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Apr 24, 2015 8:53 AM #1352648
Date: 4/24/2015 - Words: 661 (Click to Show)
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Apr 24, 2015 9:22 AM #1352656
Ooh, I like your work Error. I'll keep up with it as the days go on, you've got an interesting topic.
The first sentence is the most important one when setting the scene and starting the hook to get people interested. It's good practice to make that sentence hit the ground running, if that makes sense.

I just sat down to write for a bit too. I'
ll edit this post with my work for today once I'm done. Most of it will be deciding what I want to write, since I'll probably go with a long story over a bunch of small ones.

Edit: Here it goes.

Day 1: 371 Words (Click to Show)


I wanted to keep going but it's getting pretty close to the end of my shift. Didn't really feel like writing but once I got started I was having a lot of fun with this.

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Apr 24, 2015 12:34 PM #1352701
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Apr 24, 2015 3:04 PM #1352734
Addiction - Writing Exercise #1 (Click to Show)

Words : 337

Meh. Had a little fun with word variation with this.
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Apr 24, 2015 3:20 PM #1352738
Feel like joining. So I will, I guess.

Words: Varied... 100 - 1000 (Could get a little into something, or could be rambling a short idea)
Off days: No more than 2 days of a week.

This is unspecific I feel, but it's sadly how my schedule is at the moment.
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Apr 24, 2015 9:53 PM #1352844
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Addiction - Writing Exercise #1 (Click to Show)

Words : 337

Meh. Had a little fun with word variation with this.

Ooh, I like this too. I like your way of displaying tense emotions and the narrator's anxiety. With your vagueness for what it was he was craving, I was expecting it to be something totally unexpected at the end.
My only advice atm is that at the end, "One pill, two pill," seems to be starting a rhyme. But the addition of "a little" to red pill blue pill broke it. Sentence flow is srs business ;)
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Feel like joining. So I will, I guess.

Words: Varied... 100 - 1000 (Could get a little into something, or could be rambling a short idea)
Off days: No more than 2 days of a week.

This is unspecific I feel, but it's sadly how my schedule is at the moment.

I'll add you too. When do you want to start?

PS: With anyone that's running an ongoing story
like I am, feel free to discuss it here! I'm all for helping with ideas, and I might do the same with mine down the line.

For example, what I'm writing is a space noir. I don't have much fleshed out because I literally just thought "Oh hey this is a neat idea" and wrote the first thing that popped into my head.
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Apr 24, 2015 10:19 PM #1352845
Sign me up for saturdays to tuesdays. I hope I remember to do this. (I have affected memory.)
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Apr 24, 2015 10:26 PM #1352847
K I think I get the basis, I'll go for 400 words daily and same as Crank, two days of my choosing every week. I'll post something here possibly... POSSIBLY later today.
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Apr 24, 2015 10:53 PM #1352850
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Sign me up for saturdays to tuesdays. I hope I remember to do this. (I have affected memory.)

How many words a day?
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K I think I get the basis, I'll go for 400 words daily and same as Crank, two days of my choosing every week. I'll post something here possibly... POSSIBLY later today.

I'd be careful with people choosing "any two days of the week" as their two days off. It doesn't set a routine to be followed. Anyone who doesn't feel like writing can instead procrastinate and be like "Ehhh Ill just make this my day off" instead of being forced to discipline themselves and sit down and do it anyways. And that path leads to the dark side.

But with that said, you're fine.
Once we're all officially started, I'll start making daily charts for everyone who did their parts for the day. I find that knowing that I'm writing with other people who are taking the same challenge as me makes me much more inclined to keep it up.
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Apr 24, 2015 11:12 PM #1352853
Oh uh. Words. I'm not sure, entirely. 200+? When I get writing I can pump out stuff into the thousands in a session, so 200+ sounds enough for a writing start.
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Apr 24, 2015 11:40 PM #1352858
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PS: With anyone that's running an ongoing story like I am, feel free to discuss it here! I'm all for helping with ideas, and I might do the same with mine down the line.

For example, what I'm writing is a space noir. I don't have much fleshed out because I literally just thought "Oh hey this is a neat idea" and wrote the first thing that popped into my head.


Gonna be switching around maybe 2 or 3 stories but all continuing through this. Would Victoria be somehow related to the character in Cook's RP? She seems familiar. :D
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Apr 25, 2015 1:36 AM #1352904
I'd honestly suggest more "one shot" type shit, since reading through half-baked stories is kind of off-putting
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Apr 25, 2015 1:40 AM #1352910
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Gonna be switching around maybe 2 or 3 stories but all continuing through this. Would Victoria be somehow related to the character in Cook's RP? She seems familiar. :D

I'm using her "personality" but it's in a different universe than Cook's RP :p
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I'd honestly suggest more "one shot" type shit, since reading through half-baked stories is kind of off-putting


This stuff is about writing every day, not about writing nothing but short stories. If you want to do one shot things though that's fine :)
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Apr 25, 2015 3:14 AM #1352956
Sign me up! :)
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Apr 25, 2015 4:11 AM #1352974
I'll do this as much as I can. 200+ words to start off. My break days would be Monday and Wednesday.
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