Flux Pavillion style
Not bad man, Pretty good but its lacking that power that flux pavilion has.
What VST's are you using? When i was still into that shit i got a pretty good sounding flux pavilion patch from massive.
maybe try to detune the osc's more or maybe layer some voices of it.
Depending on your vst you could put a envelope with little attack no sustain and you prefered decay mapped to the pitch 12+, just like you would if you made a 808.
Gives it that extra punch imo.
ya i agree with what fusion said, i would maybe drop that high pitch shit down a octave and the bass down one too.
idk just fuck with your ranges cause it all seems pretty high.
