[spoiler=Arvine's Story]Journey of the Journal
"Hahahaha! What a beautiful day!"
Arvine smiled and danced happily in the meadows of happiness,
"Hahahaha! What a beautiful day!"
Still smiling and jumping happily, Arvine run around the meadow.
It’s such a happy day, but suddenly, Arvine felt something crept on his sides.
Turned his back to the uneasiness, Arvine spots a large cloud forming in the skies.
Mighty rumbles was heard, a continous sound of knocking was heard, when suddenly....

"OPEN UP YOU BASTARD!"
"Wh-what da?"

Stumbled down from the bed, Arvine looked up upon the door.
Continous knock was heard from it, and a few amounts of insults were heard.
Arvine opened the door, when a punch was unleashed on his face.

"Rise and shine you little brat!"

The punch promptly hit Arvine on the face, flunging him to other side of the room, and hitting the cabinet.
As Arvine wipes out his bruises, a large man was standing there, frowns all over his face.
Arvine recognized him as one of the most annoying person he met.

"Hey, brat! How do you do?"
"Zeus! You son-of-a....What the hell do you want with me?"
"I'll explain later, wake up first!"

Zeus comes close then helped Arvine stand on his feet again.
Before Arvine can speak a word, Zeus bear-hugged him.
For Zeus it was just a normal hug, but for Arvine, he felt like a squished potato.
After a while, Zeus released his grip, causing Arvine to collapse on to the floor.
Getting back his breath, Arvine quickly spoke up...

"From what I learn, everything you have done brings trouble. Now, what is the trouble in the menu?"
"Great! It seems you understand a lot about me, however, it will be focused later. First, take a look."

Zeus opens up a parchment, then a large map with runes was shown.
The runes itself was written in a language that was unfamiliar, and it seems to be a long-lost language.
Arvine, impressed how such a hulking brute could find such delicate map.

The map shows the Tower of Varde in the south east section, a large mountain on the North-Eastern side.
It also shows a mass of hulking forest in the middle, and a large cave on the North-Western side.
The runes was shown on the eastern side of the mountain, and a large crack was found.
Arvine looks upon the map with amazement.

"Zeus, what is this map?"
"It's the map of the Lord Gerant, a long-lost warrior from long ago."
"Gerant? You mean the one who write this book?"

Arvine opened up his bag, and upon his hand, was a journal book.
Zeus eyes bulge open.

"WHERE DO YOU GET THAT?"

Zeus, grabbing that book, realized of it's title, "Gerant's Journal"
He quickly opens up the book, searching through it's page.
At last, he found the answer he looking for.
In the book, there is a code that explains everything.
Zeus quickly read the code, and found the meaning of the map.

"It appears some sort of artifact was hidden there, a forgotten weapon", said Zeus aloud.
"Well well well, what will we do?", Arvine said it sarcastically, knowing Zeus will do one thing.
"Let us grab the treasure! I will grab that thing for my glory!", said Zeus frantically.
"Let us grab the treasure! I will grab that thing for my glory!", said Arvine sarcastically.

Arvine looked upon Zeus and what he saw, was a man with cover on his glory and greed.
He only chuckled and know where this will go.

"Well then Zeus, you seemed to up to something."
"Come on Arvine, it'll be fun! Imagine wielding that weapon."
"No THANK YOU!"

Arvine crashes upon his window, escaping while he still can.
But Zeus still have an ace on his sleeve.

"Men, grab "im!"

Before Arvine could react the men below the window grab him and and knock his head with a club.
As an act of a normal human, Arvine fainted.

Twilight Door

After several moments, Arvine woke up in a forest.
It was in the afternoon, and the sun almost going down.
Beside him, lay Zeus with his companions.
Leaning on the fire, they are looking at Arvine
Zeus was grinning, and quickly spoke up.

"So, do you have a nice dream Arvine?"
"Dream yourself, my head aches like a moth around the lantern. Where are we?"

The forest around Arvine was full of trees, thick like a man's eye brow.
The mountain was right by their side, and the pathway to the crack was clear.
The sun has gone down, and the moon was steadily rising.

"Zeus, why don't you enter the crack?"
"Like I can. The crack's too small. The runes that it will get bigger when moonlight strikes it.
"I see.....Well, I guess that doesn't do much go-"

Before Arvine can finish his sentence, a large baying of hounds was heard.
Wolves crept up to the fireplaces, their fangs shone in the twilight.
Zeus, unexpected to this attack, quickly called his men.

