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Jul 10, 2013 2:53 AM #1030570
Name: Digkid
age: 15
height: 4'9"
weight:146 lb
gender: male


- Abilities:
Earth control: he has the ability to control the earth such as raising mountains or causing dust to crush his opponent or even creating gems or metal from the earth

Giant pickaxe: this giant pickaxe is made up of solid titanium and can be swung with great speed

extremely tough skin: his skin is 20 times thicker than that of a normal person

traveling under ground: he can travel underground at extremely high speed with his pickaxe to a maximum of 240 mph or 15mph with out his pickaxe

- Weaknesses:
Earth control: he cannot control metals or gems that he did not make. For example: an opponents sword. He cannot make the opponents sword stab it's owner.

Water: he is extremely afraid of water

Going airborn: he hates being in the air so if he gets sent flying he is doomed

losing pickaxe: if he loses his weapon he will do poorly at fighting with his hands so he will use his earth powers in a defensive way though this can be very tiring after a while

young: he is young so he is overconfident and not as experienced as others

allergy: is allergic to uranium. when near uranium he looses his earth powers and can start sneezing arsenic violently and have extremely bad gas.

- Personality:
he is extremely hyper and spontaneous also he is a prankster. he is more likely to create an anvil out of dust and drop it on his opponent while pretending to be defeated then to shake hands with his opponent. also he may start dancing if he thinks he is going to win. this is all good but he takes his battles very seriously and will almost always kill his opponent if they make him angry. plus he will not talk much for he is shy but will taunt his opponent often. also reckless and pesty.

- Appearance:
he is short and bald. he has an earth brown skin tone and brown eyes. he wears a blue baseball cap backwords and usully loose baggy shorts but no shirt. his pickaxe is always straped to his back except in combat.

- About/Story:
abandoned shortly after birth, he was found and raised by a group of moles. it was during this time that he learned about his ability to control earth and travel through it. At age seven he dug his way into a mine where the workers discovered him. they later raised him to be a miner, this is where he started working with a pickaxe. at age 11 the mine closed down but he refused to leave so he stayed there and kept digging. a year later he decided to start training with a giant pickaxe, that he made himself, out of pure titanium. about two years later his mine was invaded by theaves that kicked him out. deturmined to get the mine back he put his training to use killing all of the invaders getting his home back. he continued training and eventually set out to fight thieves or anyone that would harm the inocent. he also protects moles from humans.



- Demo:
Standing before Digkid to the entrance of his mine was about five men. All of the men were dressed in black suits and holding a katana or a broadsword.

“Well, what do we have here,” said the man in front, “looks like we have a kid that lost his way.”

The other men laughed as Digkid started to get annoyed and said, “I have not lost my way but was on my way home.”

The man in front laughs and says, “Well why don’t you go home and leave this place.”

“I can’t for this is my home,” said Digkid.

“Well it’s not your home anymore so scram!” said the man in front.

Digkid takes his pickaxe off of his back and holds it in front of him as the five men hold their weapons up ready to attack.

“This is your last chance kid. Get out of here or die,” said the man in front.

“It’s not me who will die,” said Digkid as he took a step forward raising his pickaxe.

“KILL HIM!” yelled the man in front as he charged towards Digkid the other men following.

Digkid laughed as he jumped up into the air, swinging his pickaxe back. He brought the pickaxe down onto the first man’s head splitting his skull in half. The second man swung his broadsword at Digkid’s head but missed as Digkid rolled to the side.

“Awwww, what’s wrong? Can’t you hit me with that big sword,” taunts Digkid as he gets up.

This makes the second man mad. He swings his sword again and again at Digkid but does not hit him for Digkid is too fast. Digkid kicks dirt into the second man’s eyes which causes him to drop his weapon and start rubbing his eyes. Digkid then swings his pickaxe into the second mans chest killing him instantly.

Two of the three men left charge Digkid at once there weapons pointed towards Digkid. Digkid laughs as he strikes the ground with his pickaxe again and again at blinding speed. The two men continue to charge as Digkid looks up.

“Well this was fun but I got to go,” says Digkid.

He jumps into the air, half turning so his pickaxe is pointed towards the ground. Spinning his pickaxe like a drill he burrows into the ground just missing the swords of the two men. They keep running towards each other and their swords pierce the others heart and they fall over dead.

The last man holds his katana up looking around frightened. Suddenly the earth beneath his feet shook and shot up fifty feet into the air as he screamed like a little girl. Digkid appeared behind the man and tapped him on the shoulder. He fell of the side of the earth column and grabbed onto the edge, his sword falling to the ground below.

“Hey man how it is hanging,” laughs Digkid.

“Don’t k-kill me. Please,” plead the man.

“I won’t gravity will,” said Digkid.

“Please don’t I’ll give you anything,” the man said as his finger started to slip.

“Don’t want anything,” laughed Digkid as he stepped on the man’s fingers, “Have a nice fall.”

The man screamed as he fell the fifty feet to the ground. He landed on his legs breaking them as he screamed in pain, his blood starting to stain the ground. Digkid climbed down the column of earth to the man and bent over him.

“How was your trip?” asked Digkid as he started to laugh; “Now you’re going to have a nice flight.”

