Yeah
Living life in the hood
living life in the ghetto
It's all a Metophor
In the core of where hate lurks and sores
More chorses for the people thats poor
walking on the streets starvin
having no where else to go
Some are to bold to admit they need a Home
Some are just Stoned and don't wanna Go
And some are just depressed and rather die in their vest
I feel like all this doesn't make any sense
for this to be happening all over the world
if we have to have war then why don't we have to make this planet a better Place?
Why do we have to pay to make a rhyme and sell it for change
We need a License to do these things
then they try to make it fair with a little freedom to share
More like Spare
they don't care for us
they still got us fighting to see he looks more buff
Then we gotta pay Bills, then we gotta take Pills
why do we have to pay for water and electricity?
Shouldn't all this be free?
They say it's the ecnomy
But it's truly the people
the people really run the world and they make it Evil
People device us to make us not feel Equal
And then it's part 2, just another Sequal
It's just so Unbelieveable
how did we get like this to start with?
...........
They say it was the ET'S
The Alpha Draconas
The repitllian race
Faceless in the eyes of the Gate
They made us Hate
they made us follow the Trace and say that War is Fate
I just realized if it really was these things they call repitllians
and they have us in Chains
Or so they claim
In my thoughts
I say we keep Ourselves in Vain
I think people know this way of living isn't right
But they don't want it to Change
they've been so caught up in their ways
In life were to Change...It would mess up Everything
People would go insane
people would not be able to live with the fact of not dealing with computers
not dealing with phones
not dealing with TV
They would even sell their Soul to make things back to the way they were Told it was suppose to Be
It's like we are stuck in a one way road
And an abstract painting that can't be Sold
Because it's too ugly that no one would even dare touch the mold
So I guess....The only way to get out of this mess...
Is death.
The Rap/Poetry Thread
Started by: Cobalt | Replies: 186 | Views: 11,594
Feb 6, 2013 3:38 AM #874333
Feb 6, 2013 4:18 AM #874350
Mat you think you know ghetto?
Im from Chicago, I've been all around
I know one personally, he's a hobo
Tried to find his passion but it was never found
So his solution was to drown
in liquor and weed
his life was going down
like a stampede
He lives in a box and his favorite possession is a wristband with beads
"It was my wifes" he claims, "but she couldn't handle my shame,
I tried to stop, but addiction can make you fucked up in the brain"
its insane how it can rearrange the way you are
one night your successful, the next you're sleeping in your car
Life can be stressful, but drugs wont take you far
Its just a mess full of shit that will leave you with scars.
I have seen young prostitutes, tryin' to make a livin'
she was only 13, and she wasn't kiddin'
She needed quick bucks to help her brother
who was hungry because of his crack addicted mother
the poor girl wasn't a slut, she was doing her best
but no one should have to get undressed
to feed those that have less
she gave guys her address
just to give them quick sex
so she could help pay the bills they detest
it leaves her depressed
because she's doing her best
but she wants the weight off her chest
because for too long she's been pressed
she wants to be normal like the rest
but this job is leaving her stressed.
Now I aint trying to hate on you mat, you know im your bro
but learn a bit more on the streets before you say shit matcrofoe
this worlds fucked up, that we know
put a little more fact than fiction though.
what makes people evil is our greedy desire
the worlds become dire
a living hell without fire
not much to admire
we fucked it up and its our fault
we are the cause of sexual assault
we seem to hate by default
this world is a wound, and we are the salt
we got kids shooting at each other
we are killing our own brothers
when is it not rough
when does life stop getting tough
when have we had enough
of all this murderous stuff
all we do is slaughter
hell humanity kills its own daughters
and leaves children without fathers
it all seems hopeless, why do we bother
yet we survive and get stronger
tough times may get longer
but the end is less farther
and it gets less harder
as we remember the martyrs
and move on with our life
because life isn't what it is without strife
I guess that's how it is, all we can do is accept it
just remember the cause of those that died and respect it
NOTE: many parts of this are real, I did meet a 13 year old prostitute that was making money to help feed her brother two years ago. I helped her to quit prostitution but lost contact with her till October when she texted me with an update on her life. Luckily now she is 15 and she has an actual job to help out her mom who is addicted to drugs (not sure which but it doesn't matter at this point).
Also for the record I'm not from the south side or anything ridiculously ghetto, however im still not in the greatest neighbor hood in the world.