"Men,WHIRL ME Darkness's Bane!"

The men throws away the weapon to Zeus, and quickly races to his aid.

But suddenly, three large wolves seize the men legs, and drag them to the forest.
The men screamed and toiled, but the wolves keep holding them to the darkness.
Zeus, hears their scream, quickly rushes to their aid.
But Arvine, realizes that they're already dead, quickly seize Zeus's arm.

"Let me go! My men needs help!"
"It's too late Zeus, they're already dead. But we can't take their sacrifice vain. Let's go!"

Arvine and Zeus quickly races upon the pathway, occasionaly fending off the wolves.
Suddenly, the cracks flung wide open, and Arvine notices that.
He quickly grabbed Zeus by the arm, and quickly takes him inside the crack.
The moonlight has passed, and the cracks sealed again right off.

Inside the Mountain

Inside the cracks, Zeus wept terribly, and cried his tears out.
He roared till the cave shook, and stamp the ground like an elephant.

"Zeus, let's go, you're wounded right now. Let me heal you", Arvine said as he readied his spell.
"NO! We must go on. I will led the way Arvine. I will lead the way.....",said Zeus painfully.

Arvine looked upon Zeus once again, feeling pity on him.
What he saw was a man with full of wounds from the wolves, but not just phsyical, but mental too.
He followed as Zeus led the way to the chamber.

As two of them entered the chamber, they saw a large axe, brandished with golden handles.
The metal to make the axe seems to glow in the dark, and on the tip, lay a diamond gem.
The two wondered the weapon, struck into the cold stone, it's gleam are never-ending.
But before Zeus attempted to grab the axe, a large shadow came between him.
He knock away Zeus with a weapon, and stood there silently, looking at both of them.

"My name is Rafael Leonardo, the Charger of the Abyss, reveal yourself!"

As he said that, he tosses away his cloak, standing boldly in front of the two.
He appears with a large scythe on his back, a large halberd on his right hand, and a spear on his left.
His face was looking at Zeus suspiciously, and looked at Arvine unsurely.
Arvine quickly speaks up.

"Who are you? Are you a Forsaken?"

As Arvine said that, he readied his staff.
The man in front of him quickly spoke up.

"I don't know what are you talking, but listen to this. Leave this place alone, and never come back!"

But suddenly, Zeus sprang up on the floor, his eyes are burning with rage.
He felt the cold bitter of hatred to death flowing from him.

"My name is Zeus, and I'm here to take that axe! Begone!"

Suddenly, Rafael lashes out his halberd, and slashes Zeus.
But he only strike a thin air, as Arvine pulled back Zeus right in time.

"Zeus, let me handle this guy, I wanted to know more about him."

Arvine lays Zeus down to the ground, and confront the challenger.

The Friendly Guardian
"Who are you, little brat?"
"My name is Arvine, and I'm here to help my friend to find the weapon. Why do you guard this?"
"I can't speak that. But listen, we shouldn't have to do this. You could just turn back."
"Sorry, but a friend is a friend. I can't leave him alone.
"So be it."

As Rafael said that, he moves forward and strike Arvine with his spear.
Arvine swiftly dodged it, but before he could regained his stance, a swift of halberd was given.
Raising his staff, Arvine blocked the blow, but flung to the other side of the chamber.
Arvine quickly raised a water shield around him, and cast upon Rafael a large blast of fire.
Rafael, knowing that technique long ago, simply releases a small amount of force from his halberd.

Arvine, realized that this wouldn't end quickly, charge up his Dragon's Soul, the Frost Dragon's soul.
Bur Rafael, seems to be unimpressed, chuckled at his ability.

"Is that it? I can do much better than that."

Rafael quickly charge up his own halberd and spear, and quickly it glows in the dark.
He banged both the weapons, unleashed a wave of force that flung through Arvine.
Arvine quickly raises uses his ability to rise a shield of ice of protect him.

The shield withstand the first blow, but Rafael expected more.
He unleashes the second blow, and the shield was shattered pieces.
Arvine, flunged again by the blow, quickly gets up.
He charged up his Fire Dragon's Soul, and casts pillars of flame that rises to the ground.
Rafael dodged side by side, and slashes at Arvine with his daggers.
Arvine quickly cast up his water prison, and fall back for a moment.

Arvine, still determined to beat him, shoots up his lightning arrows.
Rafael just dodged him, and with one stroke of his scythe, he draws blood from Arvine's chest.
A large wound it is, hanging from the left soldier to the right side of the waist.

