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Dec 15, 2013 1:45 AM #1123961
Name: The creature is nameless. It changes from story to story. “Handyman” is just what I call him outside of stories.

Gender: N/A, though in casual humanoid form it may be referred to as a male.

Note: Handyman is not meant to be a normal gladiator. He is a plot device, a catalyst. He is made so that you can develop your own character. Through his physical strength he bottlenecks your character into a situation where they fight against themselves, not against him. You needn't even show him in your story.

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skin is black, dry and leathery. It does not bleed save for a slow black ooze. When 9ft tall, its arms are 7ft. When 12ft, its arms are 9ft.

Head: The Handyman’s head is a large, spherical fist made up of thousands of tight-knit fingers. Its eyes are circular nails ingrown into its head, the cuticles at the bottom, giving it a ‘happy’ appearance. Trickles of foul-smelling black ooze come from where the nails dig in. It has a “smile” which dominates half of its head. The top and bottoms of the mouth are filled with pale yellow fingers that individually jerk and twitch, letting out clicks for sonar. It is incapable of changing facial expression.

The mouth, internally extending down its whole body, is a sheath for a long tentacle-like arm which takes place as a tongue. The tongue has the appearance of red, raw meat, white tendons running its length. It can grow long, microscopic fingers on its surface that can dig into a person’s skin and connect to their spinal cords. Though sometimes it is able to open its mouth, it often has to manually break it open or slam it shut, breaking its head in the process.

Body: The creature’s back is a multi-elbowed arm joint, each elbow being able to bend up to 90 degrees in any direction. The creature is casually slouched over. The upper half of the back has a “ribcage,” which are eight large fingers folded together. This is used to carry unconscious victims. The back also serves as a sheath for the creature’s tongue.

Legs: The legs of the thing are at a consistent thickness, the same as that of the back. Its “pelvis” is just two shoulders that connect the legs to the bottom of its body. Its feet are either large fingertips, for sneaking, or hands for maneuverability.

Arms: The creature’s arms can be any size below its max, being able to reach mere inches in length. Its upper arms grow slightly more thicker as they reach the elbow, and the forearms grow far thicker as they reach the hand. The fists of a 7ft arm is about 1ft thick. These arms have no wrists, instead focusing on gripping strength.

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creature is a symbol found in ancient cave paintings. Because it was often drawn alongside sleeping cavemen, it was thought of as a sort of death symbol, but was later learned that it was actually a drawing of the creature. Drawn as a warning.

Symbolism of the creature has arisen many times in past history, most visibly in multi-armed deities. Shiva, Brahma, Vishnu, heavily found in Hindu gods. It is often associated with immense power, destruction, death, or creation.

Some believe that it was this creature that gifted fear to the world, so that living things would have self-preservation and could flourish. It granted fear so that its flock would watch itself, and so whenever it was hungry, it would go forth and take away a bad sheep that abused the gift of fear, so that the flock may carry on in peace.

“We knew the world would not be the same. A few people laughed, a few people cried. Most people were silent. I remembered the line from the Hindu scripture, the Bhagavad Gita; Vishnu is trying to persuade the Prince that he should do his duty and, to impress him, takes on his multi-armed form and says, 'Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds.' I suppose we all thought that, one way or another.”
- Robert J Oppenheimer on the atomic bomb.[/spoiler]

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en (they view it like an imaginary friend) and has a great fondness for them as they appear to be the only creatures not innately terrified of it. It has some form of morality, only haunting those that have harmed children. It migrates across the world constantly, occasionally making temporary homes in caves. It never lives in one area longer than a decade.

“Haunting” is the creature’s hunting tactic. This takes place over several weeks. It starts off by stalking the potential victim. If it accepts the haunted as the victim, it starts to directly affect their lives. It sews seeds of paranoia in the victims. Leaving doors open, moving objects when they don’t look, like what you’d expect out of a ghost. The only way you can know it is there is if you pay close attention to the sounds of the background and hear a gentle clicking. It takes great care in never showing itself to the victim.

Eventually the victim’s mind is marinaded in fear and paranoia, which makes the eventual mind invasion so much more successful. When it has fed, it leaves the body there for others to find, and it quietly leaves and migrates to another area.

The creature is casually calm and incapable of feeling anger, but when cornered it can become incredibly annoyed and fearful, making it lash out.[/spoiler]

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st, originating from the campfire that three kids surrounded. The fire was quite visibly dying out only leaving a little bit of light behind, the brightness slowly succumbing to the cold, apathetic night air. The adult of the party- Dave- went to his truck to get some firewood. He won't be gone long; but he'll be gone long enough for a story.

"Dave's going to be at least ten minutes going to his truck gettin' that firewood. So how about... a ghost story?" said Ted, the eldest of the three at a mighty 14 years old.

"What? No! We can't do that! Dave forbade us from telling scary stories! It's hard enough sleeping out here in the forest, anyway. The tents are too-"

Tara, twelve years old, was suddenly interrupted by Jack, a boy of the same age.

"Quiet down with yer darn' complainin'. It's been ages since I 'eard a good ghost story. 'Ave at it, Ted. Don't let mopey here put yer off."

Tara went "Hmph." and curled up a bit. Jack, a weird little boy with a love of talking funny, just made himself slightly comfy. Ted paused for some effect. The fire crackled a little less now, so the perfect atmosphere for a ghost story dawns.

Before saying the first word, Ted darts his eyes left and right, seeing if Dave was anywhere near; hard to tell, though. The clearing they were in was surrounded by tall, dark trees. There was a small path leading through the trees that went to a little area where the truck was parked; it was a good five minutes walk there and back but it was easy to see the path when you were in the forest.

