I can't wait to see how you are blending everyone's story.

Also you still need 4 more characters, if noone else does this i might write another character.

I'll add that, but I'm making your power less strong. Nice story.
How's this for the editing?

Name: Chester Grinn
Backstory: Chester was 16 when he joined the war. It was illegal, but with all that was going on, nobody stopped to clarify his identification.
He had dreams of being a war hero, like any other boy growing up in his time. He took his duties strongly.
After squeezing in training, he was immediately assigned a squad, and sent out into the neverending battles raging everywhere. After a few months of close calls and starvation, he was captured by the enemy. These visitors... these alien bastards that invaded his planet and killed his and countless of other families. Now he suspected they were going to kill him. Or worse. But what the aliens held in store for him was much worse than anything he could have expected. When he was captured he was taken from the planet earth. Which looked blood soaked even from space. It seemed as though he wasn't the only one captured though. Over 50,000 other 16 and younger children were in a single cargo bay holding cell with him. All of them had been taken. Then, day by day, month after month, the children began to disappear while they slept. Never to return to the cell again. Rumors of experimental testing, and biological weaponry was discussed amongst the remaining few. And on one fateful day, as far as Chester could guess, two years after his abduction, He was selected. He awoke one morning to a horrific scene, he was in a glass tube, and unable to move anything but his eyes. Worse yet, he realized, that all he could see, was himself. His body, eyeless, sitting on a table in front of him. Then came the aliens. Administering all kinds of grotesque procedures to his body. Chester could feel every prod of the scalpel, and ever stitch that was sewn. After approx. 3 months of the constant torture, he blacked out and awoke again in his home on earth. Or the remnants of it. He was sitting in his bed, out on the front lawn, the crippled home behind him overgrown with ivy and underbrush. It looked as though he'd been gone for much longer than he had thought. Anger poured into him, and he let lose a raged scream of torment, and when he did, a powerful laser shot from his eyes, annihilating the ground beneath him. A black, smoking hole the size of a beachball was in its place. Since this moment, he's learned to control his powers and he rejoined the army. hunting down all remaining aliens on his planet, and disintegrating their filthy hides. He's yet to find any others that were in the holding cell with him. He presumes they all died.

Personality: Chester was once a kind and loving boy, with great ambitions and goals. Since the experimenting though, he's been cold, and angry. Killing all life forms that pose a threat to him. He feels no mercy, except towards children. Knowing that they have been treated to such monstrosities as he once was, and suffered in silence. It takes alot for him to kill creatures that don't pose a threat, because a small part of him, the human part, still wants to be the Chester of times past.

Physical Attributes: The aliens constant experimenting left Chester scarred and changed. He has snowy white skin, and steely gray eyes. His hair is long and messy. He stands at approx 6'2 and is around his mid 20's, with a slender and lean build. He has overly long fingernails, and usually wears his ragged soldier uniform, now too small, and filthy. Chester is fast, and not very strong.

Weapon/power: Chester can fire laser beams from his eyes. He can change the density and size of the beams from anywhere in between: Cutting off the wings of a fly with a warm beam, to bea

name: Luciano

Backstory: Luciano was, in his time, a famous greek warrior. He turned the tide on many of the battles in ancient history and won much favour with the gods. He earned a spot, through his combat abilities and raw physical strength, sitting on Zeus's right hand. Allthough he was still only human and longed for the power of a god. Zeus saw Luciano's jealousy of his power and struck him back down to earth, where for 20 years he attempted to get back up, driven insane from the severe drop in power he had experienced his body fell into massive malnourishment where he had done nothing else but prayed to the gods. When zeus looked back down onto him he saw what he had become in his name and punished him to forever live underground and cursed him with immortality, where he would be forced to constantly train his body to a perfect physical state. Unfortunatly upon being earthed from underground he is now longer immortal, but he has endured more pain on the body and mind then any and will therefore be quite able to take what people can throw at him

Personality: Luciano is a completly feral human being, and after near on 2 millenia of doing nothing but training himself physically for combat he is probably as strong and as fast as any human being ever could be. 2 millenia of living underground has had a massive effect on his mind, all social skills he once had have now vanished and he is nothing but a mindless brute of a killing machine.

