Kala the Graffiti Artist

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Sep 23, 2015 9:16 AM #1405174
Kala(Kah - la)Matina
"I may not be battle born, but I will fight to the very end - no matter the cost."

"Art is my essence, but it shall be your demise.


Nickname: Kal(Cal), Mat, Tina
Age: 16
Origins: India
Gender: Female
Height: 143 cm
Weight: 24kg
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Personality
She's flexible and able to squeeze into and out of tight spaces. Kala is a pretty decent hand to hand combater. She has a strong sense for survival. Kala is also a left hander.
Kala is rarely seen afraid of anything, which can make her hot headed and irrational.
She's street smart, thinks relatively well- aannd almost zero mannerism. She often gets into fights and its usually because she wants to.

Kala has picked up several skills from living the street life - being very observant, picking up things that most people won't notice. She wouldn't mind killing someone for defence. She rides a purple skateboard with thick blue letters which spell out her name. The skateboard has leave a trail of purple, red and green light behind her. She only uses these to travel to places.

Extensive habits
She is mostly found in high spots. She knows she is slightly weaker than most gladiators as opponents would be better equipped. Thus in battles is constantly on the move, jumping around or ducking, spinning, crawling etc. Kala never moves in a straight line instead, weaving to the side every few moments. When in hand to hand combat, she always has her hands in front of her, slightly bent. Kala usually uses her elbows, side of palms, base of feet and knees to attack. Her style of fighting follows that of a wolf - attacking and then drawing back before coming back in again. She does a lot of feigning to keep her opponent on his/her toes.

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Appearance
Kala is dark skinned and wears blue jeans with tears here and there. She wears a blue hoodie with a long sleeved purple top beneath. She wears dark blue gloves which have dark purple stripes. A brown buckle with sometimes a green cloth wrapping around her waist from underneath the belt, leaving a trail of translucent cloth around her legs which reaches all the way to her ankles(like a waist cape) She doesn't wear shoes or socks, instead going around bare foot.

Leather straps cross her body and more wrapping her right ankle. The leather straps have slots in them to contain her weapons. She has decorated metal circling her elbows down to her wrists.
She has cyan eyes and a scar running from her ear to her chin, hidden by her black hair which frames her face, trailing all the way to her thighs. A blue streak hangs near her bangs which are constantly in her eyes.
On her left leg, underneath her jeans, there are tattoos lined in a straight row and patterns curling round the rest of her leg. Her right ankle has her name tattooed on it and her left shoulder is a string of numbers.

With make up, she would have 3 purple dots tracing her right eye. Red swirls her cheeks in patterns. Green eyeliner lines her eyes and She wears a blue cloth around her nose and mouth. She wears a red head wrap, hiding her bun-ed up hair. These are used only when she goes out to do graffiti.
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Weaknesses
- She has a limited amount of C.G.S.C. and may run out of them in the middle of a battle.
- Kala tends to talk, taunt and laugh too much which makes her unfocused.
- Kala has a quick temper, getting angry easily which also makes her clumsy.
- She doesn't fight well against far ranged fighters as most of her weapons are closed range.
- Everything she sprays with a Purple can, moves slower and is not as perfect and effective as the real thing. (E.g. a gun may not have the same fire power - bullets may travel slower and a table may break easier than a real table.)
- She has to shake each can at least 4 times to use them.
- Sometimes she closes her eyes to properly visualize the object - this may shut her off from her surroundings and interrupting her in the middle of a "blind creation" can cause her to break her focus and be confused for a moment. It also stops her from completing her creation.
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History
Kala was born in India on the streets. Her life from the start was poverty. She struggled to survive at her young age. She was raised by a group of young street kids which fought to live in their cruel environment. She has no idea where her parents are.
She found a passion for art and music and scraped together her money to buy art supplies. She did graffiti art everywhere until was caught. Sent to a foster home several times and each time she ran away, unaccustomed to city life and feeling the need to be wild and free. She broke several laws and was sent to juvie almost 13 times by the time she reached age 9.

She finally broke away from her 6 foster home when she was 10 and went back to the streets. She found other ways of earning money, by working for gang bosses, playing music on the street, and to even do graffiti art for people.
Then, on her 14 birthday, she tried to save a common magician from a gunman. Although she failed, the magician passed on his powers to her with his dying breath, to thank her for her good intentions.
With her new found power, and a little convincing from her friends, she decided to enter the RHG. She needed weapons and so modified her spray cans. Deep down, Kala believes by fighting, she is somehow avenging the deaths of her friends as well as possibly finding her parents.

