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Kai Havoc: King of Chaos

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Dec 12, 2015 9:20 AM #1422537
Kai Havoc

Aliases:
Anarchy, King of Chaos, The Beast

Anarchy courses through my veins...

Age: 19

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Dezi/sorrowfulrage
A demon and a human, he's got the best of both worlds!
Levi/ignusburns
He's a little too optimistic for my taste, I'll crush his bones.
maguma/thechosengamer
Nothing more than the dirt I walk on.

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Dec 12, 2015 11:38 AM #1422540
Interesting wRHG, to say the least. I'm not a huge fan of "ultimate forms" but don't let me stop you.

Just need to clarify something. How does being weak and therefore easily hurt (but not, say, dead) a weakness if an incredible healing factor is a strength? Let's say I slice through his limbs. He screams, but regenerates everything in a matter of seconds; he becomes pissed off, and becomes a Wyvern.

Also, if you're writing a story please don't center it. It makes it incredibly hard to read.
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Dec 12, 2015 1:41 PM #1422556
Glad to see more wRHG contenders springing up :D

I too am not a fan of low durability as a primary weakness, but it IS your character and I can't really say he's overpowered aside from the seemingly meaty health recovery.
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Dec 12, 2015 8:06 PM #1422604
So he's basically a super glass cannon
How does he use his blades, and how are they generated? Is there a limit and how much can be generate at a time.
What are the limits of anarchy form and his healing.
Questions to consider.
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Dec 12, 2015 9:27 PM #1422619
sorry, i forgot to clarify that his healing powers are only minor. So say if he were to take a few light hits or cuts, he could regenerate. Whereas normally he cannot heal much more than that. His blades are nearly infinite, but he becomes slower the more blades he is using. This was only a rough draft, so try not to get to technical on the details. I will fix his demo so it is not centered. ;)
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Dec 12, 2015 10:36 PM #1422635
If he's supposed to be a character that you don't like and yet still feel sorry for, then very well done, if he should join the Night Creatures, maybe he could be friends with the Time Hunter? I like friendships between characters... ^_^
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Dec 12, 2015 10:41 PM #1422636
totally man! Though he is a bit dark and cynical, you could be the light humorous guy who keeps him motivated. <(*~*)>
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Dec 12, 2015 10:43 PM #1422637
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totally man! Though he is a bit dark and cynical, you could be the light humorous guy who keeps him motivated. <(*~*)>


Indeed! I love it when different characters get along! \(^_^)/
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Dec 13, 2015 12:29 AM #1422655
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Indeed! I love it when different characters get along! \(^_^)/


Such positive energy here =u= Me likey
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Dec 13, 2015 7:27 AM #1422703
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Such positive energy here =u= Me likey


Now it's time for me to say that came off super creepy... XD
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Dec 15, 2015 6:04 AM #1423019
Wow this character is really cool. I agree with Ignus, relationships between characters is a really awesome thing!

I'm doing my best to adopt your guys' style of typing so don't be offended if i type something similar to you! Think of it as praise!
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Dec 15, 2015 6:17 AM #1423025
Thanks Aitris! ^-^ do you think that you'll make one after you introduce yourself? Oh and btw, is it okay if I call you Ez?
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Dec 17, 2015 2:41 PM #1423474
Hi! I'd like to ask questions about your character. If you don't answer/ignore all of this, that's okay I guess. ^_^ however, I only mean to clarify things about your character so don't feel so bad. Besides, since you're on my hitlist, might as well get to know Kai more right? We should be all good here. Shall we?
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If you read it all the way to the end, good for you! If you don't decide to tweak Kai a little to elaborate more that's just fine. There's really nothing wrong with you char really but if you wanna be twitchy about it like me... :) Thank you for taking your time to bother with this tiny little speck of being on earth. Have a nice day~
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Dec 17, 2015 3:05 PM #1423485
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Hi! I'd like to ask questions about your character. If you don't answer/ignore all of this, that's okay I guess. ^_^ however, I only mean to clarify things about your character so don't feel so bad. Besides, since you're on my hitlist, might as well get to know Kai more right? We should be all good here. Shall we?
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If you read it all the way to the end, good for you! If you don't decide to tweak Kai a little to elaborate more that's just fine. There's really nothing wrong with you char really but if you wanna be twitchy about it like me... :) Thank you for taking your time to bother with this tiny little speck of being on earth. Have a nice day~


First off, me, being one of the guys who helped nightshade come up with this character (kind of...) I would say, he's told me that this is a first draft, and he plans to expand upon it soon, you mentioned some good points, Rage, he's been asked these questions before. And as for Kai being an arrogant jerk and killing that innocent woman, that's exactly the kind of person he is...
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Dec 17, 2015 4:58 PM #1423506
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First off, me, being one of the guys who helped nightshade come up with this character (kind of...) I would say, he's told me that this is a first draft, and he plans to expand upon it soon, you mentioned some good points, Rage, he's been asked these questions before. And as for Kai being an arrogant jerk and killing that innocent woman, that's exactly the kind of person he is...


I honestly don't agree with this wRHG drafting thing. You can make an wRHG as pretty sounding and well formatted as you want, but you really aren't going to understand them until they get into a fight and you and other people try to write them. For instance, I've changed my new wRHG so much that, the original posts commenting on her aren't even relevant anymore.

Plus constantly maintaining and refactoring the wRHG, dropping what doesn't work and keeping what does, increases the likelyhood that you'll graduate from greenhorn to regular to veteran to Lobotomizer.
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