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Apr 27, 2010 10:35 PM #576915
I think this is my best flash ever. Im gonna go make some more.
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/189827Flashcom.swf

If possible could some one give me some C&C. I wanna gets better

Dash!
http://www.truploader.com/uploads/887760Flashcom.swf
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Apr 28, 2010 9:09 AM #577162
You're definitely improving, the first one was very smooth, but a little wobbly. The second one had great particles, but the dash lacked anticipation.
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Apr 28, 2010 10:30 AM #577173
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You're definitely improving, the first one was very smooth, but a little wobbly. The second one had great particles, but the dash lacked anticipation.

Thanks Vendetta How would I add anticipation to the dash? should he lean forward some more?
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Apr 28, 2010 11:01 AM #577181
Yes. And on the legs, if you are applying lots of force. The combo was awesome.
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Apr 28, 2010 11:14 AM #577185
Well, there's one i want to clarify first. Did you meant that trail in his head in the first animation? Or did you bend that accidentally with the selection tool?
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