(yes, these are mine.) i made a fairly good pivot. I hated the drop of water in the last part. More to come. c&c?

hey you're cinnamonbun right
I think you've definitely improved from whatever you used to animate, where you barely incorporated basics. You still could use a floor, and maybe move the back a little more during some movements. Other than that, just keep on doing what you're doing - improving.

Yes im cinnamonbun. Thank you for C

Thank you. :D

Update! new run style. bad? edit. Changed speed.

Hey use a better stick, the thicker the limbs the easier it is to ease.
Remember to move every thing in every frame.

When i moved the back, i thought the movements would be a little unnatural.

Yeah, I've never found a way to make the back move without getting shaky or slo-mo. There's just not a high enough frame rate. Best I've done is:



And even that's got a jerk in the back.

That new run is far superior to the old one. Keeping the knee bent all the way through the forwards motion is best. The more similar to mine, the better ;)

the run cycle is good but if you used a better stick it would be great

i like the run but i dont think i should be saying anything because am not that good when it comes to running in pivot [video]http://www.truploader.com/uploads/596194[/video] thats how good i am at running.

http://www.truploader.com/view/596194
Ouch.

Oh. I used a better stick i made. Those holes are his eyes.

so he's permanently staring at you? are are they movable?

Yeah, they are movable. I just tend to get lazy. X3