So this is both our first battle. Hope you guys enjoy!

Stitches: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NsSiK6mUxo65_fo0Cyhnub9sIhAXnU1I96zs5ruQwGE/edit?usp=sharing <-- Giant ragdoll with extendable limbs

VOTE FAIRLY guys, and thanks for your time :P

Duelist should be posting his momentarily

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12U7nfeJIpUKnKzwf706yidODFnsPQ6rLA_LspBBeyU4/edit?usp=sharing

Sorry for bad link.1st time using this website :D

Thanks Lethal :) And I really had no idea >_> My battle with Anywho should prove interesting though :)

I know guys that cham will win.Always did know that but cham insisted for this battle so i accepted anyway xD
Im not good at writing anything so im trying to animate though i hope that i can do better than writing :D

Battle me next, Duelist.
We both have something in common between our characters ;)

Thats not fair Serenity, you're a better writer than I am, so it would be a deathwish for Duelist if he fought you XD and I really forgot about the skill level thing, I was going more for "His character would be fun to write about! Ill ask him for a battle" haha

Quote from ChamelNeon

Thats not fair Serenity, you're a better writer than I am, so it would be a deathwish for Duelist if he fought you XD and I really forgot about the skill level thing, I was going more for "His character would be fun to write about! Ill ask him for a battle" haha

But I never wrote anything yet except for my demo and tryout. And I'm totally under 16 years old.

Im 15!! And from what Ive seen, you ARE better, haha

Aww... You so sweet. lol.

Haha, I say we let Lethal have the next battle with him :D

Im actually battling Interested. So, yeah. I meant to say that after he fights with Lethal.

actually im changing my wrhg so lethal can battle the new one.
Btw im 15 years old too :D

11 ?! Whoa...

And here I am, graduating high school in like two months D:

...anyways.. I really enjoyed both of your writing, great job! I really loved that calming tone in Cham's writing style, and also loved Duelist's description of the battle. Correct me if I am wrong, but I voted for ChamelNeon becuase his piece seemed to be written with more consideration and effort; Duelist, your formatting makes me harder to concentrate in your writing despite the well-woven story, and as a reader, this can be one of the factors that can repel them from reading your battle. Please have that in mind next time you write - good work nonetheless XD

Oh, yeah, and another advice: DO NOT USE SCRIPT-LIKE FORMAT IN YOUR STORY!!
This is not just for Duelist but also for some of you out there who are or was. You are not here to write a script for a play or a muscial, therefore it is inappropriate to put the character's name in front of his/her dialogue. For example,

Pluto: Hey, don't use me as an example! Use Cath!
Cathory: I am a little busy here.

If I have to bear reading that kind of style in the battle like this, I will rage at you! RAWR! I don't care if you put it there because it is his/her thought. Single quotation marks, italics, or even a dash(-) in front will suffice. Your choice. But I remind you again; you are not a script writer here. If you want to write a story, please stick to its most basic rules at least. Have some respect for it - unless you intend to write an actual script of your battle.


...I raged on, didn't I? Sorry for terrorizing the battle thread >.>