hey exilement, here's an update.. i really like what it looks like so far. tell me what you think.
http://denvish.net/ulf/180307/11969_tman.php
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Mar 18, 2007 9:59 AM #26903
Mar 18, 2007 11:43 AM #26908
Exilement, I really like what you're doing here.
Cheers mate.
*Stickied*
T Man...I really like how you've improved. I remember when you joined, everybody was ignoring you and your animations were crap. But now you've improved a lot since your first flash.
You got potential.
I'm looking forward to se some of your longer animations in the future ; )
Before:
http://www.swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=4786
Now:
http://denvish.net/ulf/180307/11969_tman.php
Improvement I say.
Cheers mate.
*Stickied*
T Man...I really like how you've improved. I remember when you joined, everybody was ignoring you and your animations were crap. But now you've improved a lot since your first flash.
You got potential.
I'm looking forward to se some of your longer animations in the future ; )
Before:
http://www.swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=4786
Now:
http://denvish.net/ulf/180307/11969_tman.php
Improvement I say.
Mar 18, 2007 2:38 PM #26924
Thanks benja
The zoom in with that orb effect wasn't bad, but it seemed kind of long. I don't understand why it zoomed in twice before cutting to the fighting... don't really like your stick figure's facial art, either. That'll improve with time though.
Individual frames need more attention, too. A lot of the frames had extreme body size changes, especially in the legs. In one frame his leg from the knee down was longer than his entire leg should have been.
Overall it's pretty decent. I liked the first move but the second one looked kind of awkward
The zoom in with that orb effect wasn't bad, but it seemed kind of long. I don't understand why it zoomed in twice before cutting to the fighting... don't really like your stick figure's facial art, either. That'll improve with time though.
Individual frames need more attention, too. A lot of the frames had extreme body size changes, especially in the legs. In one frame his leg from the knee down was longer than his entire leg should have been.
Overall it's pretty decent. I liked the first move but the second one looked kind of awkward
Mar 18, 2007 2:48 PM #26928
kl falsh thingy but cant work it and ont get it
Mar 18, 2007 2:49 PM #26930
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How do you honestly expect someone to read that?
How do you honestly expect someone to read that?
Mar 18, 2007 3:13 PM #26936
hey thanks benja and exilement, haha, i just laughed after looking at that other flash.. lol.
exilement, i'm gonna work on it. thanks
ohhhhhhh and when it zoomed in twice. i was timing it with the music. hehe.
exilement, i'm gonna work on it. thanks
ohhhhhhh and when it zoomed in twice. i was timing it with the music. hehe.
Mar 20, 2007 2:03 AM #27083
Ive gotten much better since this animation but all my new ones are very short right now, so yeah http://img338.imageshack.us/my.php?image=killracegp5.swf
Also, this is one of my newer ones, http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=jumptestba1.swf Just testing jumping
Also, this is one of my newer ones, http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=jumptestba1.swf Just testing jumping
Mar 20, 2007 2:51 AM #27084
On the jumping one, it seemed like there wasn't much animation, but too much stretching.
It also looks like your sticks' heads are coming from the middle of their heads...
It also looks like your sticks' heads are coming from the middle of their heads...
Mar 20, 2007 2:59 AM #27086
Yeah, on the fight... there's really not enough movements. Just flying around. You seem to be kind of lazy in your animations, try to put forth some effort.
On the jump, you just squashed him down, which is never done correctly. You also animate certain sections at a time instead of everything at once. The physics weren't bad though. At least on the jump. Your fight animation had virtually no physics whatsoever. Running needs huge improvements too.
Low beginner.
On the jump, you just squashed him down, which is never done correctly. You also animate certain sections at a time instead of everything at once. The physics weren't bad though. At least on the jump. Your fight animation had virtually no physics whatsoever. Running needs huge improvements too.
Low beginner.
Mar 21, 2007 1:26 AM #27189
I have a question, do you have any good tutorials on smoke?
Mar 21, 2007 2:03 AM #27193
Mar 23, 2007 1:23 AM #27363
I need some help with blood. I'm trying to get the effect that goes with a bullet, you know, when some of the blood trails off in the direction of the bullet.
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Mar 23, 2007 9:39 PM #27414
i need help with sounds for my movies cause i just started to use flash 8
Mar 23, 2007 10:32 PM #27418
Chronic: In the tutorials section, watch Paperclip's tutorial on line animation. It's got an excellent example of blood animation and explains how to do it.
Pureindian407: http://www.findsounds.com/
Pureindian407: http://www.findsounds.com/
Mar 23, 2007 11:22 PM #27427
Okay, I found one of my better ones, for teh Finishing Blow Collab.
http://img482.imageshack.us/my.php?image=finishingblowentryrq3.swf
http://img482.imageshack.us/my.php?image=finishingblowentryrq3.swf