Quote from GotPepsi

NinjaBob09: i think your animation is good. except for the fact that it seems like you took no time on this. You could change the line thickness when you made your effects, its some what smooth, and i think with a few more animations you'll be alot better. Also try to end your animations. make him explode do something to stop the story.

definitely!

and work on resizing...try to keep him the same size throughout the whole anim...it is very smooth, and looks nice...keep practicing...find someone who you think is good and ask them if they can send you an anim you like...try to copy what they have made on your own...that's a good way to get some basic skills down...you have potential, keep it up!

k thx ;D but the reason it it ended so abruptly is because i got bored and didn't finish it.D:

Well heres one I did.



I think that its one of the best that I did, though it might be a little confusing...

Dang, that was pretty good, i liked that alot. it was really smooth and i understood what happened right away. The stick hit the ground, and a rock flew up, than the stick struck the rock and cut it in half, nice i liked it.

Higher fps, IMO.

good but there's a mistake when the sword hit's the ground .

Make the trail reach the ground and make the next frame with the sword stuck in the ground .

Updated :D



Took Puinkey's advice, also upped the FPS to 7.

I posted my own thread, but it can't hurt to put my animation here too...

My first Easytoon:


http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fightscenejp5.gif



Hope you like! I'm not finished with it though, the wall has to become completely destroyed...

hi im new here^^ here are my 2 tests pls comment!

TEST 1

TEST 2

Wow, I like both of your animations! But there could be some improvement.

Coole Man: Your effects are very nice, but you have too many frames between some of the walking, jumping, etc. And it makes it look slow.

Bokriche: Those are very good for firsts, but there is some resizing (Use the onion skin). And I would suggest to always have arms (Unless you really don't want to) on your sticks because it makes it more....professional?

Two tests of mine:



I cant animate smoke to save my life. Please give me some tips on it.

Is it a smoke granade? or a fragnant granade ?

Hmm...I think I wanted it took look like a frag, but well, I guess its smoke now...

that's a perfume grenade :D

UT omg... FRAGMENT lol RAWR.

Smoke is really hard, try doing some particles.
Then when you get good at those just make each particle HUGE.