The Rap/Poetry Thread

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Jan 21, 2013 2:40 AM #857151
Cobalt, make a poll then post all raps.
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Jan 21, 2013 3:02 AM #857176
I hate this,I quit. -__-#
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Jan 21, 2013 3:11 AM #857190
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Jan 21, 2013 8:33 AM #857543
Quote from KUDA
put this in the background :D http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4RV4pvXaPxE

“This is systematic destruction, destroys my opponents till his brains erupting,
and blood gushing, flooded with fist punches.” Check it. KUDA-.


This is David and goliath or something.
Sling a shot to your mouth till your speech’s mumbling,
struggling to speak and say “I’m beggin! Please”, This guy’s minds high or fading.
Or I must’ve died and realized I couldn’t rhyme, nah I’m lying.
He thought he could hold his own against me, bitch I’m 3-headed lion
crossed with Rocky Balboa body, boxing n knocking out this brony.
I’m eating outta this dawgs bowl because this dogs a confused pussy
If you’re a boss your verses better show me.

Leo… you’re a noob at best, this dudes a breast,
because this boob thinks he could beat this dude in a test.
Homie what could you do? My lyrical capacity is surpassing realty,
I’m space bound breaking down the barriers of sound.
An anomaly travelling through the clouds,
A prodigy who taught Eminem to survive battle rounds.
Ouch…that’s the heat you’re feeling when I’m heat spiitin,
killin this G in every verse I’m writing.

Yo! Fuck it I’m going into the HORROR-CORE! Ripping through your torso
with cupids bow covered in blood-n-gore to show I love murdering you all
Decapitate and maul, won’t hesitate to sprawl your brains all over the wall.
Throw the rest of your body of a cliff and pile drive you as you fall.
Punch your lights out whilst strapped in a straightjacket, at the same time
massacre his family with a blunt meat hatchet.
Bitch I’m vicious, I jump in shark tanks to eat those fishes.
Rip out stiches and scare bitches, I’m itching to start killin.


“Kick in your door waving a glock 4” on some Biggie Shit
Yo LeoKill …ima Kill Leo, steal n conceal a steel-44
Reveal forty-four shots whilst smothering his poor soul,
with bullet holes and escape before the po-po show.
Hey bro, you realize now I’m a psycho, he said we could use a Mic to recite
I said I’ll write and still beat him with my eyes closed.
My written flow shows this bozo and other gimmicky fag hoes
I‘ll body bag any asshole.


“My style? Impeccable, unrepeatable as my words so memorable, it’s only visual,
Images blissful, to illustrate I use my astral body to project a miracle”.- KUDA



I did a very rough recording to a beat anyway: http://www14.zippyshare.com/v/77578796/file.html

*KUDA... you want to challenge the psychoanalytic
Verbally bloodthirsty, mad-methodical, catalytic
Rhyme slayer, not-of-God, hellishly ill word player
With the appetite for evil, and obscure behavior?*

Hah. Like a lamb to the slaughter.

Yo.


You have no idea what you're up against, do you mate?
Someone shoulda warned you, but now it is way too late
When you chose me as your enemy you have sealed your fate
You're in my domain and here is where my words dictate
What? A three headed lion? That explains why you can't rhyme
A predatory animal with a birth defect, wasting my time
And I'm a brony? Hah! Get your research straight
I know you like masturbating, but man, can't that wait?

I'm impressed by how much you were able to disappoint me
Calling me a "boob" in a battle rap, what a whack emcee
I'm so intimidated by how much your rhyme schemes suck D
You're getting wrecked by yours truly, yo the L to the E
I hold the skeleton key to the Pandora's box of hip hop
And with it I release incomprehensibly ill bars nonstop
Carpet bombing your whack verses like a lyrical terrorist
I'm a real flow-sick MC and the superior lyricist

If little boys like you are made from snips and snails
I must'v been made from utter suffering and baptized in entrails
Your attempt at horrorcore came off as kinda cute...
Now lemme show you how to spit bars to make a butcher puke!
Your horrorcore was so basic, it needs more gore and dark metaphors
Malicious intent as the prime ingredient to ignite wars
You're not opening any dark doors, just fiddling with the doorknob
I'll domestically abuse you until you deny your God!

Call me sir insidious, my verses black out the sun
Sinister serpent of an MC, I'm the desolate one
Morbid, mortifying mortals, murder rolling off my tongue
Among my victims, none survive and if you think you can, you're wrong
Playing with corpses is one of my favorite pass times
I hope your small mind can keep up with my vicious and fast rhymes
I feel sorry for the guy who's gonna have to scrape you from the walls
Next time you wanna battle, make sure that you grow some fucking balls!
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Jan 21, 2013 2:41 PM #857765
Quote from Leokill
I did a very rough recording to a beat anyway: http://www14.zippyshare.com/v/77578796/file.html

*KUDA... you want to challenge the psychoanalytic
Verbally bloodthirsty, mad-methodical, catalytic
Rhyme slayer, not-of-God, hellishly ill word player
With the appetite for evil, and obscure behavior?*

Hah. Like a lamb to the slaughter.