Im from Chicago, I've been all around
I know one personally, he's a hobo
Tried to find his passion but it was never found
So his solution was to drown
in liquor and weed
his life was going down
like a stampede
He lives in a box and his favorite possession is a wristband with beads
"It was my wifes" he claims, "but she couldn't handle my shame,
I tried to stop, but addiction can make you fucked up in the brain"
its insane how it can rearrange the way you are
one night your successful, the next you're sleeping in your car
Life can be stressful, but drugs wont take you far
Its just a mess full of shit that will leave you with scars.
I have seen young prostitutes, tryin' to make a livin'
she was only 13, and she wasn't kiddin'
She needed quick bucks to help her brother
who was hungry because of his crack addicted mother
the poor girl wasn't a slut, she was doing her best
but no one should have to get undressed
to feed those that have less
she gave guys her address
just to give them quick sex
so she could help pay the bills they detest
it leaves her depressed
because she's doing her best
but she wants the weight off her chest
because for too long she's been pressed
she wants to be normal like the rest
but this job is leaving her stressed.
Now I aint trying to hate on you mat, you know im your bro
but learn a bit more on the streets before you say shit matcrofoe
this worlds fucked up, that we know
put a little more fact than fiction though.
what makes people evil is our greedy desire
the worlds become dire
a living hell without fire
not much to admire
we fucked it up and its our fault
we are the cause of sexual assault
we seem to hate by default
this world is a wound, and we are the salt
we got kids shooting at each other
we are killing our own brothers
when is it not rough
when does life stop getting tough
when have we had enough
of all this murderous stuff
all we do is slaughter
hell humanity kills its own daughters
and leaves children without fathers
it all seems hopeless, why do we bother
yet we survive and get stronger
tough times may get longer
but the end is less farther
and it gets less harder
as we remember the martyrs
and move on with our life
because life isn't what it is without strife
I guess that's how it is, all we can do is accept it
just remember the cause of those that died and respect it
NOTE: many parts of this are real, I did meet a 13 year old prostitute that was making money to help feed her brother two years ago. I helped her to quit prostitution but lost contact with her till October when she texted me with an update on her life. Luckily now she is 15 and she has an actual job to help out her mom who is addicted to drugs (not sure which but it doesn't matter at this point).
Also for the record I'm not from the south side or anything ridiculously ghetto, however im still not in the greatest neighbor hood in the world.
Feb 6, 2013 12:12 PM #874555
so, we talking about the ghetto, ok let me say something , ok so these things happening in real life
so i inside a van stand, waiting upon a van,
route eleven to carry me to silver-sand
i look to might right, i check out this man
this man want to rob, he probably got a gun
this man start to jog, and pickup a little run
ease up to this girl, and made her frighten
tell she stop, and give me every thing you got
give me your bag, give your purse, give your chain, and give me your watch
the girl faint, flat upon the ground the girl drop, the guy snatch up she things and move off the spot
people in the van stand running to the cops
cause this man got his gun, and ready to give shots
but i hope no cop, don't try to get this man stop
cause this man look hungry and this man gun cock
one day i was walking through some street
a sweet pear of NIKE was covering me feet
snap back with shades, and i looking real sweet
and about to go and get something to eat
when a man try to snatch my snap back, :/
snatch my snap back :/
i can't believe a man would really try to snatch a hat
not goal, not money nor my bag, but a hat
i can't believe that big men reduce to that :/
lol :D
so i inside a van stand, waiting upon a van,
route eleven to carry me to silver-sand
i look to might right, i check out this man
this man want to rob, he probably got a gun
this man start to jog, and pickup a little run
ease up to this girl, and made her frighten
tell she stop, and give me every thing you got
give me your bag, give your purse, give your chain, and give me your watch
the girl faint, flat upon the ground the girl drop, the guy snatch up she things and move off the spot
people in the van stand running to the cops
cause this man got his gun, and ready to give shots
but i hope no cop, don't try to get this man stop
cause this man look hungry and this man gun cock
one day i was walking through some street
a sweet pear of NIKE was covering me feet
snap back with shades, and i looking real sweet
and about to go and get something to eat
when a man try to snatch my snap back, :/
snatch my snap back :/
i can't believe a man would really try to snatch a hat
not goal, not money nor my bag, but a hat
i can't believe that big men reduce to that :/
lol :D
Feb 6, 2013 1:10 PM #874606
Wow cruel that is really messed up.....A 13 year old prostitute >_>........Something to think about, because thats really bad. BUT REALLY GREAT RAP MAN! No flaws I seen, this was just some rap I did and put some of my other rap I did which I think is cool.
