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Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Oct 3, 2007 12:55 AM #61607
AWKWARDNESS!!!! can people C&C and possibly give me ideas to continue it?
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note: i made the reaction weird, in the beginning, on purpose
can someone plz comment on this ani?
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Oct 3, 2007 1:14 AM #61611
could you rate this one:
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Don't say i'm a low beginner, i know it! just tell me if i'm in the right way!
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Oct 3, 2007 1:24 AM #61614
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Rank?
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Oct 3, 2007 2:24 AM #61620
yo go to youtube to veiw my animations and look for kennysurdad ull find a few shorts
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Oct 3, 2007 3:57 AM #61625
I made this a little while ago.

I know it's low beginner, just what specifically do I need to work on?
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Oct 3, 2007 5:16 AM #61626
People People People, start ranking and criting eachother before you go to your animation, I will start.

Person who said "It was horrible" That is a very nice crit, I give you a low-low beginner for it.

Animator: Pretty good, the reaction of the ball was off when it hit the stick though, your still low med beginner:)

Ggd07: Your animations were choppy, had no easing, and physics were bad, read some tuts. But your plan is pretty good, just work on animating. Low beginner.

PivotMasterXDfan: Everything was great, no choppiness, awsome easing, physics were pretty good. High beginner I guess, im still low med beginner so I can't be sure:)

humanking: Work on the easing, the run was to slow, physics needs work on the slide kick, it would hurt like hell if you would hit something like that. You wouldn't go straight into the wall unless you missed. I would say that the front flip at the end was ok, alittle bit choppy.

Asylum: Med beginner, easing was ok, but it was alittle bit choppy. (mabey med, I can't really say since your higher then me in rank.)

Androu-: read tuts.
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Oct 3, 2007 12:27 PM #61641
im still med beginner so heres one i made for a grim reaper collab.

http://www.filecram.com/swf/304408.htm
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Oct 3, 2007 12:52 PM #61645
I did what you told me... I Checked off MERGE and Frame Delay 6 AND made shrink frames "2" and here`s the result

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:) Thanks for your understanding and help ;] They look better now for me ;]
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Oct 3, 2007 3:28 PM #61647
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Ma new pivot that i was gonna put in ma edit but i didn't coz u would ignore it
so here it is feel free to puke coz that is wot you do with all of mine :Nooooooo:
BTW i did this before i watched some tuts!

Ummmm... Did You See This????
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Oct 3, 2007 3:37 PM #61648
Ok, that is pretty bad. Please keep practicing the basic movements and check the tutorial part of the forums. oh, and, before i forget, in the next animations, make animations with one stickman and a floor. just that. i promise, you'll improve faster =P

AND NOW! PLEASEEEEEEEEEE!!! comment on these... please:Nooooooo:
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Oct 3, 2007 5:44 PM #61651
Lol your still not as good as me but id say high beginner work on stiffness and reactions.
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Oct 3, 2007 6:09 PM #61654
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could you rate this one:
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Don't say i'm a low beginner, i know it! just tell me if i'm in the right way!


Running seems good,, lil choppy, I'll give him an 7.5/10 in LowBegginer Scale

Keep on the good work.

And people, don't be so harsh on New animators (like me xD)
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Oct 3, 2007 7:21 PM #61662
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And people, don't be so harsh on New animators (like me xD)


People aren't really "harsh" on "new animators", usually just being blunt, which means sounding like your being harsh but only pointing out the truth. Its just that those "new animators" can't take a little bit of the truth, so they get all angry and go all "LIEK WTTF WHEY U GUTTA BE MEANS TO ME!". See my point?
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Oct 3, 2007 7:22 PM #61663
THx 4 the advice Dudes Im gonna Do a simple 1 now so you can judge it
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Oct 3, 2007 7:42 PM #61667
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Simple Dude messing with ball its a bit crappy seeing i did it in 5 mins
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