k, I'll try that.

Button, yo

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The drop was really choppy or idk, but something was REALLY wrong with it. Besides that everything looked great.

C&C please, Crouch of some sort. Yeah, his arms are spazzing like he is a birdie. Besides that, C&C?

You need to work hard on your foot placement, either with dots or just by flicking back and forth. It might take longer but these things need effort. I think you need to deal with the shakiness too, because it's really distracting and it's hard to cc with it there. Again, just try flicking through the frames and check whether anything changes direction twice in two frames. If it does, change it.

Ok, how about this?

Meh, a bit better. Still something looks wrong with it. I can't point out what though, because I don't really know what it is myself.

Try to even up the spacing on the arms when he lands. It looks like the spacing is consistent before the landing, and after it, but there's a brief jerk in the middle. I'd suggest slowing down the walking after the scratch too. it's reasonably good, but a little quick.

Besides that, fine and good.

Legs or arms? Or are you totlly clueless?

Edit: freaking ninja.

Ok, I'll try and even it a tad more, thanks :3

3d kick, crappy placement. BUT the 3d? base stick i made.

If I were you I wouldn't do 3D effects just yet. Seeing as you have yet to control easing and smoothing, 3D is way too complicated.

If I were you I'd do a simple easing test. Make a bal fall for example.


Ok so:

CC bitches.

And yeah I know the last step was a bit off.

Looks great. The only thing you could try to improve it would be to try to make the steps merge together more, maybe by deleting the four frames where the head moves the least. If it doesn't look better after that then just reload the save and work on from where you are 'cos it does look fine.

Tried what you said, but it came out choppy and wrong, but thanks anyway :)


This two hands hand is more difficult then I thought. Ohwell :3