Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.
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cherrybombs8Posts: 317
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as u can see, i like soccer xD. i did it in like 20 min so its really short. im still adding on so its longer for a collab i entered. i hope you like it.
U guys know the drill.. C&C time! :D
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View Profile I like how the soccerball is a blob, don't change a thing just add to it!
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View Profile Since every one is telling me to i'll just post here.
I just made this one.

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nice movements. just make the pen size 2 for the stick men and ur pretty much set. oh and speed it up a little.
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View Profile 2000th comment! xD
lmao sorry for the double post, i had to do this...
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oh and heres a little pic :P

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View Profile NOPE, This is the 2000th post! Haha. <--------PHAIL
Dark, I'm glad you are posting here now! Not half bad, but I have to agree with Cherry, use thicker lines and be more steady with your drawing. Also because you are just starting try focusing on basic movements and not effects (which wern't half bad).
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View Profile nuh uh, mine was xD did u see my picture?

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View Profile Did you not notice the PHAIL lol, yes i did hilarious.
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View Profile i made this pic as a tribute to the Castle series. :P its kinda bad...

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View Profile Lol, not bad. You are very artistic!
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View Profile hey that's a cool soccer animation cherry! Only crit is the bounce of the ball, it floats in one of the arcs.
The darkest white, it's funny how the character just collapses in the corner after the punch. looks good.
As for me, i just tried a walkcycle, and i forgot to use thick lines for stickman.
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View Profile thanks sunny. oh ur animations pretty good, but C&C wise, we dont neccessarily bend our front leg when we step. to make it more realistic just straighten the front leg a bit.
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View Profile Thx, cherrbombs i shall try it out in later stuff.
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View Profile holy SHIT this was such a bitch to make..
introducting, "THE CASTLE TRIBUTE"

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Nicely done, I second it was a bitch to make.