Physical attributes: Scars from the battles he had in his previous mortal state linger, but they are tiny when compared to his massive bulk. His face is seemingly tiny compared to the rest of his body, he is completly hairless. Being a feral human, any clothes that remained have been torn off (apart from a loincloth to conceal his dignity, unless you want this guys titanic wang flying about half the time)

Weapon: Allthough his mind has mostly turned to mush, he still rationlises slightly and knows to pick up a blunt object to hit people with, but he doesnt hold onto it for long and will resort to tearing apart people with his bare hands most of the time

also if you want to think of a better name for him thats great because im not very good with names

Nice. Added. Also, expect an edit in I was wrong some minutes or so. I'm going to make a character.

Name: Dave Peterson

Backstory: Dave used to be a normal guy. He was a teenager before he changed, and since then he's always been 16 years old. If he still aged, he would be 24.
Going back though, when Dave was 16, he used to live in a city. He went to school normally, he got average grades, there was nothing special about him. While he was walking home from school, all he did was pick up a rock that was laying in the street. It was the perfect skipping rock. Thin and smooth with thin edges. The thing was shaped like a small discus ring. After a while of walking with hit, he lost interest in the rock and he threw it against the fence of his house for his amusement. Much to his surprise though, the rock exploded with the force of a frag grenade. It blew him onto the ground, and peices of the rock were embedded into his skin. He then blacked out.
He woke up in the hospital. His friends had called the ambulance, and he had been cared for. However when he looked at himself, he was perfectly fine. The hospital let him out in about an hour, amazed at how he was healthy. As he walked, he noticed he was a lot lighter on his feet than before. Taking some tenetive hops, he then wound up and jumped as high as he could.
And then he found out he could fly.

Personality: Since he got his powers, he didn't change much. He didn't grow power hungry or violent. He stayed the same. He kept his old friends, who are all largely jealous of his eternal youth, and he works at the same job he always did. To say it in a sentence, Dave is a happy person.

Power:: Flying, though he can heal very quickly. Just in case the moment arose, Dave taught himself how to use his flying powers. Either if he's blasting away at the speed of sound, or diving towards whatever threat he's facing. He trained himself in the use of a kitchen steak knife.

Physical Attributes: Black hair that goes down to his ears, and blue eyes that have a sparkle to them. The rest of face is normal. And he's about 6 feet tall.

Kay, that's great ^-^ (I thought he was a little over powered too :heh: )

I just need 3 more people. Come on guys. D:

Uhmm,Leave a spot open for me Plox? i don't have time tonight to write the Crap,But ill write the Stuff needed tomorrow,Should be Fun. ^__^

I doubt the spots will be taken by tomarrow, but sure.

Mkayy thanks man,But i might not write it Early,Beach tomorrow,But don't worry,Ill write.

Name: Gary Herring (Mindfreak)

Backstory: A normal guy, who ever since he was a kid wanted to be a scientist. One of his childhood dreams, however, was to tap into the unused portion of a human's brain... He worked day after day, trying to find what was locked inside his own head. Once he finally created what was a prototype of his machine, no one would go near it. The machine was designed as a sort of helmet connected to a small nuclear-powered unit. It would administer a powerful electric shock to the unused parts of your brain. He decided to test it himself. He set up the helmet and put it on his head, walked to the nuclear unit, and turned it on. Pain unlike any a human endured flashed in his head, felling like someone was banging on it with a sledgehammer and would never stop.
He woke up a few days later in hospital intensive care. The nurse immediately gasped and ran from the room. Gary sat there in the room, waiting, when a doctor came in. He asked him not to speak and hooked him up to a brainwave scanner, like the ones used on chimpanzees. The doctor told him they had been doing tests on his vitals ever since the lab has shorted out the entire city's power. He turned the brainwave machine on and the digital readout began rising. Up and up the readout went, faster and faster, until finally it read: ERROR. Ever since that day, Gary has been testing his newfound super brain. He also tests his new powers...

Personality: Gary was always smart, but the lab accident has increased this by over 500%. He had a compassion for animals and people that he hadn't ever been able to get past, but if he or a friend of his is endangered, He will do anything to protect them/him. He has a contempt for bodybuilders, and he is very trustworthy. If told a secret, he would not speak in the worst of tortures.

Physical Attributes: He is thin but strong, with blue eyes and fair brown hair. He has a deep look, and seems to analyze everything in the blink of an eye. He is not frail, but he is not bulky either. Gary is never seen without his white labcoat and black slacks.

