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Apr 13, 2010 7:14 PM #569165
The ball looked a bit shaky at the start, as did the lower right leg (although I expect that bit would be fixed if you sorted out the foot placement). I think you could have kept extending the arm that pulls back. I also think he picks up his back leg too early. It should straighten before it lifts. And on the very last frame the bit where the ball leaves the screen needs to be lower. It's not bad though. They're very small errors.
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Apr 13, 2010 7:15 PM #569167
Add feet to your guy, it actually helps with the foot placement trust me.
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Apr 13, 2010 7:26 PM #569174
Why thank you guys, both of you.
I'll work on it if I continue the animation.
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Apr 16, 2010 3:11 PM #570398
Looking good,the dud(Lol ryhmes).
But you seems to be double framing after each attack.
It makes it look....wierd,anyway i like the easing as smoothness of the combo.
Keep it up!
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Apr 16, 2010 4:06 PM #570428
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That was a nice animation.
Very smooth and it flowed well.
Delete the frame before the punch because it makes it look out of place.
And work on foot placement.


Couldn't have said it better myself.
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Apr 16, 2010 4:11 PM #570431
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Couldn't have said it better myself.


Then why post?

Also, razr, didn't you used to be much better?
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Apr 20, 2010 3:41 AM #572295
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Then why post?

Also, razr, didn't you used to be much better?


I used to be much worse, and thank you all for your feedback. I just reinstalled my operating system and will be animating again shortly.
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Apr 21, 2010 12:19 AM #572767
hey, how can I make animations.
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Apr 21, 2010 4:45 AM #572915
pretty fluid, my first animating tests were TERRIBLE, but i got better, but not by much. i liked the walking and punching one, but like i said, every one only gets better. best of luck. (ill try to post an animations soon, first, i need to make it, second, i need to find out how to post it.)
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Apr 21, 2010 4:51 AM #572918
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hey, how can I make animations.

Pivot Tutorials
Flash Tutorials
EasyToon Tutorials

Ask me this question in my animation thread again and I'll cut your testicles off.
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Apr 21, 2010 3:08 PM #573134
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Pivot Tutorials
Flash Tutorials
EasyToon Tutorials

Ask me this question in my animation thread again and I'll cut your testicles off.

O_O
Dude.....


Uuum...anyway...
On the newest animation the feet are much better this time around, however the main issue is the lack of easing. I understand your going for the powerful look, in which case just ease less but still ease. There aren't that many other major problems with it aside from minor stiffness problems. Make another combo please.
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Apr 22, 2010 10:40 PM #573736
thanks the dude
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Apr 23, 2010 6:30 PM #574053
W8 your razrblade?
Remember when me you were the only ones in the pivot beginners section?
And then Zed was like Santa and you were his little helper?
I'm dfr179 btw.
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Apr 24, 2010 4:20 PM #574638
your animations look funny, but to do a punch the arms should to be down of the shoulders or at the same place , the kick is too elevate and not enough to the front
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Apr 29, 2010 1:40 AM #577441
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Ask me this question in my animation thread again and I'll cut your testicles off.


If only he had some.

There pretty good. The kick is a stretch. Lol