannot still post urls even in the beginner's section. what should I DO!

SERIOUSLY! STOP ASKING HERE!
READ. THE. FRIGGIN. THREADS!!! At least LOOOK a little before you ask my goodness!

THIS IS HOW TO POST YOUR ANIMATIONS DAMNIT!
My GOD! You post your animations here, NOT YOUR QUESTIONS! If you have a question LOOK AT GENERAL HELP! Or just LOOK AROUND THE FORUMS! it. is. not. hard. I looked around, and I found it! cripes.

@teriya, its good, but he hangs in the air just a bit too long. The longest amount of time a human (without equipment or wings) can stay in the air is just below a second. So keep him in the air for max 2 frames. One when he slows down to one pixel, and the other when he starts dropping at one pixel. then just speed in up. and your curve is a bit weird. He like jumps forward then falls straight down. have him go in an arc, so jumps forward, and lands far in front. not straight down. sorry that was a crappy explanation do you get what I mean?

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@teriya, its good, but he hangs in the air just a bit too long. The longest amount of time a human (without equipment or wings) can stay in the air is just below a second. So keep him in the air for max 2 frames. One when he slows down to one pixel, and the other when he starts dropping at one pixel. then just speed in up. and your curve is a bit weird. He like jumps forward then falls straight down. have him go in an arc, so jumps forward, and lands far in front. not straight down. sorry that was a crappy explanation do you get what I mean?

I'm not denying your CC, but he's not exactly human... Stk's can stay in the air for hours if anything :D
Besides that yeah, about what you said about him jumping forward then falling straight down, Didn't notice that until you mentioned it lol..
Yeah dude I should've made him go in an arc instead of falling straight down, and now that I think about it, It does look odd lol....
I WOULD fix it, but everytime I try fixing my animations, they always mess up -.-"
I appreciate your CC though, thanks dude :D

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I'm not denying your CC, but he's not exactly human... Stk's can stay in the air for hours if anything :D
Besides that yeah, about what you said about him jumping forward then falling straight down, Didn't notice that until you mentioned it lol..
Yeah dude I should've made him go in an arc instead of falling straight down, and now that I think about it, It does look odd lol....
I WOULD fix it, but everytime I try fixing my animations, they always mess up -.-"
I appreciate your CC though, thanks dude :D

LOL that always happens to me o.O
and yea thats true, sticks aren't human, but they can pretend to be :D
and yea, I noticed it but I couldn't put my finger on it for a bit :/
its like you know somethings not right, but you can say what it is o.O
and yea, if i try to fix my anims it just looks weird. so I just start anew and call it MkII :3

Leo He's Going For That Cartoony Look :D

I always fix my anims and they never turn out too bad like my samurai movie I made I edited Every thing

thats cuz your a natural. SOME of us have to wORK HARD TO MAKE A GOOD ANIMATION >.>

and yea a cartoony look is good :P
btw happy new year guys! its the 31st over here, nearly 4o'clock o.O

Happy New Years :D

New Years Is Tommorow For Me :3

I havnt posted a combo in so long... but It's a test for some more effect's ill be postin