Arvine merged with a different Dragon's Soul, the Dark Dragon's Soul.
Arvine then released a large amount of cry of terror, that smite Rafael.
Unable to hold any longer, Rafael runs away to the shadow.
Arvine, feeling like he won, shouted a cry, however after his fusion ended, Rafael smiled.
He entered the room again, looking at Arvine, patching up his wounds.

Arvine cast himself his water shield again, trying to stop the wound from bleeding.
Rafael look him with a great pity and respect for a kid like that.
He quickly spoken up again.

"Arvine, you seem exhausted, how about you turn back? I like your courage, but it's useless."
"Like I said, I will not back down! I will help my friend!"

Rafael, sees the determination of his opponent, smiled at his courage.
He remembered up his courage when he face up the assassins.
He remembered, when he bathes upon the blood of the sinful.

"Well said Arvine! You have earned my respect! I will show my ultimate form!"

Ultimate and Ultima

As he said that, Rafael pull out his halberd and scythe again.
Suddenly, and immense force was forced out of him, and his weapons are glowing.
He hold both of his weapons, pushing their tips toward each other.
The amount of friction was so high, and suddenly, a large explosion was unleashed.
Arvine and Zeus was blown away outside the chamber room, and they stood up again.
What they saw was one of the sight they will remember a long time.

Inside the chamber, Rafael has held a two headed weapon, the top is a scythe, the end is a halberd.
Rafael, smiled at Arvine, knowing that he hold the upper hand.
Before Arvine could say anything, Rafael was behind him, and has given him a another cut.
However, before he realized, he was electrocuted to the point of passing out.
Arvine fell down to the ground, holding up his breath against Rafael.

"Arvine, my weapon has been charged fully. If wound wouldn't stop you, electricity will."

Arvine upon hearing the word of Rafael, quickly woke up again.
He spoke out loud in a defiant tone:

"IF ELECTRICITY IS YOUR CALL, THEN ELEMENTS ARE MY CALL!"

Arvine's body glows up in return to of his strength, and his wound are healed.
He has released his Ultima.

Revenge is Sweet

"I-Impossible! I have smitten you!"

Rafael are unable to believe his eye. Arvine has rose again from his wounds.
Arvine smirked, when Rafael stood there, unable to respond.
With a quick response, Arvine spoke back.
"You shouldn't awake the Sleeping Giant."

Before Rafael could say "Ouch", Arvine was behind his back, cutting him with his Light Sword.
Rafael tries to retaliate, but when the weapon strikes Arvine, his hands feels heavy.
He tried to hold firm the sword, and casted upon himself another charge.
Swift as a wind, Rafael unleashes another blow to Arvine.

However, Arvine doesn't falter.
With his hand cannon, he blasted up the weapon Rafael hold.
Charged by the energy from Arvine's blast, the weapon electrocuted his own master.
Rafael dropped his weapon, fall back a moment, and stood by against his enemey.
He couldn't believe he have a hard time against the helpless kid from before.

The Accursed Truth

Rafael and Arvine stood both together, looking at each other.
The conclusion seems to come fast, as Rafael has dropped his weapon, and Arvine has released his Ultima.
But all of a sudden, a mighty rumble was heard was heard from the depth of the cave.
The chamber shook and shake, Arvine doesn't know what happens, but Rafael does.
He quickly looked upon Zeus, and found him grabbing the Axe.
Zeus has released the seal on the axe.

"You fool! What have you done!", said Rafael.
"What, what have I done?", replied Zeus.

Another mighty rumble was heard, and the chamber shook.
We need to go, this cave is gonna crumble, follow me!

Zeus and Arvine followed behind trails of Rafael.
The cave still shook and stir, and stones are falling.
Rafael quickly explains what happened.

"Long ago, Lord Gerant have successfully defeated a beast called Mavern here, the fallen beast.
However, Lord Gerant was injured heavily on the process, and the weapon he used are left behind.
Unknown to Gerant, Mavern has place a fragment of his soul in his weapon, the axe, allowing him to stay alive.
With this being done, I understand that I must place a seal on the axe he left upon.
If someone break upon the seal of the axe, and remove it from the stone, Mavern will woke up again.
And with his power, he will try his best to find that axe, to allow his soul to live again in the world.
You, an idiot, have woken him up, and making him to get that axe on the process. He will chase us now."

Zeus realized that the axe was cursed, shows shame and regret for breaking the seal.
Rafael, on the other hand, have shown them on the end of the road.
In front of them, there was a long bridge, leading to a roadway at the end.
Rafael quickly moved upon the bridge.

