Well, did a quick thing. Less smooth then the previous, but I tried a bit more faster paced fight >_> No preloader as always rofl, if you want me to add one say it >_> although its small.


http://antiup.net/view/10988/


C&C plox (also the ''ssjbryando'' can be distractive rofl)

lol I improved alot in a week. =D I know the backs are stiff D:

(Note: antiup seems to slow some parts down .__.)

It's really good, but the drawrings seem like they need to be a little smoother.

I drew nothing? except a line. You mean the sticks? oh ok. Ill put smoothness up I guess =D thanks

I luv ur style, nice stickfight :D

Thanks. Gonna keep practicing =]

more comments?

maybe if you put more frames in the last movement i will look better

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It's good, but i don't like the style. I know i have pauses in my animation. But there were several in this one.

Still good though.

Sticks did get a bit wobbly.

Your right it has some stops, rofl there is always something you dislike about my animation :P and its not really a style, ill try to fix that =D

Well, i wouldn't lie and tell you it was the best thing i have ever seen in the world.

The different opinions of different animators shape you into a better one right?

Lol, I still think it's good, but i'm pointing out the flaws so you can fix you know.

No hard feelings, and sorry if i do seem to point it out a lot, lmao.

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Well, i wouldn't lie and tell you it was the best thing i have ever seen in the world.

The different opinions of different animators shape you into a better one right?

Lol, I still think it's good, but i'm pointing out the flaws so you can fix you know.

No hard feelings, and sorry if i do seem to point it out a lot, lmao.

Rofl I know, that's not it =D I need C&C else Im not gonna get better. but I was just saying.

YES ****DAMNIT

I think you've finally got it; those moves were pretty good. Just remove a few of those easing frames and it'll look pretty fluid.

Good job. Thou has improved.

Nice improvement, finally your using more sounds :3

wat up with the glass sounds

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YES ****DAMNIT

I think you've finally got it; those moves were pretty good. Just remove a few of those easing frames and it'll look pretty fluid.

Good job. Thou has improved.

Rofl your happy. Thanks a lot, yea I think I over eased at times.

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Nice improvement, finally your using more sounds :3

well I have about 20K sounds :P but I always used the same punching sounds yea, I thought why not give the glass breaking sounds a try although there not really breaking glass >_>

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wat up with the glass sounds

Everyone uses it although I didnt break glass rofl, its just a common sound. and thanks for commenting on the animation not just the line or the sound.. oh wait you didn't


But so the stiffness is solved? well at least most of it?