Yo.


You have no idea what you're up against, do you mate?
Someone shoulda warned you, but now it is way too late
When you chose me as your enemy you have sealed your fate
You're in my domain and here is where my words dictate
What? A three headed lion? That explains why you can't rhyme
A predatory animal with a birth defect, wasting my time
And I'm a brony? Hah! Get your research straight
I know you like masturbating, but man, can't that wait?

I'm impressed by how much you were able to disappoint me
Calling me a "boob" in a battle rap, what a whack emcee
I'm so intimidated by how much your rhyme schemes suck D
You're getting wrecked by yours truly, yo the L to the E
I hold the skeleton key to the Pandora's box of hip hop
And with it I release incomprehensibly ill bars nonstop
Carpet bombing your whack verses like a lyrical terrorist
I'm a real flow-sick MC and the superior lyricist

If little boys like you are made from snips and snails
I must'v been made from utter suffering and baptized in entrails
Your attempt at horrorcore came off as kinda cute...
Now lemme show you how to spit bars to make a butcher puke!
Your horrorcore was so basic, it needs more gore and dark metaphors
Malicious intent as the prime ingredient to ignite wars
You're not opening any dark doors, just fiddling with the doorknob
I'll domestically abuse you until you deny your God!

Call me sir insidious, my verses black out the sun
Sinister serpent of an MC, I'm the desolate one
Morbid, mortifying mortals, murder rolling off my tongue
Among my victims, none survive and if you think you can, you're wrong
Playing with corpses is one of my favorite pass times
I hope your small mind can keep up with my vicious and fast rhymes
I feel sorry for the guy who's gonna have to scrape you from the walls
Next time you wanna battle, make sure that you grow some fucking balls!


that was cool as fuck. Where are you from? you have kind of a thick accent that made it hard to understand in some parts
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Jan 21, 2013 3:13 PM #857779
Thanks Cruel.
I'm Finnish, but my accent is a weird mix of British and American accents. I'm working on making it more defined.
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Jan 21, 2013 4:33 PM #857822
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Thanks Cruel.
I'm Finnish, but my accent is a weird mix of British and American accents. I'm working on making it more defined.


Oh, that's awesome, what website did you get the beat from? I might try recording sometime. :D
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Jan 21, 2013 5:11 PM #857880
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Oh, that's awesome, what website did you get the beat from? I might try recording sometime. :D

It's just some random beat from youtube. I recommend that you check the Newgrounds audio portal for some tracks.
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Jan 21, 2013 5:18 PM #857886
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It's just some random beat from youtube. I recommend that you check the Newgrounds audio portal for some tracks.


Alright, well none of my shit flows well in this beat I like
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q_2zkuGjWc0
so I guess ill be writing for the next 2 hours ^.^
I also found my moms professional tv studio mic that I can borrow. If I can come up with something good then ill consider posting it.
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Jan 21, 2013 6:09 PM #857930
Quote from Cruel
Alright, well none of my shit flows well in this beat I like
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q_2zkuGjWc0
so I guess ill be writing for the next 2 hours ^.^
I also found my moms professional tv studio mic that I can borrow. If I can come up with something good then ill consider posting it.

Cool. Can't wait to hear what you got. I'll write something to spit, since I got inspired from this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5cvjZEQ2nP4
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Jan 21, 2013 6:20 PM #857938
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Cool. Can't wait to hear what you got. I'll write something to spit, since I got inspired from this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5cvjZEQ2nP4


That was sick, I was listening to Eminem and that sort of inspired me. I'm only decent at rhyme schemes and its pissing me off. Im still EXTREMELY new to this as you can tell xD.
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Jan 21, 2013 6:34 PM #857955
Try to focus in flowing the bars together and putting emphasis on the rhymed words. (So that the end of a bar is slower.)
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Jan 21, 2013 7:03 PM #857969
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Try to focus in flowing the bars together and putting emphasis on the rhymed words. (So that the end of a bar is slower.)


Thanks dude.

UHG Its like trying to say a tongue twister as fast as you can without messing up. I may have to finish this some other time because im still tinkering with this mic still and looking for a good sound editing program
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Jan 21, 2013 7:51 PM #858044
Sometimes I feel like I'm living a lie, I can't find my way out of this time I try to Find things but it's just a bunch of false Signs, telling you to go left telling you to go right, Then I hear a voice that tells me to fight, I write rhymes in this Black hole I call Home now it's all getting old cause I been in here for 13 years, I fought my fears even when I let out tears, but now it feels like I can't sing no more, like I can't breath no more, now it feels so poor living in a dark place, like I never opened a door. I imagine myself going to the store, Like everything's alright, but it's just out of Despite, I listen to myself as if I'm going crazy, maybe I'm just too lazy to thank these people for all that they've done But no one's here........I think it's time to grab my gun.
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Jan 21, 2013 8:23 PM #858073
Yes haha rhyme asylum are beast! i knew there were some RA influences in those verses ,ok lemme get my 2nd round goin now, Leo your bars were hard but get ready..