"We need to get on the bridge to City of the Krim, where they can seal this axe. I heard about the techniques."

However, a mighty rumble was heard from behind. A huge beast, 10 Feet at size, are behind them.
He wield a large handed sword on his right hand, and in his other hand, a large claw was placed.
His breath was foul and smells, and his feet was like a large machinery.
He quickly gave chase to the bridge, faster than the trio.

Arvine, Rafael, and Zeus keep running, but they soon to be caught up.
Zeus, realized they cannot escape, determined to his plan.
He stopped and turned his back toward the body of Marven, raging towards them
Arvine and Rafael stood where they stand, puzzled by Zeus's act.

"Zeus, what are you doing? We need to go!"
"Shut your fucking mouth kiddo, I will fight this thing."
"Wha-you're nuts or what? We need to go!"
"Shut up."

As Zeus said that, he grabs Arvine and thrown him on the other end of the bridge.
Then he gave the axe to Rafael, and whispered something to his ear.
Rafael quickly go to the other end of the bridge, holding up the axe.
As he reaches the end, he grabs Arvine and make the run for it.

Arvine looked up on where Zeus stands.
The beast was promptly facing Zeus, his fangs and sword are raised.
But before they struck down, Arvine heard a voice

Zeus's real death will be revealed after the second boss fight, it will put you all in quite a "twist?"

Zeus will be remembered by his clan members, he was ever so gener..... he was so gratfu...... he was such a nic...... HE WAS ZEUS.

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Triss, your story was long. But never mind about that. Hehe. Anyways good luck to both of us!

I see you will win Triss with those plot. it was NICE. haha

Nah, you probably win this game.
You got 3 votes earlier than me.
You also put up more effort to this battle.
This might become my loss.

(But seriously, who is zanbyull and WizardKnight? They just came up from nowhere)

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Nah, you probably win this game.
You got 3 votes earlier than me.
You also put up more effort to this battle.
This might become my loss.

(But seriously, who is zanbyull and WizardKnight? They just came up from nowhere)

He/she didnt include my name O_O.... he/she probably knows me >.> stalker

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I'm already dead.

Uhm, you're the one who gave this pastebin to me.
I only did what you asked.

Listen lets be honest you both have good stories, the only thing I can find wrong with your stories are these.

How you got Zeus who is dead now.

For Lethal2: FUCKEDY FUCK FUCK SHIT BALLS, Zeus does not speak like that. Also mortal medical techniques work with the immortals, however they are so used to the healings of their priests and mages that its incredibly painful to use mortal medication and surgery (they still feel stuff even when knocked out)

For Triss: Zeus had a grudge on Arvine since he stole his gold, whenever he would get the chance he would remind Arvine to give him his gold back (Your character stole 10000 dollars worth of gold and silver bars, of course Zeus is going to have a grudge, think of Zeus like a really angry loan shark). Unless that ax was something that was worth 10000 or more, Zeus never would of went to Arvine. Though you got the people right.


NOW FOR THE STORIES THEMSELVES

Lethal2: Your plot is well played yet some grammar errors were found, also putting the dialogue within a spoiler, not a good idea in my book.

Triss: Some grammar errors but that's all I found.

Totally not going to vote (nah kidding, I'm voting for Triss, his story screams awesomeness. EVEN IF he got your character wrongish)

Wrongish is a word now, I want y'all to start using it.

Sorry both my characters are already dead, so I stand laughing at your puny scythe HA HA HA HA HAAA. Listen we both agreed on canceling it, I am still losing against high school and possible going to end up taking the same year again, sad but true.

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I'm guessing that you're from America! lol. Just please, I beg you to tell me where you live, I won't rape you or kidnap you lol.

*SuspiciouslySpecificDenial

Wow Triss's story is so good, while Lethal2 is not bad too. Looks like I would upgrade myself in wRHG battle format, which will not be too boring like I did in my last battle with Rochedan.

Lethal2, I see your brother(BlizzyGuy) is voting for you XP
Well, at least the score's are more stable now.

After a while, I realized this isn't a battle of writings.
This is the battle for "Which one have the most loyal friends" battle.

Lol. It's rare for me to vote a battle actually XD But Lethal you've improved so much, it's just not like the previous you. Anyways why Triss did your story is so attractive or something!

Well, I will make my story interesting in my next battle which starts at 1st May or something. Btw, THEFORCE somehow says that he will quit... But still don't know yet.