Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.

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Jun 18, 2008 2:13 AM #159366
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as u can see, i like soccer xD. i did it in like 20 min so its really short. im still adding on so its longer for a collab i entered. i hope you like it.

U guys know the drill.. C&C time! :D
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Jun 18, 2008 3:04 AM #159417
I like how the soccerball is a blob, don't change a thing just add to it!
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Jun 19, 2008 11:18 AM #159855
Since every one is telling me to i'll just post here.

I just made this one.

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Jun 19, 2008 5:21 PM #160062
@Dark

nice movements. just make the pen size 2 for the stick men and ur pretty much set. oh and speed it up a little.
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Jun 19, 2008 10:16 PM #160319
2000th comment! xD

lmao sorry for the double post, i had to do this...
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oh and heres a little pic :P

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Jun 19, 2008 11:07 PM #160366
NOPE, This is the 2000th post! Haha. <--------PHAIL

Dark, I'm glad you are posting here now! Not half bad, but I have to agree with Cherry, use thicker lines and be more steady with your drawing. Also because you are just starting try focusing on basic movements and not effects (which wern't half bad).
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Jun 19, 2008 11:10 PM #160370
nuh uh, mine was xD did u see my picture?

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Jun 20, 2008 6:31 PM #160958
Did you not notice the PHAIL lol, yes i did hilarious.
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Jun 20, 2008 11:09 PM #161191
i made this pic as a tribute to the Castle series. :P its kinda bad...

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Jun 21, 2008 1:53 AM #161307
Lol, not bad. You are very artistic!
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Jun 21, 2008 3:34 PM #161784
hey that's a cool soccer animation cherry! Only crit is the bounce of the ball, it floats in one of the arcs.

The darkest white, it's funny how the character just collapses in the corner after the punch. looks good.

As for me, i just tried a walkcycle, and i forgot to use thick lines for stickman.
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Jun 21, 2008 8:52 PM #162149
thanks sunny. oh ur animations pretty good, but C&C wise, we dont neccessarily bend our front leg when we step. to make it more realistic just straighten the front leg a bit.
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Jun 21, 2008 10:29 PM #162255
Thx, cherrbombs i shall try it out in later stuff.
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Jun 22, 2008 1:22 AM #162414
holy SHIT this was such a bitch to make..

introducting, "THE CASTLE TRIBUTE"

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Jun 22, 2008 1:27 AM #162420
Where's the animation :D

Nicely done, I second it was a bitch to make.