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Ergos, the energy priest.

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Apr 22, 2016 11:00 PM #1446994
Fere libenter homines, id quod volunt, credunt - Men just believe, what they want to believe.


Name: Nathan Kurogane, but he likes his nickname Ergos
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Height: 6, 0 ft. /183 cm
Race:Kitsune demigod (he thinks that he’s human)
Family: Daisy/Tsuki (Mom/Kitsune Goddess), Clay (Deceased Dad/ human Blacksmith, he’s with his wife at heaven), two deceased younger brothers (with their parent at heaven)
Alignment: True neutral (though that he acts more as a lawful good)
Romantic status: single, he wants to find his spiritual partner but he doesn’t think that he’s ready for it
Sexual preference: Demisexual. He only falls in love with people that he trust deeply. (But like more men)
Clan: Sanctuary

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Points: 1/0/0/0

Availability:
No, battling Verdan Redwood

Fanatic list (His favorites gladiators)
Light (Devi)
Zoe the fallen angel (Cruel)
Aiba (Ken_Rou)
Lucario, The Blue Brawler (Xate)
Dex Omni (Kamiroo Wolf)

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I'm really new, so i hope you liked it
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Apr 23, 2016 8:05 AM #1447028
Wow, pretty nice wRHG character. I love it.

Oyeah, what's the difference between Kitsune and Megitsune? *omg* Is it some kind of youkai or something?
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Apr 23, 2016 2:17 PM #1447047
Loving the abilities! The "modes" seem a tad unnecessary though ;o
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Apr 23, 2016 3:20 PM #1447055
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Loving the abilities! The "modes" seem a tad unnecessary though ;o


Well, the "modes" are actually part of his story, every "mode" is connected to his kitsune blood, yeah I know that they are like unnecessary, but "he" needs to discover his kitsune blood, that's why

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Wow, pretty nice wRHG character. I love it.

Oyeah, what's the difference between Kitsune and Megitsune? *omg* Is it some kind of youkai or something?


Yeah, kitsune are Youkai and I think that you are saying Nogitsune cause megitsune is just a term for female kitsune, a kitsune is a Fox spirit that can shape shift into human, control energy at will and depending to their element can control one, also can make very real illusions
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Apr 23, 2016 10:20 PM #1447095
Okay. So, good on you for creating a decent character as a newbie. You have potential.

Now, here's some advice to help you get moving on up the ladder among the "gladiators" here:

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If you look at most of the top writers/characters here, the gladiators have only 3-5 abilities (which may or may not have other effects), and well fleshed-out battles that go far beyond "just" the actual combat. If you follow their examples, you will surely make a great writer!

Oh, and one more thing...

Welcome to the wRHG!
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Apr 23, 2016 11:36 PM #1447097
Quote from Alphaeus
Okay. So, good on you for creating a decent character as a newbie. You have potential.

Now, here's some advice to help you get moving on up the ladder among the "gladiators" here:

Some Constructive Criticism (Click to Show)


If you look at most of the top writers/characters here, the gladiators have only 3-5 abilities (which may or may not have other effects), and well fleshed-out battles that go far beyond "just" the actual combat. If you follow their examples, you will surely make a great writer!

Oh, and one more thing...

Welcome to the wRHG!


yeah, haha, i'm actually an expert writer in my native language (that is spanish as i'm dominican) i wanted to improve my writing skills in english, when i saw this i just saw an opportunity, also i will edit some things of my gladiator (the shield and healing) cause i see it as too much for him, i was thinking in a longe range like all rounder not an OP God of sharp shooters

also...
Thanks haha
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May 2, 2016 11:46 PM #1447753
Hi, if anyone would want a partner for a training wRHG battle, i'm available
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May 24, 2016 2:32 AM #1449551
Nice RHG!
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May 25, 2016 5:55 AM #1449627
Wow impressive. I'm bilingual as well, but spanish is my second language. That being said, I could never effectively write in spanish the way I do in english. Good on you.

Alph covered everything I wanted to say. Over all, interesting character with room to grow as a writer. Good luck.
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Jun 5, 2016 7:30 PM #1450540
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One win added!

Ergos is part of the Sanctuary now!
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Jun 14, 2016 9:26 PM #1451189
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One win added!

Ergos is part of the Sanctuary now!


Nice job Ergos, you got what you wanted -_-.
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Jun 14, 2016 11:27 PM #1451196
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Nice job Ergos, you got what you wanted -_-.


Come on bud, I think I speak on behalf of the Writer's Lounge when I ask you this, but please just try to get along with people here. Most of them are really nice people and definitely worth getting to know. You're radiating negativity though, and negativity will by most people always be answered with more negativity.

I know you didn't have such a glorious start here with all these people barging into your character thread like that, though that was really just a big pile of misunderstanding gone wrong. There's no no need to barge into shadowmirror's thread like this. Don't be jealous! Come on, be happy for him.


I've put in quite an effort to keep the older peeps of the Writer's Lounge off of your back, and I feel that to some degree my words have been heard by them. So it'd be a nice and kind gesture if you proved them wrong about you.

Alas, I doubt my words will have much effect but I still feel as if it needs to be said. Don't take any of this too personally, I'm not trying to get on your back about this whole matter, but your behaviour as a whole in the Writer's Lounge hasn't been the nicest and I hope you can still change that.
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Jun 15, 2016 1:53 AM #1451198
Quote from Najenda
Nice job Ergos, you got what you wanted -_-.


Come on, Najenda, you're acting like a party pooper!
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Jun 15, 2016 2:00 AM #1451199
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Nice job Ergos, you got what you wanted -_-.


Thanks, I suppose

Come on bud, I think I speak on behalf of the Writer's Lounge when I ask you this, but please just try to get along with people here. Most of them are really nice people and definitely worth getting to know. You're radiating negativity though, and negativity will by most people always be answered with more negativity.

I know you didn't have such a glorious start here with all these people barging into your character thread like that, though that was really just a big pile of misunderstanding gone wrong. There's no no need to barge into shadowmirror's thread like this. Don't be jealous! Come on, be happy for him.


I've put in quite an effort to keep the older peeps of the Writer's Lounge off of your back, and I feel that to some degree my words have been heard by them. So it'd be a nice and kind gesture if you proved them wrong about you.

Alas, I doubt my words will have much effect but I still feel as if it needs to be said. Don't take any of this too personally, I'm not trying to get on your back about this whole matter, but your behaviour as a whole in the Writer's Lounge hasn't been the nicest and I hope you can still change that.


it's ok Vern, I fought with all my strength (writing skills) as the other gladiators and won, but I'm just here to improve my writing skills and to have fun, I don't care about win or lose or being popular here, you need to accept what the life has to give you, even if it's a bad thing
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Jun 15, 2016 2:13 PM #1451228
Shadow, you do realize I was talking to Najenda right? Your response seems to be put in such a way as if you were the one addressed, so I don't know how that is meant to be a response to what I said to Najenda.
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