@Flood: Why would you want to ban me?
@Beefyv2: Thanks for the comments or suggestions(If there's any.) :)
@2-D: Sorry. I didnt know that.

you have to be 13 and up to be on here

Oh, Im sorry. I thought Animating has no limit. :(

That was amazing, you should seriously consider being a writer

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what scares me the most is i dont think that was a joke

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what scares me the most is i dont think that was a joke

How could it not be a joke?

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How could it not be a joke?

i think hes foreign

that was priceless. I haven't laughed so hard in ages.

oh, I'm sure it would of had been "better".

it would've been funnier, thats for sure

haha, good one. it's good to see that more people are posting in the literature section nowadays.

Here is mine.

It felt like a normal day. Pretty much was a normal day. My name is Kevin. So like a normal day, I got out of bed, set my clock, took a shower, brushed my teeth, and went to school. Took my Japanese class, my Spanish class, my Sweedish class, my French class, my German class, and etc. After school, I was hanging out with my friends on the roof top of the school. A random guy took the leesh off his dog. The dog jumped on the school. The dog looked like a zombie, but my friend Caleb blames the owner, but my other two friends, Lexi and Tia, think the dog is cute. I thought the dog was saying to me. "Please help me! My owner is killing me!" The owner came on the roof. You dumb dog! Stay out of people's business! After he said that I was thinking the dog said. "You see?"

Meanwhile, a scientist in Japan was trying to make a robot. He actually made a zombie! He got mixed up with the zombie materials and the robot materials. But I'm thinking. "What kind of dumb scientist gets mixed up with that?" How I new is because on the news they anounced. "Zombies are in Japan!" And after they said that, the signal went out on the TV, but the zombies weren't just in Japan, they spreaded. They spreaded faster than you can say the word zombies. It was like 1+1=2, 2+2=4, and 4+4=8. I looked out side all the lights were turned off. Because light attracts zombies. I turned mine off then.

After all that I moved to Canada, and also my friends did too. They thought that was a good idea, but when I moved to Canada, my home was a farm. "It did not have a farm on the news paper". I said. Oh well. If I have a farm I guess I have to use it. So I bought cows, and corn seeds. After that I was having launch, I had unscliced ham and milk. Then a zombie came. It ate all my cows brains and it came into my office. I said. "Ah a zombie!" I threw the unscliced ham at the zombie, and ran in to my room. The zombie ate the unscliced ham and died. I came back to my office and the zombie was dead. I thought that the zombie eats brains, but if it eats meat it will die.

I went to an ice cream shop and saw my friends there. When my friends were there a migit zombie came. Me and Lexi ran into the employees room. Caleb and Tia died by the migit zombie. We came out and saw the migit zombie dead, the police, and the news people. Then a zombie came in, but it looked like a person. It was talking to me and said, "You want some ice cream?" I said "sure". but then it bit my arm off and died.

The police got me to the hospital. They put a robot arm on me, and I went to the waiting room and saw Lexi there. I sat down with her, and she asked me. "Do you know how to stop the zombies?" "Yes". I said. What? Give them meat, and they will die.

We went to the police and said. Give the zombies meat and they will die. People started packing meat in to the planes, and the planes droped meat all over the world. Alot of zombies were dieing, but not all. One of the packers was my friend Jordan. Jordan was very jelouse of me. He was thinking If I could be as popular as Kevin I need to tell the news people that vegetables could also kill zombies.

He told the news people that vegetables can kill them too, but he was wrong. They started to pack vegetables in the planes. The planes were droping vetetbles and they were making the zombies stronger, faster, and even jump higher, but thankfuly not that high.

Obiously they switched back to meat, gave me a medal for saving the world, and people thought Jordan was so dumb they put him back in colledge, and after all that I merried Lexi.
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If I had an error sorry.

P.S If your name is Jordan sorry to offend you.

i came.

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Here is mine.

It felt like a normal day. Pretty much was a normal day. My name is Kevin. So like a normal day, I got out of bed, set my clock, took a shower, brushed my teeth, and went to school. Took my Japanese class, my Spanish class, my Sweedish class, my French class, my German class, and etc. After school, I was hanging out with my friends on the roof top of the school. A random guy took the leesh off his dog. The dog jumped on the school. The dog looked like a zombie, but my friend Caleb blames the owner, but my other two friends, Lexi and Tia, think the dog is cute. I thought the dog was saying to me. "Please help me! My owner is killing me!" The owner came on the roof. You dumb dog! Stay out of people's business! After he said that I was thinking the dog said. "You see?"

Meanwhile, a scientist in Japan was trying to make a robot. He actually made a zombie! He got mixed up with the zombie materials and the robot matherials. But I'm thinking. "What kind of dumb scientist gets mixed up with that?" How I new is because on the news they anounced. "Zombies are in Japan!" And after they said that, the signal went out on the TV, but the zombies weren't just in Japan, they spreaded. They spreaded faster than you can say the word zombies. It was like 1+1=2, 2+2=4, and 4+4=8. I looked out side all the lights were turned off. Because light attracts zombies. I turned mine off then.

After all that I moved to Canada, and also my friends did too. They thought that was a good idea, but when I moved to Canada, my home was a farm. "It did not have a farm on the news paper". I said. Oh well. If I have a farm I guess I have to use it. So I bought cows, and corn seeds. After that I was having launch, I had unscliced ham and milk. Then a zombie came. It ate all my cows brains and it came into my office. I said. "Ah a zombie!" I though the unscliced ham at the zombie, and ran in to my room. The zombie ate the unscliced ham and died. I came back to my office and the zombie was dead. I thought that the zombie eats brains, but if it eats meat it will die.

I went to an ice cream shop and saw my friends there. When my friends were there a migit zombie came. Me and Lexi ran into the employees room. Caleb and Tia died by the migit zombie. We came out and saw the migit zombie dead, the police, and the news people. Then a zombie came in, but it looked like a person. It was talking to me and said, "You want some ice cream?" I said "sure". but then it bit my arm off and died.

The police got me to the hospital. They put a robot arm on me, and I went to the waiting room and saw Lexi there. I sat down with her, and she asked me. "Do you know how to stop the zombies?" "Yes". I said. What? Give them meat, and they will die.

We went to the police and said. Give the zombies meat and they will die. People started packing meat in to the planes, and the planes droped meat all over the world. Alot of zombies were dieing, but not all. One of the packers was my friend Jordan. Jordan was very jelouse of me. He was thinking If I could be as popular as Kevin I need to tell the news people that vegetables could also kill zombies.

He told the news people that vegetables can kill them too, but he was wrong. They started to pack vegetables in the planes. The planes were droping vetetbles and they were making the zombies stronger, faster, and even jump higher, but thankfuly not that high.

Obiously they switched back to meat, gave me a medal for saving the world, and people thought Jordan was so dumb they put him back in colledge, and after all that I merried Lexi.
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If I had an error sorry.

P.S If your name is Jordan sorry to offend you.

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If I had an error sorry.

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If I had an error

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If I had

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If

I rest my case.

In terms of grammar and spelling, we could at least read what you wrote. On content, though, I think maybe a bit more detail and less plot holes would have served you well.