But see thats the thing, no one gives about this unless they get a gold chain.
Now some MAY care if they have a phone ring,
telling them they got their children captured and they gotta do what they say.
But then that would brutally forcing someone to do good,
Why never Should have to do this, not even in the Hood.
Some people Remain in the Rain, because they like being wet
They want things to be the same
NOW,
I'm not Sayin it was a TOTALLY different Race
That came down and messed up our Pace
But we truly don't know what is Fiction
Or a Fact
Because sometimes that is knowledge we aren't suppose to have
Why you ask?
I wish I could tell myself that same question
Number 1 reason Why I'm Guessin
The Lessons, that were meant to be
Taught To the People with Blessin's
So if we aren't blessed, does that mean we are Next?
To follow the same path of where the Wicked is left?
Or is this all just a Test?
I'd say it's Best to just go on with Death
Because if you keep being on that Meth
Ha, it's no Contest you will follow the same path as your brothers did Last time
......I feel like I May Have to lay somebody in a Tray,
Even if I don't want to
Hatefulness almost can't be Tamed
You see, They say
This world is ruled by God and the Devil
So I follow MY SEVERAL Amendments
Some say I need the Clinic
I SAY I TO SEND THIS
TO THE PRESIDENT
So he can take some Advice
From it
Until I stop Rollin Dice
It's this world full of Mice
I lived twice in my life
And I still don't care about my "Claimed" Rights
I smoke the Pipe
And I take the Light
Until it can be called MINE
Now It's TIME
To spread this RHYME
And stop drinking my Wine
So the children can put this in my Shrine.
But see thats the thing, no one gives about this unless they get a gold chain.
Now some MAY care if they have a phone ring,
telling them they got their children captured and they gotta do what they say.
But then that would brutally forcing someone to do good,
Why never Should have to do this, not even in the Hood.
Some people Remain in the Rain, because they like being wet
They want things to be the same
NOW,
I'm not Sayin it was a TOTALLY different Race
That came down and messed up our Pace
But we truly don't know what is Fiction
Or a Fact
Because sometimes that is knowledge we aren't suppose to have
Why you ask?
I wish I could tell myself that same question
Number 1 reason Why I'm Guessin
The Lessons, that were meant to be
Taught To the People with Blessin's
So if we aren't blessed, does that mean we are Next?
To follow the same path of where the Wicked is left?
Or is this all just a Test?
I'd say it's Best to just go on with Death
Because if you keep being on that Meth
Ha, it's no Contest you will follow the same path as your brothers did Last time
......I feel like I May Have to lay somebody in a Tray,
Even if I don't want to
Hatefulness almost can't be Tamed
You see, They say
This world is ruled by God and the Devil
So I follow MY SEVERAL Amendments
Some say I need the Clinic
I SAY I TO SEND THIS
TO THE PRESIDENT
So he can take some Advice
From it
Until I stop Rollin Dice
It's this world full of Mice
I lived twice in my life
And I still don't care about my "Claimed" Rights
I smoke the Pipe
And I take the Light
Until it can be called MINE
Now It's TIME
To spread this RHYME
And stop drinking my Wine
So the children can put this in my Shrine.
Feb 9, 2013 2:12 AM #877452
Roses are red, violets are bl3u
I'm a psychopath, and an artist too
The world is my playground, my logic is quite sound, and though I'm quite the clown,
I still do what I need to do
Blood is life, and life is fragile
Bullets can be messy, blades are quite agile
Hammers and mallets, a quick smash up in yo shot, will make one submit
To my skills quite revile
I don't wish to cause ill, it is not part of my will
I'm but a simple shill, one to be used yet still
I crave carnage and pain, burning acid rain, hope lost, never to regain
And your life to ebb and spill...
Yes, I am but a fool
But never doubt that I'm cruel
Though surreal is my demeanor towards all
Underestimating one will surely cause your fall
I'm a psychopath, and an artist too
The world is my playground, my logic is quite sound, and though I'm quite the clown,
I still do what I need to do
Blood is life, and life is fragile
Bullets can be messy, blades are quite agile
Hammers and mallets, a quick smash up in yo shot, will make one submit
To my skills quite revile
I don't wish to cause ill, it is not part of my will
I'm but a simple shill, one to be used yet still
I crave carnage and pain, burning acid rain, hope lost, never to regain
And your life to ebb and spill...