Weapon/Power: He has developed psychokinetic powers like children dream of. He can move objects with his mind, he can see without being there to see, and he is smarter than a supercomputer. Enemies beware, because his super-smart brain can outsmart you easily.

How's that?

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Name: Gary Herring (Mindfreak)

Backstory: A normal guy, who ever since he was a kid wanted to be a scientist. One of his childhood dreams, however, was to tap into the unused portion of a human's brain... He worked day after day, trying to find what was locked inside his own head. Once he finally created what was a prototype of his machine, no one would go near it. The machine was designed as a sort of helmet connected to a small nuclear-powered unit. It would administer a powerful electric shock to the unused parts of your brain. He decided to test it himself. He set up the helmet and put it on his head, walked to the nuclear unit, and turned it on. Pain unlike any a human endured flashed in his head, felling like someone was banging on it with a sledgehammer and would never stop.
He woke up a few days later in hospital intensive care. The nurse immediately gasped and ran from the room. Gary sat there in the room, waiting, when a doctor came in. He asked him not to speak and hooked him up to a brainwave scanner, like the ones used on chimpanzees. The doctor told him they had been doing tests on his vitals ever since the lab has shorted out the entire city's power. He turned the brainwave machine on and the digital readout began rising. Up and up the readout went, faster and faster, until finally it read: ERROR. Ever since that day, Gary has been testing his newfound super brain. He also tests his new powers...

Personality: Gary was always smart, but the lab accident has increased this by over 500%. He had a compassion for animals and people that he hadn't ever been able to get past, but if he or a friend of his is endangered, He will do anything to protect them/him. He has a contempt for bodybuilders, and he is very trustworthy. If told a secret, he would not speak in the worst of tortures.

Physical Attributes: He is thin but strong, with blue eyes and fair brown hair. He has a deep look, and seems to analyze everything in the blink of an eye. He is not frail, but he is not bulky either. Gary is never seen without his white labcoat and black slacks.

Weapon/Power: He has developed psychokinetic powers like children dream of. He can move objects with his mind. Telekenisis. And he is smarter than a supercomputer. Enemies beware, because his super-smart brain can outsmart you easily.

How's that?

Added.
Two spots left that need to be taken.

thats incredibly shit if you dont mind me saying

Inorite. The Atlantean thing wasn't supposed to be serious.
:V

I'll redo it later. Deleting.

Name: Ex-Saith
Backstory: Saith was 15,He Knew he had a strange life since the age of 5,When he woke up in the middle of the night to his Parents fighting.His mother talking in a Strange Voice,That Saith just couldn't Understand,And his dad repeatedly Saying "No,No,No..." He was too young then to understand any of it,But it went on For a good Half hour Before Saith dozed off in the hallway.That Was the first night The strange things started happening,After then,More and more Weird event's Were arousing.On Saith's 10th Birthday,He woke up thinking it was going to be like any other birthday,Until He heard the Whole Family Was coming.I guess Turning Ten to them,Is a special occasion,And Saith Shorty found out,That night,The whole story was told to him,He was 70% Exaziathian.His mother Came from a breed of Exaziathian,A Pure Breed in the galaxy of Distrotion.They were a Breed of Advanced Complexity,And Unthinkable Imagination.They told him that Once he turned 10 At 12 o'clock Things,Would never be the same.5 Years later Saith has Evolved more Rapidly then any other Exaziathian Before,He has Already Mastered his Camouflage And Agility.But,he went on living His normal life,With his Other life is Secrecy. Here and there Learning more and More. But,That can always be Difficult When your parents randomly disappear...
Personality: Saith is a Secret person,Usually keeps to himself,He's learned that Trust is Hard to give,And to add on,He's Bipolar.
Physical Attributes: Saith Has Long black Hair Down to his neck in the Back,And Just past his Eyes and Ears in the Front.He has Bright Hazel eyes That Glow in The Sunlight.He Has snake bites(Piercing On the Lips).He's 5'11 And weighs 80 lb's.He's Light due to His Ancestry.He Is A fast learner and Very Agile.
Weapon/Power: His weapon is a Butterfly Knife from which His Grandfather gave him on his 10th Birthday,It can Extend to the Size of a Longsword,And is Very deadly.

There it is. ;D