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Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.

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Aug 22, 2009 2:08 PM #477525
Finally, I'm finished with my stick figure thingy.

Here it is: Elements Unleashed
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:S How is it?
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Aug 22, 2009 3:17 PM #477537
oh that is so sweet i getting easy toon right now

edit:since i cant double post here is my first easytoon
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/247937sordswingtest.gif
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Aug 23, 2009 12:02 AM #477718
Hmm...you should work on your trails. :S

No one commenting/criticizing my animation? I know there's a lot to criticize about...lol.
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Aug 23, 2009 12:05 AM #477722
i said it was sweet and what do you mean by trails lol i just started easytoon today
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Aug 23, 2009 12:28 AM #477724
Quote from kingsmash
i said it was sweet and what do you mean by trails lol i just started easytoon today


Lol true...but that's not much I can use to improve. Thanks though :3

And trails as in when you slice with the sword, you just make like scribbles. You should work on that. Maybe someone can show you, but it's good for a first easytoon. :]
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Aug 23, 2009 2:50 AM #477752
thanx and ill try to find out how to do trails
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Aug 23, 2009 11:29 AM #477837
Quote from ojom52
Finally, I'm finished with my stick figure thingy.

Here it is: Elements Unleashed
Image

:S How is it?



Easing and anticipation would be the biggest problem. The effects are nice, but lagged alot of anticipation. For example the last beam: if it is truly that strong, it should be going faster and has bigger impact.
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Aug 23, 2009 12:57 PM #477875
Quote from ojom52
Finally, I'm finished with my stick figure thingy.

Here it is: Elements Unleashed
Image

:S How is it?


Very good. I dont think u have to post this in the beginenrs section though because it is really good. You just have to work on alot of the little things. The effects were great, the stick guys lacked a more realistic type of movement, the world with the water thing was a bit unnecessary (just my opininion though), particles on the last blast were a bit lazy. Yeah that is actually my main point - work on particles and your eztoons wil be sick.

Other than that good job adn keep it up !!! ;)
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Aug 23, 2009 2:33 PM #477912
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Easing and anticipation would be the biggest problem. The effects are nice, but lagged alot of anticipation. For example the last beam: if it is truly that strong, it should be going faster and has bigger impact.


Ok, thanks. How would you add anticipation? :s
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Aug 23, 2009 2:35 PM #477913
umm how do you add a trail for a sword or something
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Aug 23, 2009 2:59 PM #477919
where are the tits?
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Aug 23, 2009 3:20 PM #477928
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Ok, thanks. How would you add anticipation? :s


http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=105188

Read the part where it says about anticipation. It will help you better then I can, for I suck at giving explanations.


@jakops/jakopz, wichever account didn't got banned yet: reported for multi accounting and for spamming.
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Aug 23, 2009 3:40 PM #477937
lmao he got banned for having two accounts with the same name
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Aug 23, 2009 5:41 PM #477959
No, not yet. He has Jakops and Jakopz. Jakopz isn't banned yet, or won't be banned.
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Aug 23, 2009 9:02 PM #477990
Two things, Rival. Quit publicly announcing your reporting of people. You've already reported jakopz so you don't need to tell him you've reported him because it won't make any difference to his behavior. All it does is add to the spam.

Second, go easy on your report messages. It took you forever to get to your point. We don't need you to give us a whole jakopz biography. We're perfectly well aware that he was previously banned because we have a history of previous infractions and he tried to log into his banned account recently so everyone could see that. A simple "spam" or "trolling" will suffice as a report message.
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