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Feb 27, 2010 5:54 AM #551393
you to buddy :3
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Feb 27, 2010 8:54 AM #551436
Jutsu wins. Good job both of you though; it was a little entertaining to read.
If one of you want to rap battle against me for fun then feel free.
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Feb 27, 2010 9:26 AM #551449
Let's do it yo, also I added you on msn.
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Feb 27, 2010 11:12 AM #551469
Hey check it.
Sometimes I want to shout,
knowing that some live without meaning.
Showing that I doubt what nonsense comes from those singing.
I spit rhetorics, they spit without thinking.
I'm trying to blur the line of reality and dreaming.
Theoretic and being visceral,
sonic sound crashes through the air and hits your nerve central.
The realizations send them off screaming,
like a preview for what I would eventually like being.
Living for nobody but me,
just living free, living to be me.
To show that even poetically,
one can still bounce their head to the melody.
Not unwillingly, but consentually, making shit heavy.
Lyrically I can be lethal and abstruse,
like making you tie your own neuse,
or verbal abuse.
But it's always nice to avoid spewing nonsense,
but to spare you of the pretence,
make a meaningful sentence.
Ensnare you in a flow,
powerful, so much so;
that you don't even dare recall what you think you know.
Some act readily, like a war of the world is the worst reality,
try the world without words,
without any chords.
Would you lose the ability to express and speak against you own accord?
No, I digress the world will not stand for it,
bliss isn't ignorance.
Everyone congregating beneath one flag, it's a matter of importance.
It would only be hours,
before we decided to take it back it's ours.
Perhaps not a flag but a tone resounding end to start.
That noise is art.
See people fight for what they love,
this earth, the cosmos, the starts above.
I can't get enough I'm addicted and vindictive.
It's seductive and I love it.
Rhymes indicative of a real beat fanatic.
I am complacent whenever I get to say shit.
But everyday routines are static,
escaping the entrapment leaves me ecstatic.
I am curious,
how people live life so platitudinous, I'm serious, it's eeriness.
We need something pushing us, humanity is sinking.
It's getting ridiculous, gets me thinking.
Wish I was the best,
rock it with finesse,
just say yes and be able.
To show the thoughts that are stable, with a particular guile,
make my opinions worth while;
if I had enough style, rhyme it for miles.
Lifes like a long road,
you get to the and it all corrodes,
like hopping stepping stones across the water,
except the stones get smaller.
It gives way under nose,
kind of makes you wonder where the beginning goes.
Man who knows?
You blink once and it all ends, everything vanishes.
Your love,
your friends.
All good things will come to an end.
Some you offend, others you defend and the ones that are pretend.
You turn your head and a new life starts the cycle again.
But it's my purgative to make myself heard,
my objective to tell the world.
Not morally but artistically,
logically to avoid the ad hominem.
I just want what matters to be heard again,
a message to send.
Like a blend of heart and soul,
A listeners beginning is full, of what makes the world push and pull.
Drastically change their life,
they grow happy,
a kid and a wife, before it ends, they turn their head.
A new life start's the cycle again.

Hey never said it had to be agressive, just who evers rap was most impressive? Your go dude, this shit put me in a good mood, it's like that high you get after you eat your favorite food.
Edit: Oh dear, <.< it would appear I can't stop I fear.
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Feb 27, 2010 11:26 AM #551471
Edit: ****dammit Jutsu. Way to ninja me with an essay :C
I'm not replying to allllll that. But a non-aggressive rap battle would be nice; disregard this text below.
Edit2: Well I guess I should reply to your huge essay thing anyways. It'd be a big waste of time on your part. Excuse me while I post another rap that isn't nearly that long because I'm not insane

