The Rap/Poetry Thread

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Jan 29, 2013 2:02 AM #865710
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I say one of these three.

1) love/relationships (will show a softer side and challenge most of us)

2) inspiration (what inspires you, talk about family, friends, famous people)

3) Experience (describe an experience that happened to you in the past while rhyming it)


I meant the Red Team would have the privilege to pick the theme because they won... Sorry if that wasn't clear enough. Anyway, maybe these things could inspire them when they have to choose something.
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Jan 29, 2013 2:06 AM #865712
I'm staying with candy. >U>

Also, Cruel: Not gay, in drama.
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Jan 29, 2013 2:09 AM #865718
Quote from Shaq-of-All-Trades
I'm staying with candy. >U>

Also, Cruel: Not gay, in drama.


Lol because that's SO much better >.>
jk bro.

and cobalt ya that was a bit unclear. I don't really care, I was just suggesting topics :)
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Jan 30, 2013 2:04 AM #866573
Sounds like a good idea but I regret to inform you that your video isn't working.
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Jan 30, 2013 4:19 AM #866775
Alright, well im bored sitting at home
unpacking boxes filled with Styrofoam
found a picture of me and her, she was holding her phone
next to a street cone
in the street.
we looked so cute, matching nike's on our feet
We thought we was invincible, best couple you could meet
She was pride and joy, this was more than just a treat
getting with her was a feat you couldn't beat

I thought it all was good, but she felt for some one else
she could of at least broke up with me before playin with some dudes belt
it was the worst pain I ever felt
I was destroyed, my insides began to melt

I broke up with her when I heard it from my scout
she said "baby maybe we can work it out"
But that's not what im about
you think im dumb? That I wouldn't find out?
If you gona be unfaithful then im leaving
tear in my eye, I feel like heaving
I cant believe what im perceiving
I worked my ass out for you while you were thieving
that's right, stole my heart and now im grieving

im glad to be single
now I can be social and mingle
but when I look at the stars, I see her face and it twinkles
I miss her so bad and its painful
why couldn't she be faithful
Im trying not to be hateful
but now she'll be known as a hoe, how shameful

I rush back to the present in a flurry of thought
That girl was the best girl my eye ever caught
I thought I could have her with all the things I bought
But I guess it was attention that she sought.


Kind of true, she didn't sleep with the guy though.
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Jan 30, 2013 4:51 AM #866821
She was the light in my day
We used to hang out and play
She inspired me to be an artist
Of all the women, she was the smartest
She even enjoyed video games
I love her, but at the same time I hope she burns in flames
Going to movies together all the time
At the dances she was mine
Eating dinner and laughing
I guess she was just acting
I truly loved her with all my heart
Without care she tore me apart
I fall to the ground blood pouring from my wound
Tears dripping from my face as I realize I'm doomed

Two years I spent with my darling
She was so cute and charming
How could I not see it?
She just couldn't commit
I haven't recovered since that day
I can't even keep my emotions at bay
Sometimes the dam overflows
I break down and lose control
Whether it be sadness or anger
Sometimes I just want to strangle her
I'd kill her and cradle her head in my lap
As I sing softly I put on my own death cap
With a gun to my head and a lullaby on my lips
I prepare to take my voyage down the River Styx
I remember her beauty, from her head to her hips
I tighten my grip
Pull the trigger
My body a limp figure
Falls next to my love
Will I see her above?
I'm my own mourning dove

I have to go now.
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Jan 30, 2013 5:05 AM #866844
Deviod of a heart
Empty from the start
Love just a fantasy
Which I refuse try to make reality
A shell, not even human
Yet somehow I keep brewin
Emotions in those who dare come close
I'm not the one they should have chose

Attraction brings action
Regret never a concept for us
Together for an embrace, delicious the taste
But it all comes to a simple end, no histrionics

Over the years I've had some honies
And for a time life was candy sweet
But all tales come to an end
We can't stay swept off our feet
So forgive me if I find love unreal
To me it has no appeal

A heart colder than stone
A dog refusing the bone
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Jan 30, 2013 12:26 PM #867105
Quote from Shaq-of-All-Trades
Deviod of a heart
Empty from the start
Love just a fantasy
Which I refuse try to make reality
A shell, not even human
Yet somehow I keep brewin
Emotions in those who dare come close
I'm not the one they should have chose

