Eh,this one is not so good,maybe I could use some mentoring on this:


Yo,thanks for the help;
If I need more I'll yelp
I can't really rhyme;
its a waste of precious time
Critisizm,I need more;
Raps,gone out the door
Techmaru,hit the floor
you saw what he raps
mine make ya take naps
I just can't rap
I can't rhyme worth crap!

This is basically what all of you are saying,all except the parts about Techmaru.

Quote from Yukio

Yo dis whack as shit

^

I hate saying this out loud but this thread brought the black rage out of me, nigguh get a mic for this shit...
Ain't no typin' the feel, YOU GOTTA SAY IT LIKE A REAL NIGGUH!!!!!!

But yeah none of you get my vote...
I'm now going to wash myself with bleach and listen to DMX and Jay- Z to feel blacker again after reading this...

Quote from Quik

^

I hate saying this out loud but this thread brought the black rage out of me, nigguh get a mic for this shit...
Ain't no typin' the feel, YOU GOTTA SAY IT LIKE A REAL NIGGUH!!!!!!

But yeah none of you get my vote...
I'm now going to wash myself with bleach and listen to DMX and Jay- Z to feel blacker again after reading this...

The font that is in bold letters has helped me the most,hmmm......

Quote from Xrebellion

No IQ needed?
Are you that retarded?
Maybe you want to go to school
Before going here and acting cool

lol wut

he's right, you don't need IQ for rhyming, kids do it in preschool
anyways

Xrebilion raps like his parents jerked em
he sounds like Erick Serman
the generic version
this whole crowd look suspicious, its all dudes in here
except for these bitches
so hes a german ehh, thats ok
you look like a fu*king worm with braids
leaders, i'ma rap boss hukky
looky, how can you be di*ck and and still a pus*y

Quote from Quik

^

I hate saying this out loud but this thread brought the black rage out of me, nigguh get a mic for this shit...
Ain't no typin' the feel, YOU GOTTA SAY IT LIKE A REAL NIGGUH!!!!!!

But yeah none of you get my vote...
I'm now going to wash myself with bleach and listen to DMX and Jay- Z to feel blacker again after reading this...

you mean rick roos, and lil wayne right

Quote from Thadius1995

he's right, you don't need IQ for rhyming, kids do it in preschool
anyways

Xrebilion raps like his parents jerked em
he sounds like Erick Serman
the generic version
this whole crowd look suspicious, its all dudes in here
except for these bitches
so hes a german ehh, thats ok
you look like a fu*king worm with braids
leaders, i'ma rap boss hukky
looky, how can you be di*ck and and still a pus*y

hold up bitch no faggot snitch is coming in here like this
ill stick a gun threw your shoulder blades you whore with aids
fuck it you suck it all night
pleasin men makes you feel alright

No offense xD

Quote from techmaru

hold up bitch no faggot snitch is coming in here like this
ill stick a gun threw your shoulder blades you whore with aids
fuck it you suck it all night
pleasin men makes you feel alright

No offense xD

is that towards me, becaiuse if it is, you just awaken the beast
, i need confermation

Quote from Thadius1995

is that towards me, becaiuse if it is, you just awaken the beast
, i need confermation

Yep, let's do this. >:C

You guys both are so horrible.....

As much as I hate to be mean to a freind....

Quote from MirrorsN'Mirror

You guys both are so horrible.....

I would like to see you do better,Mirrors. Did you even take the time to realize that we would put 20 seconds into our raps? I want to see you try,and instead of saying we are horrible,critisize us.

Quote from Thadius1995

is that towards me, becaiuse if it is, you just awaken the beast
, i need confermation

I wouldn't exactly call you the beast

Oh, look what the cat dragged in
Some people who don't know how to rap
These are raps that some people call clean
Clean is the exact opposite of fap

Does it mean that you guys are just faggots lying here
'Cause your just wasting time, polluting the atmosphere
With raps that's louder than noise that kills
You should know what would other think on how it feels

Your rhymes are as lower as mine
Though, I'm trying to avoid some rhymes in my line
'Cuz my pops is pretty close to me
That would ruin my whole history

If he wasn't here to look me
You guys could've been worse than pee
I'll just end this rap with a rhyme
The one that will make you sip your slimes

Thadius1995 think he's the boss rapper
Tsk Tsk, Alas, he is the slowest fapper
So Hasta la Vista
Like this animator told ya!

No Offence :3 (Srsly, just did this for fun)

Yo mang, dis was rapalicious my homie. I vote Nrg, techmaru's was booty, black refrence, when I rap, I get all da cuties. lol fail

Things like this should happen more often. lol

Quote from Fordz

Oh, look what the cat dragged in
Some people who don't know how to rap
These are raps that some people call clean
Clean is the exact opposite of fap

Does it mean that you guys are just faggots lying here
'Cause your just wasting time, polluting the atmosphere
With raps that's louder than noise that kills
You should know what would other think on how it feels

Your rhymes are as lower as mine
Though, I'm trying to avoid some rhymes in my line
'Cuz my pops is pretty close to me
That would ruin my whole history

If he wasn't here to look me
You guys could've been worse than pee
I'll just end this rap with a rhyme
The one that will make you sip your slimes

Thadius1995 think he's the boss rapper
Tsk Tsk, Alas, he is the slowest fapper
So Hasta la Vista
Like this animator told ya!

No Offence :3 (Srsly, just did this for fun)

i'mma murder this man.......


you the type ah dude that fight with fright
they don't laugh cause you wack
they laugh cause you're shit wid a mik

your're a laughning stock
and when will this laughing stop
when you stop eating shit
and your bitch ass get pop

i'mma dude that invented rhyme for money
watch me spit n' kick your energizer bunny
rip your stupid head off, give a quick smasher
cause i don't play boy, now tell me who's freasher

thats me, that right, pop the head and shot ya
i'll punish you boy, make you lose ya future
cause ma ball's they have caller id
but yours smaller than a match stick, you talk about pee

so all that bull shit, save it for storage
cause this is hip hop you don't belong your a tourist
so take you hocky stick and bass ball bat away
cause this in't for kids losers nor for gays







lol, i'm just jk, and i love this thread
because i doesn't go off topic
lol, its a rap battle

Quote from Thadius1995

i'mma murder this man.......


you the type ah dude that fight with fright
they don't laugh cause you wack
they laugh cause you're shit wid a mik

your're a laughning stock
and when will this laughing stop
when you stop eating shit
and your bitch ass get pop

i'mma dude that invented rhyme for money
watch me spit n' kick your energizer bunny
rip your stupid head off, give a quick smasher
cause i don't play boy, now tell me who's freasher

thats me, that right, pop the head and shot ya
i'll punish you boy, make you lose ya future
cause ma ball's they have caller id
but yours smaller than a match stick, you talk about pee

so all that bull shit, save it for storage
cause this is hip hop you don't belong your a tourist
so take you hocky stick and bass ball bat away
cause this in't for kids losers nor for gays







lol, i'm just jk, and i love this thread
because i doesn't go off topic
lol, its a rap battle

Whoa Whoa Whoa. Lemme show you how it's done. Or maybe I'll do terrible. Just wait.

You people need to make rap that's clean,
not making any comments that are mean.
You need to get the rap out of your heart,
and get in poetry, a good art.
Poetry is sorta like rap,
but it's not complete bullcrap.
lol jk i like rap as much as you,
but does it make have to make you feel blue?
You can still make mean remarks to the other,
just dont take it to far, okay my, how you say, "Brother"?

I failed. BIG TIME. lol