Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Jan 1, 2010 7:09 AM #531437

Dude...
first, you epic fail. triple post? TRIPLE?! double I can forgive but triple is just stupid...
2nd. your animation is reallly stiff. you have to keep everything moving as much as you can.
so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE learn to EDIT YOUR POST.
and guys can I get some more c&c for my anim at the top?

btw moch it looks great!
but the last hit seemed a bit stiff.
like he didn't follow through, he just stopped..
about the speed of sound.. yea i can reason with that :P
and wait, no its not only because he didn't follow through, its also because his feet, his other arm, nothing else moves apart from the head and the punching arm. and the head needs easing
also, when he takes off, have him crouch, so it seems hes about to jump. then have him stand and as soon as he finishes standing have the explosion. I mean he just goes from standing to BOOM IN THE AIR.
again this is all just what I see so it might not be correct :P
and dude, I CANT start over I have no time left, it needs to be done like YESTERDAY :/
but since when I hand it in they don't actually care about the animation, but just the essay that goes with it... I think i'll be o.k.
but I still feel like crap because the anim sucks so bad...

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Jan 1, 2010 8:49 PM #531674

well i'm getting a new mouse so i should be able to animate more easily afterwrds and i just pulled that outta my ass i did it in 25 minutes(the letters are anooying on version 2.0 where can i upgrade?)

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Jan 1, 2010 8:55 PM #531678

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i wish a saw this earlier of course it was supposed to be a galoop so i still am bad but atleast i can somwhat animate

also i have been using the edit button or my computer frezes and i do it l8r

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Jan 1, 2010 9:17 PM #531693

Cant you just put the triple post and the double post in one post?

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Jan 1, 2010 11:44 PM #531759

Can some one tell me what a mid and high begginer animation looks like because I dont get the ranking system -_-

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Jan 2, 2010 12:10 AM #531778

High beginner is perfect but not very advanced. Med beginner is knowing all the basics but not quite applying them properly. It's a stupid system imo.

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Jan 2, 2010 1:16 AM #531803

-_- that is so messed up it's not even funny Ill go work on some animations.

Edit:

I eased everything in this animation
It's not done yet >.>
But ill finish it since I think it looks alright :D

I know theres no force in that jump but ill fix that problably never......but eventually :D

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Jan 2, 2010 2:51 AM #531837

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Cant you just put the triple post and the double post in one post?

if this is a double post sorry my computer dis connected

i thot you ment posting the same thing double post okay in that case i will try

p.s. plz send you stupid computer

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Jan 2, 2010 4:21 AM #531885

O.k I finished it

C&C please :D

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Jan 2, 2010 7:07 AM #531945

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Can some one tell me what a mid and high begginer animation looks like because I dont get the ranking system -_-

I don't either dude..
I've seen something like a veteran but a really short clip, its in Darrens tutorial (or Baha as some people know him...)
I think someone like cronosXIII is High beginner to intermediate, but I couldn't tell you for sure :/

Edit: Ok, nevermind... wrong page.... :P
and o0o0o0o0o0o
but still no force in the jump :3
but i like the camera thing when hes falling.
but the bit where he rolls over the guy looks a bit stiff.
i think its because you don't properly touch the dude on the floor cuz the after-blur makes it looks a bit odd...
but that could be just me :/ i dunno just looks odd.. (sorry thats not very helpful)
and maybe to show how long the fall was, have it tremor when he lands. but thats just a suggestion.

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Jan 2, 2010 7:30 AM #531952

lol I did have it tremor at the end xD

And the part where the guy rolls I dont see how it's stiff everything was moved in each frame :O please tell me more

The blur at the end was a cover up for the fact that he hit him in 1 frame

The only part I thought was a bit stiff was when the guy got punched and started flying bak
More C&C please
:D

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Jan 2, 2010 7:40 AM #531959

but its waaay to small lolz
i didn't notice it until you told me it was there o.O
well maybe not too stiff
more like it doesn't seem real :/
like, he hits him on the floor in 1 frame, and then it moves on. i think maybe make it a bit longer, otherwise it looks like he just touches him on the cheek and rolls over. but thats just me :/
annnd the blur doesn't cover that up at all lol.

and yea its stiff, but only when at the beginning of the flying back, because he doesn't move his arms. just move them slightly, and the legs are basically in the same position. maybe curl the guy so it looks like he took a reallly bad punch to the solar plexus :P

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Jan 2, 2010 7:48 AM #531965

The Flip In The Beggining
that was intentianl (If that's how you spell it)
It was to show that jumping off the building was nothing to him
Im not really going for the real look in my animations leo

Lmao tapped on the cheek and rolled over

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Jan 2, 2010 7:51 AM #531967

Oh god! i haven't animated in so long =/

Here is a little test

Please, tell me why i suck so much...

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Jan 2, 2010 7:55 AM #531971

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It's not as bad as you think it is Ned.....

I admit your HELLA rusty though

I cant make ball animations without screwing up though xD

Plus I cant C&C for my life If I do then I wouldve said "It looks perfectly fine :3"

All I can say is that the physics are on point :I