C & C ?? http://swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=7216

Quote from bloodsh0t

Okay, I found one of my better ones, for teh Finishing Blow Collab.

http://img482.imageshack.us/my.php?image=finishingblowentryrq3.swf

No physics at all. Even in an animation like this you need some form of physics. Specifically after the kick, when he flies upward, and then slows down suddenly. I really don't like that.

Also the kick didn't have sufficient force to cause a reaction like that.

The beam was quite good. I think right now you just need to work on more "natural" poses for individual frames. The poses the stick figures take during their movements really don't look realistic, at all.

Quote from Eclipse.

C & C ?? http://swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=7216

High beginner. Oh, and the other guy's was mid beginner, forgot to mention that.

Anywho.. it's actually pretty good. The physics in the jump were good but he seemed to shift position somewhere along the way.

Though, once your stick figure appeared, I didn't like the way he crumpled. The reaction wouldn't be a crumple anyway. Either falling back, or kind of getting swept off of his feet while moving forward and doing a bit of a backwards flip would look better. If that makes sense..

I really don't like the pose at the end, along with the knives, though. Looks like you got lazy.

Quote from Eclipse.

C & C ?? http://swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=7216

All I can say is finish it, very nicely done.

Quote from Exilement

No physics at all. Even in an animation like this you need some form of physics. Specifically after the kick, when he flies upward, and then slows down suddenly. I really don't like that.

Also the kick didn't have sufficient force to cause a reaction like that.

The beam was quite good. I think right now you just need to work on more "natural" poses for individual frames. The poses the stick figures take during their movements really don't look realistic, at all.

Okay, thanks for the advice.

not done. just wanna see what i should do to make it better frist

oh and some the web site doesnt put the ani in a box, just leaves it how it is.
so some of the left over lines(or boxes) will show but there not part of the ani

ill delete them when im done with it.

http://www.fileupyours.com/files/89753/long%20fight.swf

C&C plz

Upload it to swfup or imageshack or something, don't send me a download link

sorry bout that didnt kno you had to downlaod it here:

http://denvish.net/ulf/280307/72593_long_fight.php

http://denvish.net/ulf/280307/68608_line_test_2.php

line attempt??

Sticks looked like they were made out of silly putty or something, any fast movement stretched their limbs a LOT. Work on consistancy.

Feet are extremely shaky too. Makes it look rushed.

The punch seems a bit slow, and the kick looks bad. I know exactly why, too. You have him leaning back with the kick as though he's going to fall backwards, and then for some reason, you switched to a frame at the peak of what the kick would look like had it been led up to properly. I'll upload an animation of a spin kick properly animated tomorrow or whatever I get a chance, so you can see what I mean.

Mitsukai, your animation isn't loading for me. Sorry.

thanks exilement. u know that was my first line right?

man that sucks

sigh* dont worry bout it ill just make a new ani

Edit: didnt wanna double posso yeah...

ok i start on this one today C&C

and do you think its too fast or something?

http://denvish.net/ulf/310307/268_armageddon_1.php

i am still looking for a beam tutorial

Mitsukai.. get rid of the button.

Radicalstitch, I told you can't find any tutorials specifically about beams.