Attraction brings action
Regret never a concept for us
Together for an embrace, delicious the taste
But it all comes to a simple end, no histrionics

Over the years I've had some honies
And for a time life was candy sweet
But all tales come to an end
We can't stay swept off our feet
So forgive me if I find love unreal
To me it has no appeal

A heart colder than stone
A dog refusing the bone


If this is true then yes, avoid relationships. Women are Evil...
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Feb 4, 2013 9:42 PM #873044
Quote from Mark XD

get the point, do you feel me blue
i'm looking at you with a Gatling gun, the perfect view
setting back her with some gum, and when i chew
i'll shoot off a dm5 trident missile right trough you

kahboooommmmmmmmm

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Uh... gatling guns have terrible accuracy. They're pretty much the reason the term "spray and pray" exists, using large amounts of ammunition to make up for how hard it is to actually hit anything.

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OK, If YOU ARE SOOOOOOO SMART, then get in a car and let me shoot one at you,
i'm pretty sure you know what well happen then

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I'll be perfectly fine and you'll be out over two grand?

Quote from Mark XD
watch this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqDCCTCYTNI
and then imagine me with that gun and you on the floor, lol, you'd be a dead bug he he
leave the gun talk to me, and stick to the books, lol :D
dead bug

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Wow! You can use a vehicle mounted gantling gun on the ground?! By yourself?! And actually aim it at me and hit?!





ok, i'll just rap it up for you



Drive up, pull up seat, in my vehicle
in my passenger chair is a AK 45, i ain't civil
you look around panicking, shit shit swizzle
cause yo head about tah get blow off, kaboom like a missile

"do any damn crap and i will make your brains leak"
cause i ain't got to reload this Gatling, it ain't cheap
bullet moving quick like it skipping to the beat
shoot in yo head, left you dying on the street

cleaning up yo dead body, i piss inside the bleach
6 bullets in yo head and 10 more in yo feet
rubber handle gripping does feel so sweet
bullet got yo face red like a girl kiss on yo cheek
big ass gun got yo blood driping on the sheet
spill out yo intistines filled with the meat
you back flip on the wall, and one shot in ya teeth
this is a Gatling gun dude, this gun ain't got no beef
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Feb 5, 2013 1:43 AM #873257
Quote from Mark XD
ok, i'll just rap it up for you



Drive up, pull up seat, in my vehicle
in my passenger chair is a AK 45, i ain't civil
you look around panicking, shit shit swizzle
cause yo head about tah get blow off, kaboom like a missile

"do any damn crap and i will make your brains leak"
cause i ain't got to reload this Gatling, it ain't cheap
bullet moving quick like it skipping to the beat
shoot in yo head, left you dying on the street

cleaning up yo dead body, i piss inside the bleach
6 bullets in yo head and 10 more in yo feet
rubber handle gripping does feel so sweet
bullet got yo face red like a girl kiss on yo cheek
big ass gun got yo blood driping on the sheet
spill out yo intistines filled with the meat
you back flip on the wall, and one shot in ya teeth
this is a Gatling gun dude, this gun ain't got no beef


Ok Mark XD my friend, I am about to do something I have as of yet to do: I'm going to get nasty. Hopefully this is a one time thing, because I really don't enjoy attacking others like this.

You asked for this... (Click to Show)


Sorry if this is a bit rough... I'm usually so calm you see.
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Feb 5, 2013 2:43 AM #873326
Quote from Shaq-of-All-Trades
Ok Mark XD my friend, I am about to do something I have as of yet to do: I'm going to get nasty. Hopefully this is a one time thing, because I really don't enjoy attacking others like this.