The man glared at Digkid and stabbed him with a knife but it bent as it hit his skin. The man looked at the knife then at Digkid as he started to shake suddenly very afraid.

“Good bye,” said Digkid as the earth beneath the man shot up like that of a catapult and sent the man flying.


- Battles: [thread=75041]TyTheGamerGuy[/thread]= tie

[thread=77999]devi[/thread]= win



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Tie:1
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-available: Nope not until march 15th

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Jul 10, 2013 8:44 AM #1030803
If his skin is 20 times thicker than normal, does that make him a giant? Or are his organs all compressed into a tiny area, or -

Although this idea is a little bit overused - you know, controlling the elements and stuff like that - your character itself is quite quirky and unique.

I dig it. :P
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Jul 10, 2013 2:41 PM #1030935
Quote from Saf
If his skin is 20 times thicker than normal, does that make him a giant? Or are his organs all compressed into a tiny area, or -


it just means his skin is 4 inches thick so he just looks a bit larger but is not like a giant and his organs are not compressed. and thanks for digging my character.
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Jul 10, 2013 6:06 PM #1031035
I was going to say what I think on the skin part but it would just make me look like a psychopath, nice character but if he can go 240 mph (which I'm sure is how fast a race car can go) then wouldn't be one of his powers? Moving at such an incredible speed.

traveling under ground: he can travel underground at extremely high speed with his pickaxe to a maximum of 240 mph or 15mph with out his pickaxe: He can travel this fast underground but what makes it so he can do that underground and not above ground? Does the earth give off some sort of special ability to him that is stronger when he is surrounded by dirt? (besides the power to create gems and such, I'm talking about how he can miraculously move as fast as race car underground but run like a normal person above ground)
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Jul 10, 2013 6:17 PM #1031041
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I was going to say what I think on the skin part but it would just make me look like a psychopath, nice character but if he can go 240 mph (which I'm sure is how fast a race car can go) then wouldn't be one of his powers? Moving at such an incredible speed.

traveling under ground: he can travel underground at extremely high speed with his pickaxe to a maximum of 240 mph or 15mph with out his pickaxe: He can travel this fast underground but what makes it so he can do that underground and not above ground? Does the earth give off some sort of special ability to him that is stronger when he is surrounded by dirt? (besides the power to create gems and such, I'm talking about how he can miraculously move as fast as race car underground but run like a normal person above ground)


dude he was raised by moles for the first seven years of his life. all of which were spent underground. so that's why he can move so fast underground pus he controls the earth.
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Jul 10, 2013 6:59 PM #1031062
Um okay then. But let me just tell you this, A mole can only dig 18 feet per hour. Unless of course the moles that raised you where super powered moles that just so managed to radiate super powers onto digkid thus giving him his abnormal digging abilities. Anywho I'll stop asking questions.
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Jul 10, 2013 7:12 PM #1031068
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Um okay then. But let me just tell you this, A mole can only dig 18 feet per hour. Unless of course the moles that raised you where super powered moles that just so managed to radiate super powers onto digkid thus giving him his abnormal digging abilities. Anywho I'll stop asking questions.


thanks for not asking anymore questions but digkid is a human and thus can dig faster than a mole.
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Jul 10, 2013 9:11 PM #1031117
........ (-___-")
I can't see this guy doing much in a real fight. What are his combat abilities? The Earth manipulation is very utility and defensively based. And swinging his weapon isn't something I'd base whole fight off of unless he was just a weapon adept. There's some definite abilities that can be drawn out of this but without mentioning them they can't really....be used? Exist? You should respec his powers to clean him up a bit. And go deeper with the story, punny, there wasn't enough of it IMO.
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Jul 10, 2013 9:26 PM #1031126
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........ (-___-")
I can't see this guy doing much in a real fight. What are his combat abilities? The Earth manipulation is very utility and defensively based. And swinging his weapon isn't something I'd base whole fight off of unless he was just a weapon adept. There's some definite abilities that can be drawn out of this but without mentioning them they can't really....be used? Exist? You should respec his powers to clean him up a bit. And go deeper with the story, punny, there wasn't enough of it IMO.


look he is very weapon dependent and has mastered usage of a pickaxe as a weapon and his earth manipulation is not just defensive based
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Jul 10, 2013 10:34 PM #1031180
True, Earth can be used for plenty of stuff other than defence. I like to see it more as a strategic tool, in that it can change the battlefield to give enemies a harder time.

Some history behind his weapon and the mine closure could be nice to see, but otherwise he seems a rounded character. Best of luck to you =o.
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Jul 10, 2013 10:36 PM #1031181
thanks I will try my best
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Jul 11, 2013 5:37 AM #1031432
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look he is very weapon dependent and has mastered usage of a pickaxe as a weapon and his earth manipulation is not just defensive based


I understand that but....I don't know I feel like your writing "prowess" is taking away from what your character could be. It might be just me, but that's how i feel. Sorry if i offend you.
I'd be willing to lend a hand if you wanted some help =/
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Jul 11, 2013 1:57 PM #1031735
that's the whole reason im doing this. so I can get better at writing
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Jul 11, 2013 7:03 PM #1031903
I do it for fun....the writing develops on its own.
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Jul 12, 2013 2:06 AM #1032200
ok thanks
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