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mitsofdoom
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Jul 18, 2008 4:41 PM #191809
Took 2 days. C und C please.
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Jul 18, 2008 4:44 PM #191812
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you animate 10 seconds per day?
nothing cool in this animation
but i liked the particles
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Jul 18, 2008 4:47 PM #191813
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you animate 10 seconds per day?


No but I tried diffrent ideas before the spring, which all failed. Plus I've never animated smoke before.
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Jul 18, 2008 4:59 PM #191820
nice smoke. really nice
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Jul 18, 2008 6:36 PM #191898
Thanks it took a lot of patience :D
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Jul 18, 2008 7:09 PM #191913
yeah the particles were fine i like the animation

will it continue?
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Jul 18, 2008 7:45 PM #191928
when the guy, or whatever, springs out the top, i think it moves WAY to fast. you cant even tell what it is.
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Jul 18, 2008 7:46 PM #191929
I didn't really like how the smoke dissipated.
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Jul 19, 2008 9:11 AM #192496
@abraham64: It would but I'm lazy right now so, no.
@guitarhero1236: It does that 'cos it's supposed do it. Why esle would I blur it so much. And yes, It is a guy jumping out.
@BloodFruit: Well everyone else who's commented liked it and I guess it's partly stylish.
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Jul 19, 2008 1:43 PM #192653
i liked the smoke and the sun was cool...but the ejector thingy was weird. i had to watch it a couple times to see what it was
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Jul 19, 2008 6:00 PM #192729
i liked the way u put gradients on the smoke, not in a pure gradient though, shwos more care =]
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Jul 19, 2008 6:38 PM #192748
You kinda stole "The Jaws" sun imo.
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Jul 19, 2008 9:19 PM #192828
Yes the sun is based on Jaws's avatar as noted in the description.
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Jul 19, 2008 10:36 PM #192910
Quote from mitsofdoom
@abraham64: It would but I'm lazy right now so, no.
@guitarhero1236: It does that 'cos it's supposed do it. Why esle would I blur it so much. And yes, It is a guy jumping out.
@BloodFruit: Well everyone else who's commented liked it and I guess it's partly stylish.


Becuase everyone else who commented before me doesn't know what they are talking about.

And learn to take crit.
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Jul 20, 2008 12:15 AM #192994
The Smoke should dissipate at a slower rate, it will look better.