Friends:
Conner - the currently 28 year old who helped street kids survive. He invited Kala into a street 'home' and played a major part in getting off the streets and into the battlefield.
Phillip - He's Conner's younger brother by 4 years. Kala's buddy who helped in her learning. They often went out on scouting missions together.
Morial - The 21 year old man who taught her how to play instruments. He owns a music store and a house above. She often comes around for visits. He is like a big brother to her.
Orio - An 18 year old fellow graffiti artist like her. He's the one who also taught her how to shoot. There is a possibility of a relationship that Kala is too unsure to approach.
Wolfe - An old juvie mate she made friends with. They now just hang out and talk.
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Demonstrations (Click to Show)

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Wins /Loses / Forfeits /Draws : 0 /0 /0 /0
Completed Battles - None

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Sep 23, 2015 9:29 AM #1405179
-Martial Artist
-Athletic
-Ambidexterity
-Skilled at Larceny
-Street-smarts and strategist
-Sharp-eyed
-Blade Fighter
-Rocket Skateboard
-Mechanic Skills
-Artifact Daggers (passed down through generations)
(and finally)
-A magic spray can

I thought this was supposed to be an artist wRHG? Well yeah technically, but this seems like a Mary Sue with tons of tacked-on abilities and traits. Personality alone and you've added stuff that belongs to the ability section of an adventurer demigod. Once again you've hit the conundrum, adding so many tiny bits that it overshadowed the supposed gimmick of the character: Her magic spray can, which alone is already enough.
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Sep 23, 2015 10:33 AM #1405193
I like it I like it good job *claps*
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Sep 23, 2015 11:55 AM #1405202
Good concept, but still a toolbox.
Maybe you can do something about that?
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Sep 23, 2015 12:18 PM #1405209
I'm fine with the multiple weapons n stuff but just don't be like "oh your character has fire? Well this spray can can shoot WATER" like no, just end your career
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Sep 24, 2015 12:51 AM #1405340
Just taking a brief look-over of the character I only have one question.
Why does something poisonous to others make her stronger?
Other than that, I like the unique spin of a graffiti artist using materialization with their creations.
Otherwise... everything else feels rushed and less complete. My suggestion is just to improve this page frequently and gradually over time till it becomes a complete character.
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Sep 24, 2015 1:59 AM #1405357
Quote from Malacal
Just taking a brief look-over of the character I only have one question.
Why does something poisonous to others make her stronger?
Other than that, I like the unique spin of a graffiti artist using materialization with their creations.
Otherwise... everything else feels rushed and less complete. My suggestion is just to improve this page frequently and gradually over time till it becomes a complete character.

Well... Those cans are magical... O.o"
I do intend to improve it. It was a really old idea that I dug up and decided it was better than my prev one. So there's definitely lots of tweakings to do. Thanks for all the feedback guys.
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Oct 20, 2015 11:16 AM #1409773
UPDATE

Layout has been updated
Personality has been updated
Weapons has been updated
Weakness has been updated
History has been updated.
Extensive habits has been added
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Oct 21, 2015 1:59 AM #1409844
You almost gave me a stroke.
Now I just need to clarify... is that Comic Sans?
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Oct 21, 2015 2:50 AM #1409848
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You almost gave me a stroke.
Now I just need to clarify... is that Comic Sans?


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Oct 21, 2015 3:53 AM #1409858
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You're not stealthy.
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Oct 21, 2015 4:03 AM #1409861
Well, majority of it is.
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Oct 21, 2015 3:12 PM #1409975
COMIC SAAAAAAAANS

Colored Graffiti Spray Cans (C.G.S.C.)


is the initialism really needed

Also the powers seem a bit toolboxy. Why would she need cans to poison and for self-enhancement? And I get the smoke bomb part of the blue one, but the rest of it is, eeeh.

If you want speed, use the purple can to conjure up a scooter or something. Defence? Conjure up a wall or shield. It's still one of those shitey overly malleable powers, though. Might as well have a magic hat you can take near enough anything that you will ever need out of whenever you want it.
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Oct 21, 2015 8:19 PM #1410036
I'll fight you once I finish my Demo :3
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Oct 22, 2015 2:04 AM #1410102
Quote from RichardLongflop
COMIC SAAAAAAAANS



is the initialism really needed

Also the powers seem a bit toolboxy. Why would she need cans to poison and for self-enhancement? And I get the smoke bomb part of the blue one, but the rest of it is, eeeh.

If you want speed, use the purple can to conjure up a scooter or something. Defence? Conjure up a wall or shield. It's still one of those shitey overly malleable powers, though. Might as well have a magic hat you can take near enough anything that you will ever need out of whenever you want it.

Valid points... Thanks! ^.^

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I'll fight you once I finish my Demo :3


Cool.