Please Rate my animations, and criticize so i know what im doing wrong.

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Jul 18, 2009 6:25 PM #462475
ImageAm i still a beginner, and can you tellImageme what is wrong with these?
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Jul 18, 2009 6:27 PM #462476
I have the same Glaiv download, but you should put your animations in beginners. your not bad, already better than me, but you arent pro man...
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Jul 18, 2009 6:27 PM #462477
Yes you are. One the run loop, work on wobbliness and stiffness. And the fight anim, just work on simple movements like the run loop, then make big fights like that.
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Jul 18, 2009 6:29 PM #462478
and also Teleportation is considered unprofessional animating.
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Jul 18, 2009 6:31 PM #462480
Yeah basically

teleporting=laziness
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Jul 18, 2009 6:33 PM #462482
Agreed.

Filler Filler Filler
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Jul 18, 2009 6:51 PM #462491
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just a quick animation
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Jul 18, 2009 6:52 PM #462493
Quote from NightBlade
and also Teleportation is considered unprofessional animating.

i didn't know, but you could tell i wasn't good at running, because i teleport.
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Jul 18, 2009 6:53 PM #462495
Image, this is the second part to the fight animation with wu in it
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Jul 18, 2009 6:54 PM #462496
Here is a really good tutorial I recommend for you. Its a long read but I'm sure if you're dedicated to getting better at animation, you probably would take 20 minutes to look at this and try and make an animation using it.

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=104748

EDIT: Also don't use unnecessarily sophisticated sticks.
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Jul 18, 2009 7:55 PM #462520
Image thanks to you and the walking tut, this is how it turned out!
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Jul 18, 2009 7:58 PM #462521
Does your stick have a backbone?
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Jul 18, 2009 7:59 PM #462522
?? im kinda naive...
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Jul 18, 2009 8:03 PM #462523
Image before, afterImage
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Jul 18, 2009 8:35 PM #462525
afters better, much better, BUT you have to add a backbone or it'll look stiff always, and his arms still look like they are flapping, one more thing, the guy looks like hes head banging