"Well," started Ted "have you heard of the murder of... Benny Mills?" The other two shook their head; Tara unenthusiastically, Jack quite the opposite. "Benny Mills used to live a few miles away from here, you know. He lived in a cottage on the other end of this very forest, and he lived alone. The only person who really knew him was his landlord. They were good friends, often seeing each other on the weekends for poker, drinks, and so on. It was all fun and games for ol' Benny, until the scratching started."

Tara tried to conceal her shudder, and she thought she did pretty well. She didn't, though. Jack was already wrapped up in the story and Ted was having fun reciting it from his memory.

"Every night at Benny's house, there were scratches at his bedroom window. You'd think it would be a wolf or a stray cat, but he di
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Dec 15, 2013 3:48 AM #1124106
Heh, not even going to lie, I was expecting to find some carpenter in this thread!

Very pleasantly surprised! The questions I had cleared up with the story and demo, and I wish you good luck with this character, deffidenly very interesting!
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Dec 15, 2013 2:57 PM #1124476
Same as crank, but I sense a weird similarity to Internet meme Slender Man...

Some advice. On the forums, if you really want to make a new paragraph, use the enter key twice instead of just once. That makes your story layout much clearer.
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Dec 15, 2013 3:20 PM #1124492
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Same as crank, but I sense a weird similarity to Internet meme Slender Man...

Some advice. On the forums, if you really want to make a new paragraph, use the enter key twice instead of just once. That makes your story layout much clearer.


I had originally started each paragraph with a tab but it seems that they don't appear. Thanks.

Also, when this guy was made I didn't want him to be similar at Slenderman- hell, when I first made him up Slendy wasn't even in my mind. When I made the guy I wanted to make someone with big arms, and I decided to add a creepy face too. I ended up with this: http://i.imgur.com/o5WyS3O.png
Then I added two more arms: http://i.imgur.com/CfwmBDz.png and I thought it was a bit creepy.
Then I added more arms: http://i.imgur.com/5t7TM8T.png and I was sold on the guy.

When I decided to make this guy into an actual character, THEN I thought about Slenderman; to be more specific, how he could be less like Slenderman. He had to be tall so he sticks out like a sore thumb, and since he scares through paranoia then he shouldn't really appear to the victim until their last nightmare. Him appearing being the last nail in the coffin, as it were. Slenderman pops up everywhere and lets you know he's there, my guy does the opposite. I guess the whole spawning arms thing is similar to Slendy's tentacles, but I only realised afterwards. But Slendy isn't made up of tentacles, is he? My guy's entirely arms and fingers. I wanted to put a bit of body horror in here.

My two fave kinds of horror: Body horror and Fridge horror. I'm hoping to bring 'em both in with this guy. I don't deal with jumpscares. I don't deal with cheesy notes on trees. I don't deal with "mommy, look at that tall guy under that tree!"

So I actually tried to make him not seem too similar to Slenderman. But if you have to, you can just think of him as Slendy's loooong-distant cousin.
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Dec 15, 2013 3:22 PM #1124493
I really found this similar to Slenderman only under a different name and history. I want to see how you make this unique on the wRHG battleground :)

I like that a touch of horror entered the wRHG.

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Read your above post.

I see how you've gotten to Handyman. In any case, I'd love to see him in action scaring the wRHGs or breaking their minds. Possibly against BirtDog's Dominic? xD
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Dec 15, 2013 3:26 PM #1124497
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I had originally started each paragraph with a tab but it seems that they don't appear.
There's an indent tag for you to use.


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Dec 15, 2013 3:32 PM #1124501
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I see how you've gotten to Handyman. In any case, I'd love to see him in action scaring the wRHGs or breaking their minds. Possibly against BirtDog's Dominic? xD


I'll have to look up his wRHG some time then!

Also, in my quest to make this guy creepy, I realised that "Handy" rhymed with "Candy". So yeah, his name's kinda inspired from Candyman. Perfect fit, right?

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There's an indent tag for you to use.




So I'll have to edit the post more? Bah. I'll do it some other time, I'm too tired right now.
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Dec 15, 2013 3:40 PM #1124507
Basically when I read your story, I realized it was a classical horror story. Similar to Azure, for a change. But damnit, you done pretty well doing the tone of the wRHG. I wish to continue reading more horrors from you.

Oh and I like waffles. c:
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Dec 19, 2013 10:40 AM #1126604
Ain't taller than me bro. BWAHAHAHAHHA
Anyway good luck with this character and get some spooks on.
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Jan 14, 2014 10:56 PM #1141406
Changed my demo, updated powers/weaknesses. pls read my demo I wanna know what people think of it :(
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Jan 15, 2014 1:26 AM #1141474
This is quite good, and probably one of the most original character concepts I've seen in awhile. Your writing is also great; the Horror story in the demo played to your character very well, without becoming difficult to follow. I look forward to reading, and possibly participating in a battle with you in the future. Good luck!
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Apr 10, 2014 9:31 PM #1185607
Ey, folks. Marshmallow and I aren't doing the battle any more. I wrote several pages and hadn't finished, he didn't write Jack.

So, anyone wanna have a go at Handy? I don't think I want to do anything too big, though. This gonna be my first battle.
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Apr 18, 2014 2:17 PM #1187889
I may have an overpowered character; but I'm a terrible writer, so I think that qualifies me as quite small.

If you're still interested, I'll be available.
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Mar 11, 2015 12:43 AM #1324031
Bump, new ability. Arm forest. It's not an attack, more of a forced scenery change. It's made to confuse and stumble, and it's very situational. Got some weaknesses in to balance it out, too. Also, post that shit Devi lemme get some good stuff in here!
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Mar 11, 2015 12:44 AM #1324033
Since you wanted me to.

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Overall, you’ve got a good character here. Wish you luck in the future!
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