::DELTA:: [Insert Motto Here] \o/
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Aug 17, 2013 2:56 PM #1067855
I'll wipe out the sixth fucker and stand on the throne
Aug 17, 2013 2:57 PM #1067858
Quote from IkarhanI'll wipe out the sixth fucker and stand on the throne
lol, what is he/she is irremovable ;)
Aug 17, 2013 7:03 PM #1068038
Then he'll start on the next. XD
Aug 18, 2013 6:40 AM #1068273
guys,your giving me nerves :|
Aug 18, 2013 6:45 AM #1068283
O.o huh? "Giving you nerves"? Making you nervous? How?
Aug 18, 2013 7:11 AM #1068310
Don't you guys see how much you all (except Luz) say all his tryouts are bad, without saying the positive points? Normal that he's nervous. He's making FOUR TRYOUTS ! He wanna be one of you. At least be kind with him and tell him his strong points and how to get better on some other points, with a constructive CnC. I already did that by PM for him !
Aug 18, 2013 9:07 AM #1068392
Aug 18, 2013 9:36 AM #1068406
It is pretty good to my eyes. You had improved and it's much smoother and slower. You might get in for my opinion :)
just get better sound effects from the Terkoiz Gift on youtube (type "terkoiz gift" and dowload tons of sounds in his description)
Music would be cool but only if it fits the animation. Don't just throw in your favourite music :)
just get better sound effects from the Terkoiz Gift on youtube (type "terkoiz gift" and dowload tons of sounds in his description)
Music would be cool but only if it fits the animation. Don't just throw in your favourite music :)
Aug 18, 2013 9:44 AM #1068410
Quote from IkarhanIt is pretty good to my eyes. You had improved and it's much smoother and slower. You might get in for my opinion :)
just get better sound effects from the Terkoiz Gift on youtube (type "terkoiz gift" and dowload tons of sounds in his description)
Music would be cool but only if it fits the animation. Don't just throw in your favourite music :)
thanks man :D sure wish to get in :D
Aug 18, 2013 12:49 PM #1068481
Quote from Frost10114
u r improving son
Aug 18, 2013 1:00 PM #1068487
Thanks alot Mark helped me twice :D thanks
my style of anmating is big head small/slim body,and heads first the body then arms :D thanks!
my style of anmating is big head small/slim body,and heads first the body then arms :D thanks!
Aug 18, 2013 1:15 PM #1068498
Quote from Frost10114
It's good, but you just threw off what i have said.
Don't rush.
I made my tryout in one day!!!
Well, I'll make a reserve till next week.
Make something smoother, please c:
Aug 18, 2013 1:19 PM #1068500
Quote from Frost10114Thanks alot Mark helped me twice :D thanks
my style of anmating is big head small/slim body,and heads first the body then arms :D thanks!
little advice, animate body first
Aug 18, 2013 2:55 PM #1068533
Quote from LuzotoUm, that's not quite it. We're hoping for you to be able to improve the quality of your animations. Length doesn't necessarily reflect that, and neither do backgrounds.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOouzsIPNWs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSGqsH01gKY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVcZ4AOKo3w
I found these tutorials to be pretty helpful in teaching easing and other basics in animation when I first started out, but there are other resources you can try and take advantage of if you want to improve your animation :)
Quote from IkarhanDon't you guys see how much you all (except Luz) say all his tryouts are bad, without saying the positive points? Normal that he's nervous. He's making FOUR TRYOUTS ! He wanna be one of you. At least be kind with him and tell him his strong points and how to get better on some other points, with a constructive CnC. I already did that by PM for him !
Quote from Frost10114
The animation seems to contradict with all this @_@
Well, once you try out these tips, it's more or less practice makes perfect. Don't be afraid to erase frames if you have to in order to ensure that a part looks smooth, and remember to spend plenty of time editing and ironing out your animation.
Aug 18, 2013 5:57 PM #1068602
Animation
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Smoothness: 6.9/10 - Could be smoother. Try increasing the brush smoothing, or drawing faster. This will decrease that wobbliness.
Style: 8.0/10 - Could have been better presented.
Angles - 5.2/10 - I recommend not doing angles until you get better at animation, or if you practice on angles a lot. The angles was a bit confusing.
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All in all, I still vote No. Sorry.
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Smoothness: 6.9/10 - Could be smoother. Try increasing the brush smoothing, or drawing faster. This will decrease that wobbliness.
Style: 8.0/10 - Could have been better presented.
Angles - 5.2/10 - I recommend not doing angles until you get better at animation, or if you practice on angles a lot. The angles was a bit confusing.
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All in all, I still vote No. Sorry.