Yes, I am but a fool
But never doubt that I'm cruel
Though surreal is my demeanor towards all
Underestimating one will surely cause your fall
Feb 11, 2013 12:08 PM #880422
Yaw dawg it's S to the S to the S,
Let me confess, I've trained my pikachu rare-candyless,
I don't play chess, cos the board is black and white,
I am racist - white pride.
Fuck your boardslide I don't even skate,
But I go on /soc to get my topless pic rate
Faith, what a silly name, but Mirror's Edge was on of the best games I've played.
Don't mess with me, I swear I'll cur you m8
Let me confess, I've trained my pikachu rare-candyless,
I don't play chess, cos the board is black and white,
I am racist - white pride.
Fuck your boardslide I don't even skate,
But I go on /soc to get my topless pic rate
Faith, what a silly name, but Mirror's Edge was on of the best games I've played.
Don't mess with me, I swear I'll cur you m8
Feb 12, 2013 3:13 AM #881052
Quote from sssI've trained my pikachu rare-candyless
I died laughing when I read that.
Feb 12, 2013 7:58 PM #881811
Quote from CruelI died laughing when I read that.
Put it in your signature, so I would get all that Internet respect.
Feb 13, 2013 5:00 AM #882229
Quote from sssPut it in your signature, so I would get all that Internet respect.
Lol I should, greatest reference ever.
Feb 13, 2013 3:47 PM #882667
Time to do a funny rap
I be getting them TITTESSSSSS FROM A BUNCH OF DIFFERENT CITESSSS
Tittes in my mouth got the Jingo Titty Dojo in my Homo so Slow Oh No!
My Bitch nakita came to my Houseee came to my House
Cause my Ass on Got a South west trout
But I still see that PUSSAY IN MY LUCKY HUM GAY
Put that on my Lay Back
And you best Reeespect That
Talkin back?
Even when I got that SHIT ON MY HOES BACK?
LIL WAYNE ON THE SAME TRAIN AN MY PAY DAY
CUMMINNNN BACK ONNN A RAINNNN DAY
SHIIT SON
BITCH LOOIN LIKE SHE GOT A GUN
SHE GOT A GUN
BOUT TO SHOOT MY ASS UNTIL IT PASS GAS!
OH DAMN
Still suckinnnnn onnnn datttt pussy thooooo
the Pooo Pooo got nothin on this U A Homooo
Room in my shoes cuz dat hoe on was on my like a Booz
Bo ho u mad cuz I got your girl?
yo dad recoonemedn to me eeeee cuz it's on my N Y C K
New york Cat Krazay
Yeahh yeahh pussy bitch big Ass on my Last big latina got ass with shemale on tofoooo allllll day long with my justin bieber songgggg ohhhh I'm about to go to Honggg kongggggggggg.
....Yerp...
I be getting them TITTESSSSSS FROM A BUNCH OF DIFFERENT CITESSSS
Tittes in my mouth got the Jingo Titty Dojo in my Homo so Slow Oh No!
My Bitch nakita came to my Houseee came to my House
Cause my Ass on Got a South west trout
But I still see that PUSSAY IN MY LUCKY HUM GAY
Put that on my Lay Back
And you best Reeespect That
Talkin back?
Even when I got that SHIT ON MY HOES BACK?
LIL WAYNE ON THE SAME TRAIN AN MY PAY DAY
CUMMINNNN BACK ONNN A RAINNNN DAY
SHIIT SON
BITCH LOOIN LIKE SHE GOT A GUN
SHE GOT A GUN
BOUT TO SHOOT MY ASS UNTIL IT PASS GAS!
OH DAMN
Still suckinnnnn onnnn datttt pussy thooooo
the Pooo Pooo got nothin on this U A Homooo
Room in my shoes cuz dat hoe on was on my like a Booz
Bo ho u mad cuz I got your girl?
yo dad recoonemedn to me eeeee cuz it's on my N Y C K
New york Cat Krazay
Yeahh yeahh pussy bitch big Ass on my Last big latina got ass with shemale on tofoooo allllll day long with my justin bieber songgggg ohhhh I'm about to go to Honggg kongggggggggg.
....Yerp...