Well let's get this shit started, I knew it was coming,
Time to send your ass back, crying and running.
Nothing but a boy now, you'll trip, you'll cower,
Breathless and lost, cause you've just met Devour.
Let's see if your words which you have so much pride,
Can match and dispatch what I've got on my side.
Could vocabulary provide much more than thrill?
It's worthless and useless against such skill.
Words flow fluently from my lips as I deliver
The rhymes and the words which make you shudder and quiver
Like deer, stalked by a tiger's great claws,
Rhymes coming weakly from the animal's maws.
Let's see what you got, it's your turn now,
Let's see what you sputter in return to this vow.
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Feb 27, 2010 1:45 PM #551490
A words worth a thousand pictures.
It's art and linguistics flawlessly blended,
I say **** the statistics, bring the DJ and the mixer.
Let's pump the bass, in the arms of music where all brothers.
My rhymes are intended,
the base like a wall to a fixture,
like halls support the walls,
beams support the halls,
and the floor supports it all.
Given situations, I rock the foundations.
Like water from a kitchen sink.
Creativity bursts from within me.
Where my thoughts are traced to where I think, infinitely,
Confidently, evidently, in the form of me rapping.
My bloods laced with innuendo.
Legions would fall if I say so.
Based on what I know,
the influence of flow
and what it shows.
For convenience I don't see with my eyes anymore,
I see with my heart now.
For, I can drop another metaphor.
The house can collapse if you slam the door.
The kick and snare, when it comes to this I've got love to spare.
I here the same beat everywhere, even when no ones around,
the sound, resounds and pounds.
Like the rapid beat of my heart.
I wish my eyes where open to start.
It would be thus, if I was more smart.
In part, I wish for more music.
You could call it love sick, whenever I hear something that sounds exotic.
The sound is toxic, caustic.
I can't pause it, but why would I want to?
I want to smell the sweet perfume.
My love for music is like the sky is blue,
It's absolute and true.
No convulsions, I share it's pulse and whenever, whatever, forever.
That tie can't be severed,
this feeling is tethered,
as soft as a feather.
It will never leave, until the day my life is drained, but I believe,
That it'll still remain, like the blood in my veins.
We share joy and pain, I'll never be the same.
Ever since music came my way.
It's like fortune and fame and the sun and rain,
No ones to blame.
Because it's my main source of happiness.
Like a river to it's fish,
I feel it's flow when it goes boom, boom, tish.
The effect is hard to miss.
It's impact and effectiveness.
When it hits people look like they just got smacked, or they just got dissed.
The pure shock, like it's their first time feeling it.
It's music's sweet kiss.
And don't forget.
You will end with regret,
what would you expect?
Show music respect and inject,
that mix tape, just don't put in any shit that's fake.
50 cent, lil wayne, justin timberlake.
Their rhymes aren't decent, the music they make.
Be careful what you listen to for **** sake.
Just chill and intake what you can.
That bond between music and man, don't abuse it.
Use it and understand.
What classic and what's not, drop it if it's not hot or chill.
Make sure that shit gets heard, you get a feel,
you understand it loud and clear.
Don't fear to test other styles.
It's all near, shit could leave you wild,
it might be worthwhile, no denial.
It makes me smile, even if it' been a while.
Just lay back, recline.
Say back, feel happiness.
From ten to nine, but music is timeless.
It's too damn fine.
To be restricted by the human mind,
designs to intricate to define.
Grab it with your soul and say "It's mine"
It's a right that belongs to human kind.
Conveying the might and creativity.
Portraying the strength and productivity.
Displaying the power and flexibility.
The opus of it's end result.
The beginning of it's retort.
The status you know.
The sadness to show.
The tricks I flow.
All things it stands for.
I implore, even more.
It can't be simply ignored, locked away in your thoughts.
A spiraling staircase with drops.
Another song you face, with every step you take.
Don't take it for granted,
without your notice it expanded.
Where you focused it landed, a location most people abandon.
They shut it in, forget it exist.
But still it persists and insists that you seize and desist.
In the midst it comes back, a colorful flash, you remember.
You forgot the past, it happened so fast.
There was a huge blast, a huge mass,
What you forgot, what you thought was gone.
A missing song, you missed it far too long.
Don't lose it this time, it should be a crime.
I rhyme like I got no time, I can just keep going without any sign of stopping.
Or knowing when I will stop flowing,slowing, but showing,
That every line has meaning.


I am sorry but I have to put this down before I pass out, it's like five here, I thought your retort would be finish by now, so I got a head start working on this monster, not considering you're doing shit like sleeping or something. Anyways heres my reply to whatever you post.
Edit: I'm giving this shit my all dude.
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Feb 27, 2010 2:05 PM #551496
What the hell man
Why is a wall of text covering my screen
Do you actually expect me to write a retort to all that
Get ahold of yourself and click Quick Reply instead of going on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on
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Feb 27, 2010 2:06 PM #551497
I would like a rematch with Jutsu tomorrow. This is on the basis that by then he'll be worth about 9 points and have used up all his words.
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Feb 27, 2010 2:08 PM #551499
Bring it zed, I accept thee's challenge and will reply to it in full force.
Who goes first?
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Feb 27, 2010 2:12 PM #551501
Can I still join?
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Feb 27, 2010 2:13 PM #551502
Yup .
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Feb 27, 2010 2:28 PM #551508
Lol sorry I was gone for a while.
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Feb 27, 2010 5:29 PM #551565
was mines and ogrilla's judged yet? because our battle is finished
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Feb 27, 2010 7:10 PM #551577
Yeah someone judge mine and jutsus
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Feb 28, 2010 9:31 AM #551797
Quote from Moch12
directed to Dinomut
Errr Thankfully I know what that means......Ill try my best.
But I dont exactly you know
Ryhme like you.
It seems like you put your guts in those letters........
So Ill try but Im gonna be ranking on you
Sorry
:T

Well I godda reboot
the ryhmes are gonna go ape wall
About twice as tall,as what seems to be
My rappin destiny,so I hear by decree
you godda do more than ryhme,
YOu godda walk up them steps,
But take your time,we dont want a mess,
Because this will be your road to success,dont stress
The road ahead will be dark and filled trouble,
But youve godda be ready to Rumble,with destiny
dont stumble,or fumble, this wont be an ecstasy
Just fight to the top,and gain your place
Or Ill rip your face
In 2

lol
That's all ive got your turn :3

NOTE:
Ecstasy means cup of tea
lol


You got the voracity to question my audacity?
My rhythms take you to the point of pure modal ecstasy
Your rhymes are shitty next to me
Vocal vomit's all I see
Verbs slapped together with the vain hope of relevancy
I capture the essence of all of life's great lessons
shower wisdom on the masses blessed with my fleeting presence
My flows are so hot, I glow with incandescence
And if things get ugly, no need for no Smith & Wesson's
I spit so hard and acidic I'll melt down both of your eyeballs
so intense I blast the plaster off and leave only drywall
So if you wanna avoid swift death at the hands of me
I suggest you forfeit all your hopes to win and simply flee
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