Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Apr 8, 2013 2:41 PM #941211
Got it. Pausing when stick is speeding up, f*cks your animations flow. Too lazy to fix that right now tho. Thanks man!
(Also, when he steps the first time his leg doesn't go all the way in front of him, which makes him look like hes sliding)
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Apr 8, 2013 3:34 PM #941259
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This was Rushed...
But at least good enough to post. (I HOPE)
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Apr 8, 2013 3:47 PM #941265
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This was Rushed...
But at least good enough to post. (I HOPE)


Basically any animation is good enough to post ( as long as it's more than 2 frames long C: )

Jumping is still really hard to do even for me. This doesn't look right because you're having trouble with easing and physics. I suggest you try some more simple animations, like basic ones: walking, running, punching etc. When you're done with one, post it here and we'll give you detailed CnC.

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Apr 8, 2013 4:15 PM #941282
Uh.. So yeah, could anybody crit those other animations I did? Forgive me if someone did and I missed it, but I haven't found crit so far.

More importantly, this one. But the others too!
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Apr 8, 2013 10:06 PM #941507
God I'm getting very rusty.
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Apr 9, 2013 12:16 AM #941582
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jumping. ugh. lol try doing a simple 2-d jump to start off, like so:
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i made this a while ago, but i think it gets the point across.
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Apr 9, 2013 11:22 AM #941955
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Uh.. So yeah, could anybody crit those other animations I did? Forgive me if someone did and I missed it, but I haven't found crit so far.

More importantly, this one. But the others too!
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Addzable, I like your animations! However, I would like to see you practice more basic animations like walking and running (if you haven't already did that). If you're having trouble with anything in that area visit our Pivot Tutorials Thread. Good job and happy animating! Post here as soon as possible!
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Apr 9, 2013 3:41 PM #942131
Ah, thank you Radon. I actually did post those, a few pages back. However they, just like the one above, are running at the wrong frames per second. I followed the tutorial on how to fix that, but it didn't work. They play at perfect speed in windows media player, but when playing online or on windows fax viewer, they slow down to about 10 fps. They should be about 14. If ANYONE knows how to fix that, I will worship you.

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Hello everyone! I'm going to post my first three animations up here. I'm following the tutorial comiplation posted up by Zed, so these are probably all things you've seen before, as well as probably being worse than the previous ones. Please, do critique my animations as I'd really like to know where I can improve.
Also, I've noticed that, for some reason, when I save the animations as .gifs they slow down considerably. I'm not sure how to fix this, I HAVE tried fiddling with the "Save as gif" settings, but have had no positive results so far, only making it slower. If anyone know's what's going on, I'd really appreciate some help with that as well.

One: Learning Easing with a ball.
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Two: Learning walking with my custom stick (Should loop)
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Three: Learning running with my custom stick (Should loop)
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Apr 10, 2013 5:12 PM #942982
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Back to basics, I downloaded Pivot as I used Stykz before :/ Not that easy, colors are so hard in Pivot !
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Apr 10, 2013 5:32 PM #943000
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Back to basics, I downloaded Pivot as I used Stykz before :/ Not that easy, colors are so hard in Pivot !


Looks nice; You should try getting a new stick tho, this one looks a bit awkward. Perhaps give him feet and fatter legs? Idk.
Also, you should look up tutorials on easing and spacing. That'd probably help :)
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Apr 10, 2013 5:41 PM #943009
I know everything about those, just go back pages 3394-5... My Stykz just friggin crashed and doesn't answer anymore...
THIS is what I can do... But I find Pivot so weird and idk, EMPTY...
Look, this is my skill :
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See, I know easing and all.

EDIT : 34 000th post is all mine, MUaHAHAHA !
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Apr 10, 2013 7:56 PM #943074
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I know everything about those, just go back pages 3394-5... My Stykz just friggin crashed and doesn't answer anymore...
THIS is what I can do... But I find Pivot so weird and idk, EMPTY...
Look, this is my skill :
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See, I know easing and all.

EDIT : 34 000th post is all mine, MUaHAHAHA !

That's great! It's just a bit shaky when he jumps. :D

I dunno, thinking about girls lately. xD
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Apr 10, 2013 8:03 PM #943080
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I dunno, thinking about girls lately. xD
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You should master basics first, before moving to full body. I mean !master! not learn. Or you could just roll with it. I don't care... just giving you advice.
And yeah, girls are always good.
You kick ass with colors, but basics, dem basics.
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Apr 13, 2013 9:28 PM #945576
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Apr 14, 2013 12:04 AM #945706
I really like the heavy spacing on the lightsaber. Especially on the first couple of movements. With the trail and everything it is exactly how a quick movement should be. The rest seemed a bit stiff - I think it would be better if he'd stepped forwards and back again - but don't let me distract you from how absolutely perfect the lightsaber swings are. Seriously, do more like that. Some people get to be "expert"s on DarkDemon by doing nothing but that kind of movement.