Feb 13, 2013 8:19 PM #882854
never rapped before, so, please dont critasize me too much. I thought i might as well give it a try
Don't even beef with me, or ima bust your ass
cuz none of your stupid raps are ever gonna pass
i'll poke you in the eyes and ill bitch slap you in the face
i'll rip up your rap, and make you look like a disgrace
ima fuck you up, so that you'll need a neck brace
and make you taste the sourness of second place
your body will be so mangled that ill hide you in the storage space
cuz ima muthafucking mental case...
Don't even beef with me, or ima bust your ass
cuz none of your stupid raps are ever gonna pass
i'll poke you in the eyes and ill bitch slap you in the face
i'll rip up your rap, and make you look like a disgrace
ima fuck you up, so that you'll need a neck brace
and make you taste the sourness of second place
your body will be so mangled that ill hide you in the storage space
cuz ima muthafucking mental case...
Feb 13, 2013 9:57 PM #882926
I've got a gun in my hand
But the gun won't cock.
My finger's on the trigger
but the trigger seems locked.
I can't stop staring at the tick tock clock
and I even if I could I would never give up.
With a vest on my chest
a bullet in my lung
I can't believe I'm dying
with my song unsung.
And even when I die
won't you bury me alone?
Cause I'll never get to heaven
If I'm singing this song.
But the gun won't cock.
My finger's on the trigger
but the trigger seems locked.
I can't stop staring at the tick tock clock
and I even if I could I would never give up.
With a vest on my chest
a bullet in my lung
I can't believe I'm dying
with my song unsung.
And even when I die
won't you bury me alone?
Cause I'll never get to heaven
If I'm singing this song.
Feb 16, 2013 5:57 PM #886033
Quote from GameRat101I've got a gun in my hand
But the gun won't cock.
My finger's on the trigger
but the trigger seems locked.
I can't stop staring at the tick tock clock
and I even if I could I would never give up.
With a vest on my chest
a bullet in my lung
I can't believe I'm dying
with my song unsung.
And even when I die
won't you bury me alone?
Cause I'll never get to heaven
If I'm singing this song.
You feel that pain, the dying feeling in your chest
Cus I put that bullet in you
You'll be dead like the rest
There's nothing you can do
As I put your body in the casket
bury you miles deep
but I kept your heart in a basket
I have it here to keep
To donate to medics so they can have it
No need to waste the one part of you that's good
Just cus you start a fight with me in the hood
You really thought you would win? I knew you never would
God denied your ass from heaven because your more evil than good
Feb 16, 2013 7:00 PM #886085
snickersot such a sweets addiction that you can call me Babe Ruth
Got them massive cravings man, this ain't just a sweet tooth
Spitting out Fireballs on all of y'all Lemonheads
Staying sweet and spicy like my favorite gum, Big Red
You know I got rhymes both Now&Later
After stepping up you're gonna need a Lifesaver
I'll put your head in a Twizzler, never gonna stop
Make ya go stupid, turn you to a Dum-Dum Pop
Going around laughing, must've had a Snickers or something
But I'm such an Airhead that it may have been nothing
But I'm feeling Skittles, like a rainbow, vivid and bright
While the rhymes I've seen so far Black Licorice, won't take a bite
Got them massive cravings man, this ain't just a sweet tooth
Spitting out Fireballs on all of y'all Lemonheads
Staying sweet and spicy like my favorite gum, Big Red
You know I got rhymes both Now&Later
After stepping up you're gonna need a Lifesaver
I'll put your head in a Twizzler, never gonna stop
Make ya go stupid, turn you to a Dum-Dum Pop
Going around laughing, must've had a Snickers or something
But I'm such an Airhead that it may have been nothing
But I'm feeling Skittles, like a rainbow, vivid and bright
While the rhymes I've seen so far Black Licorice, won't take a bite
Feb 16, 2013 8:23 PM #886132
Quote from Shaq-of-All-Tradessnickersot such a sweets addiction that you can call me Babe Ruth
Got them massive cravings man, this ain't just a sweet tooth
Spitting out Fireballs on all of y'all Lemonheads
Staying sweet and spicy like my favorite gum, Big Red
You know I got rhymes both Now&Later
After stepping up you're gonna need a Lifesaver
I'll put your head in a Twizzler, never gonna stop
Make ya go stupid, turn you to a Dum-Dum Pop
Going around laughing, must've had a Snickers or something
But I'm such an Airhead that it may have been nothing
But I'm feeling Skittles, like a rainbow, vivid and bright
While the rhymes I've seen so far Black Licorice, won't take a bite
Im hungry now >.>