~//||Pyro||\\~
Started by: ~//Styrx Rix\\~ | Replies: 198 | Views: 26,479
~//Styrx Rix\\~2Posts: 537
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View Profile to be honest i didn't feel Iris. i always thought Pyro was your main dude, glad to see him back.
yeah i didnt feel it either.
THANKS GOD U REVIVED PYRO!!!!i didn't want to remake the support sig,to bussy ;º;
lol you lazy bum
Hurray, you revived Pyro! So are you now going to change your profile pic back into Pyro now?
Yeah I will.just making new pics thats all
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View Profile Solid RHG. I've always liked Pyro over Iris (just saying).
The page is well laid out, just maybe some better headers than just adding - between the words could better organize and help people read it. Maybe have your headers as the blue of your character - maybe increased size and/or bold - and the content as black.
Check on the story as well. While the concept is good, it obviously needs proofreading. After that, try adding some more detail. Stuff like describing the experiment chamber and where he ran off to and how he came upon the RHG.
And lastly, you're missing your hit list. ;)
~//Styrx Rix\\~2Posts: 537
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View Profile Solid RHG. I've always liked Pyro over Iris (just saying).
The page is well laid out, just maybe some better headers than just adding - between the words could better organize and help people read it. Maybe have your headers as the blue of your character - maybe increased size and/or bold - and the content as black.
Check on the story as well. While the concept is good, it obviously needs proofreading. After that, try adding some more detail. Stuff like describing the experiment chamber and where he ran off to and how he came upon the RHG.
And lastly, you're missing your hit list. ;)
Im considering that and I dont wanna add a hit list cuz im nice.
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View Profile ~//Styrx Rix\\~2Posts: 537
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View Profile did u use pivot or flash
I animate with Pivot Animator
~//Styrx Rix\\~2Posts: 537
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View Profile ok
||UPDATE||
-Took off the Second Life skill since its too op and seems stupid
-Added the fact that he is not a normal human and that he cant take a life threatening wound and not die from it.(it means he can take a shot in the head without dying or something of the sort)
-Took off my Second Life Demo
Im gonna change his story abit soon and put more details into it
~//Styrx Rix\\~2Posts: 537
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View Profile ~ANOTHER UPDATE~
-Changed the story
-Added Personality section
-Removed additional stories
thats all I think
I wanna fight someone T^T
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View Profile ~ANOTHER UPDATE~
-Changed the story
-Added Personality section
-Removed additional stories
thats all I think
I wanna fight someone T^T
This guy XD
Challenge someone on TDD or Pivotanimation man.
~//Styrx Rix\\~2Posts: 537
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View Profile This guy XD
Challenge someone on TDD or Pivotanimation man.
I gave up on pivot forums so dont even bother even letting me go back to any of them
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View Profile ~//Styrx Rix\\~2Posts: 537
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View Profile Wait, why?
its a long story.basically I just got shunned and insulted in the shadows thats all
T^T
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View Profile Wait, why?
Poor chap got his feelings hurt. Tis a pretty long story tho.
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View Profile Ooohoho... right off the bat I can tell that our characters would not get a long. At....all lol