lol, it's depend on my mood lol

A simple leap.
Shaking off the rust. This is my first easytoon in like two months so go easy on meh. Yeah there's resizing but I was trying to have good anticipation and force when he jumped off and landed on, the ground. C&C pwease.

Thank you for the wonderful C&C. ._.

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A simple leap.
Shaking off the rust. This is my first easytoon in like two months so go easy on meh. Yeah there's resizing but I was trying to have good anticipation and force when he jumped off and landed on, the ground. C&C pwease.

I think you should learn easing, and movements, the walk thingy in the end is weird the anticipation is'nt good

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I think you should learn easing, and movements, the walk thingy in the end is weird the anticipation is'nt good

Yeah I fuxxed up the walk thing since I haven't even done a walk yet. And also I've been hearing about easing and blah blah but I just don't know how to go about doing it THE RIGHT WAY. I mean I'm not just gonna do an animation and hopefully it will looked eased. And I actually thought the anticipation was good but the force sucked, but.... ok.

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Yeah I fuxxed up the walk thing since I haven't even done a walk yet. And also I've been hearing about easing and blah blah but I just don't know how to go about doing it THE RIGHT WAY. I mean I'm not just gonna do an animation and hopefully it will looked eased. And I actually thought the anticipation was good but the force sucked, but.... ok.

just read some tut, in pivot/ easytoon help thread, it will help you for sure (I think)

and.. actually I didn't see the good anticipation that you mentioned

edit: add new anim http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/3511/swordtestcf8.gif

That's pretty cool. But I wouldn't have made the sword? have a trail during the whole animation, just when he jumps and swings it. I noticed that in one frame, while the ground is shaking, the leg is under the ground. But that is just a tiny thing. Not really an issue.

I think the arms are alright.

yeah the sword is a square the whole time and it looks bad, dont use a trail unless its moving really fast

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it was pretty good altho it might be choppy for a spilt second when he pulls the sword up and the trails didnt look as if the were flowing exagrate them a little moar

EDIT: spin kick my lastest piece of work :D I tink the arms are fidgety at the end

exagrate?
btw I think the arm is alright, and it's smooth

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yeah the sword is a square the whole time and it looks bad, dont use a trail unless its moving really fast

okay, I'll try

.. exagetrat.. its hard to explain but here are 2 examples.

Exagerated:

Unexagertaed:

see the frist one is better all you do is make the trail trail heavier. so you make it go deeper into the onion skin.. simple

yeah... just like pivot :D i kinda do that

like this?
btw forget the stickman
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/9442/swordtest2jk8.gif

Thats good :D nice work and what frame rate u work at cuz it looks just a bit slo...