Quote from Ikarhan

I'll wipe out the sixth fucker and stand on the throne

lol, what is he/she is irremovable ;)

Then he'll start on the next. XD

guys,your giving me nerves :|

O.o huh? "Giving you nerves"? Making you nervous? How?

Don't you guys see how much you all (except Luz) say all his tryouts are bad, without saying the positive points? Normal that he's nervous. He's making FOUR TRYOUTS ! He wanna be one of you. At least be kind with him and tell him his strong points and how to get better on some other points, with a constructive CnC. I already did that by PM for him !

http://filz.us/Shs

this is rushed,but I made this 3 days so,its bad is'nt?

It is pretty good to my eyes. You had improved and it's much smoother and slower. You might get in for my opinion :)
just get better sound effects from the Terkoiz Gift on youtube (type "terkoiz gift" and dowload tons of sounds in his description)
Music would be cool but only if it fits the animation. Don't just throw in your favourite music :)

Quote from Ikarhan

It is pretty good to my eyes. You had improved and it's much smoother and slower. You might get in for my opinion :)
just get better sound effects from the Terkoiz Gift on youtube (type "terkoiz gift" and dowload tons of sounds in his description)
Music would be cool but only if it fits the animation. Don't just throw in your favourite music :)

thanks man :D sure wish to get in :D

Quote from Frost10114

http://filz.us/Shs

this is rushed,but I made this 3 days so,its bad is'nt?

u r improving son

Thanks alot Mark helped me twice :D thanks

my style of anmating is big head small/slim body,and heads first the body then arms :D thanks!

Quote from Frost10114

http://filz.us/Shs

this is rushed,but I made this 3 days so,its bad is'nt?

It's good, but you just threw off what i have said.

Don't rush.

I made my tryout in one day!!!

Well, I'll make a reserve till next week.

Make something smoother, please c:

Quote from Frost10114

Thanks alot Mark helped me twice :D thanks

my style of anmating is big head small/slim body,and heads first the body then arms :D thanks!

little advice, animate body first

Quote from Luzoto

Um, that's not quite it. We're hoping for you to be able to improve the quality of your animations. Length doesn't necessarily reflect that, and neither do backgrounds.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOouzsIPNWs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSGqsH01gKY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVcZ4AOKo3w

I found these tutorials to be pretty helpful in teaching easing and other basics in animation when I first started out, but there are other resources you can try and take advantage of if you want to improve your animation :)

Quote from Ikarhan

Don't you guys see how much you all (except Luz) say all his tryouts are bad, without saying the positive points? Normal that he's nervous. He's making FOUR TRYOUTS ! He wanna be one of you. At least be kind with him and tell him his strong points and how to get better on some other points, with a constructive CnC. I already did that by PM for him !

Quote from Frost10114

http://filz.us/Shs

this is rushed,but I made this 3 days so,its bad is'nt?

The animation seems to contradict with all this @_@

Well, once you try out these tips, it's more or less practice makes perfect. Don't be afraid to erase frames if you have to in order to ensure that a part looks smooth, and remember to spend plenty of time editing and ironing out your animation.

Animation
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Smoothness: 6.9/10 - Could be smoother. Try increasing the brush smoothing, or drawing faster. This will decrease that wobbliness.

Style: 8.0/10 - Could have been better presented.

Angles - 5.2/10 - I recommend not doing angles until you get better at animation, or if you practice on angles a lot. The angles was a bit confusing.
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All in all, I still vote No. Sorry.