Just gunna post some stuff here..






C+C and stuff is appreciated
thx :3

Mind if I give critiques? c:

First of all, I love the sketchy lineart- it really works well for the purposes of this picture. You also seem to be very skilled in clothing folds (especially on the shirt and sleeves, wow!), and the smokey effects look really good.

However, considering the location and lighting- in an alleyway, with that smoke around, it might benefit your picture if you did more shadows/ had more contrast. On top of that, anatomy-wise, I think the neck and torso might be a little too long, proportional to the head and arm sizes. Also, the jacket seems a little too... flowy? Like, jackets are normally made of thicker, heavier, or stuffed materials in order to hold in heat, but outside of the sleeves, the jacket looks as flowy as a loose cloak, and doesn't have any folds in it.

Overall, I really like your picture! It's so cool, in my opinion, to see RHGs in a non-stick figure form. XD

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This is awesome man..like the first one the most..

You should focus on the eyes a little, all three of these just have dead facial expressions.

Quote from Charry

You should focus on the eyes a little, all three of these just have dead facial expressions.

I agree with this. they look like they are about to go When They Cry on someone.

bumpity bump bump~

Added another pic, I tried to get the facial expression to not look 'dead' as Charry pointed out.
what do you think?

Hey xiao..please make me some of those :3

Quote from Terroarc

Hey xiao..please make me some of those :3

Maybe.. Depends on what you want, also usually when I draw something for someone else it turn out bad and I'm not happ with it so it might take a while for me to make something I'm happy with.

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