i like it, its very detailed, mind if i print it out and use it for a writing narration...
NAH JKJKJKJK LOL but seriously im JK-ing
If he dies, then how does he write this story?

I love this line.

Quote from Flood

We died when all this started.

Great story though, really, was a pleasure to read.

Hot damn, I didn't know you were this good at writing. Good job.

Quote from DB4L

i like it, its very detailed, mind if i print it out and use it for a writing narration...
NAH JKJKJKJK LOL but seriously im JK-ing
If he dies, then how does he write this story?

he was telling the story to someone. i don't know.

Quote from Sunder Forge

I love this line.


Great story though, really, was a pleasure to read.

thanks ;]

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Wow, that was a pretty sweet story. Are u going to make a full version. I think you should .

it was the full version, it was mostly just practice.

Quote from Devour

Hot damn, I didn't know you were this good at writing. Good job.

thanks a lot, bro.

I really like it. The story plot aint that good though but it was worth my time.

well its hard to be original with a zombie story.

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I really like it. The story plot aint that good though but it was worth my time.

I'd like to see you write something better.

anyways, I re-read the story and it's still really good. Flood, you should seriously go for a longer story man, this is some nice dope shit right here. I'm getting high off of this.

Ok... The first paragraph was totally unknown. I couldn't understand a thing.

The ending was weird. Why didn't you save the day, and not commit SOS?

But in the middle was ok.

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Ok... The first paragraph was totally unknown. I couldn't understand a thing.

The ending was weird. Why didn't you save the day, and not commit SOS?

But in the middle was ok.

please just shut up. please.

Quote from BDninja

Ok... The first paragraph was totally unknown. I couldn't understand a thing.

The ending was weird. Why didn't you save the day, and not commit SOS?

But in the middle was ok.

the story was supposed to be as realistic as possible for a zombie story. how would you stand up to a horde of zombies closing in on you after getting hatcheted in the back, with a hunting rifle

Ohhhhh, you were trying to make it as realistic as possible.