Yeah, I noticed some similarity between Handy and Recall :P

Also, don't feel bad. With what I told you you'll already start improving!

Oooh. This is new~
I really like what you've done with him; pretty impressive I must say.
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However, I must agree with Waffles and Delor~ At first sight, he's very promising, and everything seems damn near perfect, until you get to the demo.

Delor gave you some helpful hints on what to focus on, and Waffles nitpicked a bit; I definitely recommend adhering to their advice, they're both fantastic people/writers.

I look forward to seeing works from you! And welcome to the Lounge :)

(On another note. Is Derrick humanoid? Or stickfigure? If the former, could you mind inserting an appearance section describing him? Such as hair, facial features, etc?)

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Oooh. This is new~
I really like what you've done with him; pretty impressive I must say.
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However, I must agree with Waffles and Delor~ At first sight, he's very promising, and everything seems damn near perfect, until you get to the demo.

Delor gave you some helpful hints on what to focus on, and Waffles nitpicked a bit; I definitely recommend adhering to their advice, they're both fantastic people/writers.

I look forward to seeing works from you! And welcome to the Lounge :)

(On another note. Is Derrick humanoid? Or stickfigure? If the former, could you mind inserting an appearance section describing him? Such as hair, facial features, etc?)

He is a Stickfigure.

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He is a Stickfigure.

Okay! Then disregard that last bit~
But welcome anyway~!

I'm still working some on the demo. It probably has a lot of work to do still, but i'm sure it's at least somewhat better.

Sweet i'm on your hitlist i'll be waiting for that challenge but for now im really busy:/ I still do have a rhg battle in my head so again i'll be waiting

After doing some poking around, I'd like you to add me and Chance to your hitlist, if you would ever be so kind. :)

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After doing some poking around, I'd like you to add me and Chance to your hitlist, if you would ever be so kind. :)

Very well. You have a wait though.

Yo, you need to put your previous battles as links underneath your battles section. It's in the rules and stuff.

Urako put me on that hitlist. I like your writing style.

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Urako put me on that hitlist. I like your writing style.

Added. You know, your wRHG made me think of something. Why hasn't anyone tried a 2 vs 2 match before? It would be harder to set up, but it would be cool.

Yeah that's what I had in mind when I put up my personality for my wRHG. I didn't know multi-battles were near non-existent.

I don't think there's been anything of that nature on Stickpage, but FA had a clan war and Mastertop had a 1V1V1

About the people writing together, your best bet would be reach out to Error. He and Cav were matched together against Azure in the war

There would be several ways to tackle a 2v2.


Each side could have a joint thing going on where both people agree on a story and one writes a paragraph, sends it to the other to write another, sends it back and carries on until it ends.

Another idea would be to boot up Google Docs and have the better writer of the two to write the doc. as both people talk in the docs chat.

Or each person could write individual stories and instead of ranking individual stories you have to rate two at once. Like if one side had a 6/10 story and a 5/10 story and the other side had a 1/10 story and a 9/10 story, it'd add up to 11/20 and 10/20 and the first side would win.


I'm sure other ways could be done. But if one were to happen I'd love to read in on it, and possibly participate. If you're wanting to do one of those Urako, I'll support you!