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Jul 29, 2016 6:56 AM #1456072
Literally, if you take it, don't glorify it, just treat it like any old battle with a twist, then it shouldn't crash and burn at all. I just added the new participants to my story and am half way done with my firat draft. Just getting a headstart while admin is being discussed.
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Jul 29, 2016 10:05 AM #1456098
Thread going up in a bit. Just got home from school.
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Jul 30, 2016 3:46 AM #1456308
I was thinking about a past post I made about my wRHG Levi. I wanted to replace his weapons, dual kunai, with butterfly swords. But that would take away the chance for him to throw his weapons. What if I gave him a set of both? Would that work?
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Jul 30, 2016 4:13 AM #1456319
Well Ignus, I have one sentence to summarize what I'm about to say: Worry about theme, not capability. Really, your character doesn't need ranged weapons.
Really with all the smoke shit you have going on with your character it makes more sense for him to have a melee weapon. Since you know, it's harder to aim when your target is obscured. However by the same token, you also say your character is a perfectionist. In this case, using a weapon that has throwing capabilities sense it fits that whole "perfect marksman" sort of attitude in that he would probably be seen just throwing his kunai at targets for hours on end.
Then again, you also have such great lines as:
"-Levi is a close quarters fighter. Keep your distance." (About this. You're not my real mom, I do what I want. Especially if my character is also a CQC specialist)
"-He starts with powerful kicks, then uses his powers."
Which with these two statements you seem to want him have that more assassin style of fighting, using smoke to give him an advantage in close quarters combat. Yet still you give him smoke projectiles (Which hurt somehow).

You seem to have a conflicting opinion on what you want the guy to be doing or how he fights. My suggestion is to not worry about your range and just stick to the butterfly swords. Plus, the more limited the character the more they have to be clever in order to solve problems, which leads to better writing.
Again though, it's just really dependent on what direction you want to take him.
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Jul 30, 2016 4:19 AM #1456320
I was more thinking about giving him some longer reaching weapons that would be easier to counter larger weapons with, like actual swords and crap. Butterfly swords are admirably larger than a kunai is, but they aren't so big that Levi would have to change his fighting style.
Being primarily wielded in tandem with another Butterfly sword, the blades would work pretty well to his advantage, considering he's accustomed to fighting dual wield.

Also, I'm not trying to change his fighting style, just trying to give him a better way to counter larger melee weapons. If anything, the swords could be used depending on what his opponent uses.

EDIT: Another thing, Levi's a short blade wielding expert. The kunai are his first choice, but he can effectively use any type of blade. So I think adding another type of knife to his arsenal wouldn't hurt, especially if he didn't use it for every battle.
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Jul 30, 2016 5:07 AM #1456326
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I was more thinking about giving him some longer reaching weapons that would be easier to counter larger weapons with, like actual swords and crap.


This is exactly what I'm telling you to NOT worry about. Theme>Capability. If you are to change anything about your character here don't do it to "counter" other wRHG's. You don't need to change your character into one who makes it easier to write your victory against others. If anything, that's the exact thing you should always avoid. You have no idea how many times Vern has changed Gamma because Gamma can just do SO MUCH and has WAY too many answers to every scenario. Vern gets away with it because he often has Gamma get caught off guard (Example: The Blade Mercenaries vs. Gamma) or just by writing the story well (Example: Most of his battles). Even then, he still changes the guy.

It's NOT about match-up. This isn't some fighting where we increase like Kirby's foot size or some shit in order to give him a better matchup versus other zoning characters or whatever. It's much more interesting to read about a hero using cover, making careful predictions, and trying work against his opponent who has the Bow of Grossly Unfair Range than it is for the MC to just to install an Auto-Locking Laser Cannon of Overly Convenient Cover Fire.

Given your reasoning behind new weapons, I would say to NOT change the weapons.
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Aug 2, 2016 6:50 PM #1456836
Given that it's been three days since my last post, I feel safe double posting.

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Aug 10, 2016 1:36 AM #1457627
Question: Why is it there hasn't been a convenient blank for CSs in all these years?

Query: What goes well with a gravedigger theme? I have some ideas, but I'm fishing for better ones.

Statement: I'll be making a new gladiator, we'll see how long that lasts.

Belated Greeting: Also, hiya! How are you (Yes, you. Dear reader, I've singled you out, in particular.) doing?
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Aug 10, 2016 3:17 AM #1457635
I'm actively trying to gage how complicatedcated it is, but if I'm not careful secrets may be in jepordy and feelingss could be hurt.

And there sorta is if you copy the guidelines, but a lotta people play with the order, so eh.

And do you want to compliment or contrast it? Latern, that fighting shovel things the military used to(?) have, possible plant powers, necromancy for agree, but for flip, somehow plant fits again, water powers, light or things of that nature.

Looking forward to the new one, and welcome back!
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Aug 10, 2016 6:30 AM #1457645
What I have so far. Not going to add more abilities. Might change Atrixus's Blessing, a bit. Not sure what to. The point of it was to be flavorful/situational, and deathsense.

Mortimer, so far (Click to Show)
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Aug 10, 2016 8:15 AM #1457651
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What I have so far. Not going to add more abilities. Might change Atrixus's Blessing, a bit. Not sure what to. The point of it was to be flavorful/situational, and deathsense.

Mortimer, so far (Click to Show)


Yo, neat character. Very neat. I'm excited to see where he goes!

"Lay to Rest" seems situational(though as a writer I suppose you get to make those situations) to the point where it's usefulness is questionable and I think it might need a bit more clarification as to what "increased effectiveness" is before I myself can get behind it, but other than that I like Mortimer a lot. I get a Yorick Mori vibe from him, which is always cool.

Looking forward to seeing him on the battlefield, good luck with everything.
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Aug 10, 2016 1:20 PM #1457656
"Objects that were atop the grave are not effected by Exhume, but they are effected by the flying debris."

Affect. Verb. I affected something.
Effect. Noun. The effects of something.

It's a common issue I see pop up, like breath and breathe. (Which is the same deal, funnily enough. First is a noun, second is a verb.)
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Aug 10, 2016 3:56 PM #1457665
Quote from RichardLongflop
"Objects that were atop the grave are not effected by Exhume, but they are effected by the flying debris."

Affect. Verb. I affected something.
Effect. Noun. The effects of something.

It's a common issue I see pop up, like breath and breathe. (Which is the same deal, funnily enough. First is a noun, second is a verb.)


While you're right about affect being a verb, every dictionary I've checked has had effect being supported as a verb, as well. Not sure why.

EDIT: Did a quick check. Effect, as a verb, means to bring about or bring out. Affect is correct, in my context.
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Aug 11, 2016 4:05 AM #1457699
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Query: What goes well with a gravedigger theme? I have some ideas, but I'm fishing for better ones.

Having a quote about how people will remember him just for everyone to forget that he's part of the game.
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Belated Greeting: Also, hiya! How are you (Yes, you. Dear reader, I've singled you out, in particular.) doing?

Terrible.
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Aug 11, 2016 4:50 AM #1457702
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Having a quote about how people will remember him just for everyone to forget that he's part of the game.

Terrible.


Who could forget Yorick 'Anti-Fun' Mori, though?

He was, at least, my go-to "Do not do." example.

And stop it. Stop being terrible (helpful, eh?). For what it's worth, I hope you find yourself doing better.
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