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no... i'm not trying to make it bad... i'm just a REEAALLLY bad noob.

How bout starting off by looking at a decent animation frame-by-frame?

You can do this by playing the animation, then right click > Forward, right click> Forward. You will be able to see each frame, and then you can try to duplicate it.

okay thanks! ^_^ its good to get help...

k, do you use add keyframe or add blank keyframe?

uh... i think as you need to do is draw the sticks better and the limbs closer
try doodling on flash for practice and stuff

Are you using a mousepad or a mouse because the stick wobbles way too much!

Quote from fire and ice studio

Punch 2... i had a hard time with the legs... they wobble.... ALOT
http://www.truploader.com/view/234902

Very wobbly, I agree.

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STOPANIMATINGFORTHERESTOFYOURLIFEPLEASE!!!!
in other words
STOP ANIMATING NOW FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE PLEASE!!!!

Terrible, you can't even spell which would have been your strong point in the animation but it sucked. I mean, you didn't even try to make your animation fluid and have connecting movements. It's shit. Not even noobish. It will never become noobish. please, never join a collab till you can actually make noob animations.

Wow... stop being a prick. I'm sure most people were this bad when they first started. There was absolutely no constructive criticism in this just a lot of flaming. I mean, I'm pretty sure he was actually trying his best to create something good. He's just a beginner; he's new at it, yet you blatantly accuse him for not trying to make his animation "fluid" and have "connecting movements" (btw it seems pretty clear that he was trying to make it fluid and such otherwise it would be all over the place.). Not only is your analysis seemingly incorrect, you blame him for something he does not yet have the skills to do efficiently yet. We all start somewhere. We all sucked at one point. It's people like you who make this site lose a lot of possible potential. Btw, I sucked a hell lot more than this when I first started.

As for the animation, just keep practicing. Read some tutorials, analyze other people's animations and try to be creative. Nothing to really say about each animation.. Just practice and you'll realize your own faults.

Thanks Miccool! :Happy:

okay... walk test 4.... the movments are better ( in my opinion) only the guys head moves funny... ehh... i'll get it eventually.
http://www.truploader.com/view/136789

He kind of pauses at the end, before he starts over again. His legs resize abit also. Arms are choppy at times. It would be better if his head was forward more, because it looks like he is in a turtle neck or something. Pretty good though.

There should be a point where his arms Switch from side, I can't see it in that one. Way better then you past attempts though.

keep up the work! you will improve in time.
try to work with rezising, movements and wobbling.
also do you have a tablet? its very practical when animating.

They're terrible.

I'm assuming that you just got flash. Just go read through some of the flash and pivot tutorials. They will help you out. Also, try making your own colors instead of using the default ones built into flash. Try zooming in once or twice and then draw your frame, that helps cut down on how much everything wobbles.

Good luck.

okay... i drew a gun and did a shooting test... i got some sound.. although its not the right sound... o well... and i forgot to put some reaction from the guy...
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/822301shooting1.swf