You asked for this... (Click to Show)


Sorry if this is a bit rough... I'm usually so calm you see.



lol, you seriously bringing a knife to a gun fight, you think you fricking bullet proof my friend :D haha



you starting a war you can't handle
nuff gunshots wrap round yo body like a bangle
you will scream out when yo body get dismantle
when i turn on this Gatling gun transmission channel

i rise up with my Ak, you with yo knife see a flash of light
i mount my rifle and bend bullets till ammunition tight
lol ah knife, if you is a spartan stand there like knight
10 bullets in ya fricking knee cap, fuck yo civilian rights

i could shot you in the middle of the day, while the sun still bright
my gun ignite, i say it fricking indite and invite it self into yo fricking eye sight
leaf yo brains spill out like a frigging egg white
ha ha, you must feel i was a blight,
as soon as you bring a knife to a gun fight
you dead wrong, yo knife command over right

sorry bro, but my bullets flying through like jet
a big man in front you with a gun, and you purpose a knife threat :/
lay my hand upon the trigger, and with no respect
release so much gun shots, you think that you won't be dead yet

haha, joke, you would have to be joking
you possibly using crack, this thread is non-smoking
you said you will "slit my throat" who you think you provoking
boy, i would shot you so much times yo shirt would soak-in

lol, you really want to start strife
shot off you first toe, and you will need ice
even the bush master gun could take a way your life
and i would watch you fall upon your knees and drop your knife

i understand you said you are mostly humble
if so, then don't ever ever ever tell me this jumble
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Feb 5, 2013 3:18 AM #873369
hey guys. long time no see lol. anyway, am i able to post here?

well I'm a bball player and this is a real life happening, i wrote it at school so no cussing, sorry.

The first day was like any other day
accept a feeling from me
that was saying what it wanted to say
supporting one thing
that i was going to try something new
something I never dreamed
until now, i wasnt ready to
accept reality

and now its time to start
a fast pace in my heart
I knew this would be hard
I set my shoes apart

Jumping from my bench i
began my routine
the crowd was almost silent as i
gathered with my team
pep talk was given but i
wouldnt believe
a friend tried to get me to listen
as i stared blankly
the clock counted down
i dont know how
but every minute seemed a second
and im on the floor now

the jump when the ball drops
the squeak of the jump stops
everything happens so fast
and it wont stop now

the score is set its the
last quarter of the game
sweaty bodies move back and forth
calling out my name
the crucial choices that i must make
are now bursting out my brain
should i shoot or should i go
am i going insane?

the last seconds are ascending now
gravity is slow
slower and slower the game
oh shit thats a free throw

dont let the pain get to you
keep on moving your feet
why did you do this i cant believe it
no dont leave

it is all tied up now
the noise is at a high
as the ball was moving down
i called for it in a cry

the number is 5
and i feel I'm going to do it
but i keep holding back
what if i cant go through with it

I take a deep breath
the chances well slim
and the next second i
take the final shot for the win.


This happened at my teams championship game and it was tied, and then I took a buzzer beater three-pointer and made it.

we won the championship.

try to immagine M&M rapping dis shit :3
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Feb 5, 2013 3:49 AM #873395
I got played by a bitch that stole my heart
she smashed it to pieces
and ripped it apart
as my spirit decreases

can't comprehend the pain
I feel right now
Its just not the same
when you're gone somehow
Fuckin bitch, theres ways to say enough
with out going behind my back
with some guy that has rough
sex and is addicted to crack

Iv had enough of your lies
I finally think its time
to move on with my life
and to end all the strife
no more stress
im sick of this mess
I tried my best
and my best was bested by that pest
Im tired and lonely
as I sit here sobbin, only
one that knows my rage
I try to turn the page
in this story we call life
but before I reach the end, all I want is to die.
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Feb 6, 2013 1:57 AM #874236
Yo yo yo, you hoe.
im bored as fuck your as ugly as a truck
tugging on a duck. yuck

I eat veggie fries, and wear shoes and ties,
I've got class bass and masseffect 3
yeah, you better watch out when you're out and about
Im a cobra waiting to steal your toe, bruh.

Knick knack paddy wack

lol

if you dig that then listen ot this fresh new rhyme I got,

Walk into da club, like wuddup I gotta big cock.
naw im just playin, I got some shit from the gift shop
Icin the fringe is so damn frosty the people like "DAMN THATS A COLD ASS HONKY"
Rollin in, hella deep -------

I don't have anything else, but yeah. dats my rap.
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Feb 6, 2013 2:03 AM #874240
rd was that your first rap?
you sound like a cat
i spit better on your mom's pune
meanwhile you spend your time on rune...scape

as you can tell im a pro (lol)
completely serious, for reals, hoe