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Started by: allyman8 | Replies: 8 | Views: 575

allyman8

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Mar 23, 2009 2:18 AM #379270
Didn't wanna post these, because they suck, but meh, whatever.

Criticism please.

All of em':
http://www.truploader.com/view/80736
http://www.truploader.com/view/771910
http://www.truploader.com/view/463395
http://www.truploader.com/view/552929 (Not finished, gonna start something new)


More soon ;D, please tell me what i can do better :)
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Mar 23, 2009 2:51 PM #379494
For the first, it's way too slow, and the movements are really unclear. The second is pretty ok, but I doubt you walk like that. Realism is one of the keys to good animations. Don't overdo the realism though, but enough to still keep it creative. The third missed the impact. Try anticipating the force behind the kick to get it to show impact. It stopped in mid-air, so it didn't seem like he actually finished the kick. And for the fourth, why did you post it?
Hope to see you improve quickly :].
allyman8

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Mar 23, 2009 2:56 PM #379497
Thanks for dropping the comment tidius.

Will be sure to work on it! :D
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Mar 23, 2009 8:08 PM #379661
well, you need to have straight lines for the different parts of the body, not just a bend for a leg, it looks more wobbly that way, also speed it up.

Keep trying.
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Mar 24, 2009 3:07 AM #379950
Thanks for the post KD.

Will work on it ;]
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Mar 24, 2009 3:15 AM #379955
the second isnt too bad.
in the third one you need more power behind the kick.
the last one doesnt really have anything to comment on.
Just keep working at it and you will get better.
Good Luck
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Mar 24, 2009 1:24 PM #380037
They have no heads?
I don't get it some animators don't use a head!
Without a head u die! :S
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Mar 24, 2009 1:54 PM #380041
We add them later, we're too lazy to draw 'em every frame.
allyman8

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Mar 24, 2009 4:55 PM #380086
Well, actually i wasn't planing on adding a head.

Headless looks pretty cool, in my opinion.
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