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Aug 23, 2015 11:36 PM #1398565
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to be honest i didn't feel Iris. i always thought Pyro was your main dude, glad to see him back.

yeah i didnt feel it either.
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THANKS GOD U REVIVED PYRO!!!!i didn't want to remake the support sig,to bussy ;º;

lol you lazy bum
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Hurray, you revived Pyro! So are you now going to change your profile pic back into Pyro now?

Yeah I will.just making new pics thats all
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Aug 23, 2015 11:54 PM #1398574
Awesome RHG :D
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Aug 24, 2015 4:28 PM #1398794
Solid RHG. I've always liked Pyro over Iris (just saying).

The page is well laid out, just maybe some better headers than just adding - between the words could better organize and help people read it. Maybe have your headers as the blue of your character - maybe increased size and/or bold - and the content as black.

Check on the story as well. While the concept is good, it obviously needs proofreading. After that, try adding some more detail. Stuff like describing the experiment chamber and where he ran off to and how he came upon the RHG.

And lastly, you're missing your hit list. ;)
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Aug 24, 2015 9:51 PM #1398894
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Solid RHG. I've always liked Pyro over Iris (just saying).

The page is well laid out, just maybe some better headers than just adding - between the words could better organize and help people read it. Maybe have your headers as the blue of your character - maybe increased size and/or bold - and the content as black.

Check on the story as well. While the concept is good, it obviously needs proofreading. After that, try adding some more detail. Stuff like describing the experiment chamber and where he ran off to and how he came upon the RHG.

And lastly, you're missing your hit list. ;)

Im considering that and I dont wanna add a hit list cuz im nice.
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Aug 30, 2015 2:29 AM #1400362
did u use pivot or flash
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Aug 30, 2015 3:35 AM #1400383
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did u use pivot or flash

I animate with Pivot Animator
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Sep 3, 2015 8:44 AM #1401559
ok
||UPDATE||
-Took off the Second Life skill since its too op and seems stupid
-Added the fact that he is not a normal human and that he cant take a life threatening wound and not die from it.(it means he can take a shot in the head without dying or something of the sort)
-Took off my Second Life Demo
Im gonna change his story abit soon and put more details into it
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Sep 13, 2015 4:03 AM #1403313
~ANOTHER UPDATE~
-Changed the story
-Added Personality section
-Removed additional stories
thats all I think
I wanna fight someone T^T
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Sep 13, 2015 4:26 AM #1403315
Kewl...
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Sep 13, 2015 10:50 AM #1403332
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~ANOTHER UPDATE~
-Changed the story
-Added Personality section
-Removed additional stories
thats all I think
I wanna fight someone T^T


This guy XD
Challenge someone on TDD or Pivotanimation man.
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Sep 13, 2015 11:21 AM #1403334
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This guy XD
Challenge someone on TDD or Pivotanimation man.

I gave up on pivot forums so dont even bother even letting me go back to any of them
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Sep 13, 2015 2:41 PM #1403354
Wait, why?
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Sep 15, 2015 11:48 AM #1403688
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Wait, why?

its a long story.basically I just got shunned and insulted in the shadows thats all
T^T
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Sep 15, 2015 1:05 PM #1403697
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Wait, why?

Poor chap got his feelings hurt. Tis a pretty long story tho.
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Sep 15, 2015 1:57 PM #1403701
Ooohoho... right off the bat I can tell that our characters would not get a long. At....all lol
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