Alrighty then sammy. I'm not going to Cnc the other ones, everyones already got that. Im going to specifically cnc the angle. First thing that I notice is there's no build up to it. It just starts off at the same momentum it ends at. This is not correct. It would be ideal if they were to get into a running stance, begin to lean forward then start the run. But, you may not know how to do that yet, so, AT LEAST begin slowly, start with a lean or at most a slow step into a faster one into the run. Also, I usually double frame the end of the angle, gives it a "not so sudden" flowing feel to it and the next one. Another thing I noticed is the start up is a bit stiff and the back is straight the whole thing. This is also a problem. No one runs/dashes with their back straight. Period. It was pretty short, so thats all I have for now.
Edit: ;_;