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Sep 7, 2009 12:41 AM #484611
No need to bump a stickied thread. But what do you need help with?
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Sep 7, 2009 1:07 AM #484616
ummmm the guy thats doing the kick in the air he is going to fast because the attack was supposed to trip but its not enough time so i tried to change it to when the attack trips he kicks the guy in the back but it looks like crap because my trips only look good when its like half way done so i was wondering could you help me or even edit it for me
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Sep 7, 2009 1:16 AM #484619
Well I don't even get the animation actually. Why did that guy just run right into the other character while he was in the air to clothesline himself?
You should make the guy who flips jump faster, so that the running character can grab his leg and throw him around. The way you have it doesn't work.
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Sep 7, 2009 1:20 AM #484622
how would i be able to make him jump faster and still use anticipation and the meaning of the fight was meaningless ^.^
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Sep 7, 2009 1:28 AM #484625
Simple. Make your character spin faster and not jump so high.
Edit: Hurrr like this:
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Sep 7, 2009 11:58 AM #484823
oh ok thanx again
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Sep 7, 2009 8:17 PM #485048
Yet again an animation , It is a knife , not a banana.
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Wadda think?
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Sep 7, 2009 8:29 PM #485053
omg a circut blew in my house and everything shut off just now
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Sep 8, 2009 1:58 AM #485120
kingsmash: 1, stop trying to animate fight scenes, stick with simple things like walking, jumping, a single punch, the ball test etc.
2, work on your basics. Physics, easing, smoothness and uniformity are all still missing from your animations.
3, Stop using my style, your far too new. Stick with size 2, its easier.

Devour: The trails looked terrible. straight trail only works for straight movement. What you need is curved trail.
Also the flip was too fast and had no easing. To remedy this try doing what I do; Start the flip fast then at the highest point, ease it down a tad, once physics kick in, tuck his legs in and speed it up again for the landing. Once he lands he will go into a crouch. then he can fall back.

poppet: as wobbly as it was it still look nice. However, what ever he was holding looked neither like a banana, or a knife.
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Sep 8, 2009 2:13 PM #485239
Lol U are right :P

Thanks.

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Outside the beginner section worthy?
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Sep 8, 2009 4:14 PM #485257
The "apple of the eye" (or whatever it is) is missing at the beginning. Is it supposed to miss ?
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Sep 8, 2009 8:54 PM #485317
i didnt know that was your style?
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Sep 9, 2009 7:08 AM #485462
Brilliant poppet! I believe you just earned your way out of beginners! (As long as you keep up that quality, that is.)
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Sep 9, 2009 12:24 PM #485505
*whoohoo's*
Ill guess ill make new animations then :P

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I don't feel like posting outside this section
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Sep 9, 2009 3:59 PM #485574
That's a sweet animation, but I can't believe you made it out of beginners with your 3rd ****ing easytoon anim!
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