Please Rate my animations, and criticize so i know what im doing wrong.
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SlayerZaxy2Posts: 72
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Am i still a beginner, and can you tell

me what is wrong with these?
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View Profile I have the same Glaiv download, but you should put your animations in beginners. your not bad, already better than me, but you arent pro man...
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View Profile Yes you are. One the run loop, work on wobbliness and stiffness. And the fight anim, just work on simple movements like the run loop, then make big fights like that.
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View Profile and also Teleportation is considered unprofessional animating.
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View Profile Yeah basically
teleporting=laziness
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View Profile Agreed.
Filler Filler Filler
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just a quick animation
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View Profile and also Teleportation is considered unprofessional animating.
i didn't know, but you could tell i wasn't good at running, because i teleport.
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, this is the second part to the fight animation with wu in it
Flood2Posts: 3,326
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View Profile Here is a really good tutorial I recommend for you. Its a long read but I'm sure if you're dedicated to getting better at animation, you probably would take 20 minutes to look at this and try and make an animation using it.
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=104748
EDIT: Also don't use unnecessarily sophisticated sticks.
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thanks to you and the walking tut, this is how it turned out!
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View Profile Does your stick have a backbone?
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before, after

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View Profile afters better, much better, BUT you have to add a backbone or it'll look stiff always, and his arms still look like they are flapping, one more thing, the guy looks like hes head banging